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    Family- A short story (Part 2)

    Meanwhile…

    Tina had spent a few hours this morning at Angelica’s school in the parking lot crying her eyes out. She was flabbergasted at the way Bette had treated her over the phone, her worst fears had played out right in front of her, Bette was beginning to treat her like a fan instead of a wife. This revelation broke Tina down into pieces, she needed to go somewhere and clear her head but she couldn’t because she still had to pick Angelica up from school later today. The word school lingered in her mind for a minute, Tina realized that she haven’t been checking up on Angelica’s school work lately, she made a mental note to do just that when she came back later to pick her up. Angelica had always been a good student, plus all of Angie’s teachers knew her and Bette personally from frequent visits, so if anything was ever wrong she would have heard something by now so she quickly brush that thought off.

    After many thoughts of where to head, Tina found herself parked outside Alice’s house. She didn’t want to go home, there were just too many thoughts of her wife, thoughts that was quickly turning into memories. It seemed like forever since they were all lounging around the house as a family, since she was able to make love to her wife, since the sound of laughter could be heard throughout the house. Now the house had a feeling of loneliness, a feeling of sorrow, there was no peace, no happiness, nothing. Angelica was barely speaking to her, Bette was M.I.A, she felt alone. That home was once her sanctuary but now days it feel like her mortuary, a home for the dead, quiet with no life at all.

    Tina parked and exit the car walking up to Alice’s front door. She was about to knock but decided against it and turned to walk away but since Alice was making her way off the door, she spotted Tina and called her name.

    Alice: Tina?

    When Tina turned around it was written all over her face, no questions needed to be asked…she was heartbroken.

    Los Angeles, The View…

    Barbara: Please welcome the star of the upcoming movie ”Walk Among the Valley” the one and only Bette Porter.

    Comments

    1. Ok wow this is fantastic, but you have to post very soon please, please , please…… thanks for your story!!!! I hope Bette wake up from her fame ride, before it is to late. Pps

    2. Very good written but the cliffhanger is not good for my health! I do hope that the next chapter is finished already and you also did the editing part. So the only thing you need to do is post………..
      Like reading your stories. Keep them coming.

    3. You know how happy I am to see an
      update sua.Estou with a huge smile on his face :) :) :) :).
      Unfortunately Bette is infected with the evil that happens
      with some Hollywood stars “stardom”, it is a pity
      because his family is falling apart in front of him, but
      she is so blind with stardom that she does not see isso.Como
      think Tina will feel when watching the story in which
      Bette not give credit to his wife for having their impossionado
      career? with all sure will not like, and that in Angel
      Through it all, is becoming a selfish teenager is
      irresponsável.Bette open eye for when you least
      realize you will lose your family is the most precious
      we have.
      Great story.
      All Constellation TN1.
      Bear Hug !!

    4. Fantastic chapter. I really can’t believe what is happening, the family is falling apart.

      Bette has to change her attitude very fast before she loses her family. It is a shame how fame can change someone so terrible.

      She doesn’t see how her so called fame is affecting her daughter and wife. Please let someone slab some sense in her.

      Can you please update again asap? ! You can’t leave us hanging after that ending.

      Please accept my apologize for not commenting on the first chapter.

    5. Wow, Bette is really going off the rails with her monumental ego, her bit of fame has certainly gone to her head. And not to give credit to Tina is truly shameful. She should listen to what James is telling her. She will lose all that is important, her family because Tina is very tired of her nonsense. Bette had better wake up. Thanks for posting.

    6. Thank you everyone for reading this chapter. I know Bette is probably pissing everyone off lol but I think she will get it together real soon and see what’s important, at least I hope. I know I been away for a minute but I’m so glad to see some of my same readers continuing to my follow my stories, I really appreciate y’all and for the new readers I’m grateful as well. Thanks a lot and silent readers you are not forgotten also. Thank you

    7. Lordhavemercy!…youse awritin’ agin!..I’s a goin’ crazy as a shithouse rat!..I took up singing to pass da time…but I found out I cudnt even carry a tune in a bucket!…glad to seeya posting agin n top notch!…and Bette?…she’s a gittin’ ready for a rude awakening..yessum she is…sparks are gonna fly like da fourth of July!..boom!..and Angelica? Whadda hale she thank she’s a doin’?..she’s amakin’ me as nervous as a long tail cat in a roomful a rockin’ chairs!..git’er did my fav!…and don’t stay away too long ya hear?….Lubya!…

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