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Family Woman (Chapter 11)
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Tina cautiously stepped over to the bed, looking Bette in the eye as she lowered herself to sit. She was obviously worried for what she might be told. Maybe Bette was sick, or there was a dark secret – was she having an affair?
“I haven’t done anything to hurt you,” Bette assured her, stepping over and sitting next to her. “I just … something’s happened.”
Tina didn’t know what to say so she just nodded.
Bette took a moment to think of how to word it. “I … woke up … in this bed with you one morning,” she said quietly, smoothing her hand over the comforters. “… And I didn’t know who I was.”
Tina brought her hand up to her face. “Bette, we all feel a little lost some-”
“Please,” Bette insisted, taking Tina’s hand and drawing her attention immediately. “Let me finish.”
Nodding seriously, Tina accepted the interruption.
“Literally,” Bette said, swallowing hard and getting to her feet again. “I mean … I had my own, miserable life in this beautiful apartment. I had an incredible job, climbing up the corporate ladder, and more money than I knew what to do with. I had everything.” Then she turned and looked at Tina again. “… Everything but you. And I know this is totally unbelievable, and impossible – I know that! But I’m telling you. One morning, I woke up, and I was here. I was … married. I was … a mother … I was living this life that I had no idea was even possible.” She rushed quickly to Tina’s side again. “But T … I had no idea, all this time, of what I was missing. How much I would lose when I got on that plane at the airport.” She was starting to tear up again, and her breath caught in her throat for a moment. “I had no idea what losing you would mean. For both of us. It was the worst mistake of my life, and now I see just how absolutely stupid I was. I see it! I do. And all I want is to stay here with you and Angelica. I’m sorry that none of this makes any sense, and I understand if you think I’m crazy, but … it’s the truth.” She held Tina’s hands and couldn’t stop her emotions from taking over. “I don’t want to leave … I don’t want to be taken away. I love you so much …”
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I was so excited when I saw you’d posted – I was like Angie on Christmas morning! That was a fantastic chapter. You manage to write a piece that is heart-rending and yet also funny and sexy (VERY sexy!) I loved how Tina put herself in Bette’s position and was so trusting of what she was telling her, and I seriously loved the ending. I can’t wait for the next chapter, even though I’m having a mini sulk because it is the final one! Thank you!
Excellent choice for Bette’s landing in time!
What a beautiful twist! I was hoping you were going that way with this story but wasn’t sure. I have to say I will hate to see this story end, but as I’ve said to you before school has to come first. Your story has taken me on a wonderful ride. I can’t wait to read how it ends. Thank you.
Yes! This is sooo sweet, they’ll get all the time together! Glad you decided to go with this twist, hope everything will turn out just great! Tnx for posting!
Wonderful job! I really love this story and can’t thank you enough for writing and sharing it with all of us. Great Job!
LOVE THE TWIST!!!CAN’T WAIT FOR THE REST
Bette is going home…This is great – just this morning I was thinking about this story and how much I missed it – but you are right; school has to come first – enjoy it!!! And hopefully we will be hearing from you soon with a new story.
Yeah Bette´s going home – perfect way for Bette´s travel back to Tina. I loved the honesty and love between them. Thank you for an awesome story.
I know you’re busy,i know you gave us a pretty long update…But, would it be too much to ask you for some update.. Now?
Oh wow, I loved this ending. I was wondering how this would end. Bette and Tina had to be together. Now, they can truly be together.
I’m really sorry,that this wonderful story comes to end.Finally Bette is going home.Looking forward to the next chapter.
OMG that was unexpected
B, that was a fantastic chapter. You’re da best! I’m so glad Bette has the chance to remedy her mistake and win back her girl. All the best with school and remember to have fun too.
loved this… i never saw the movie… will have to watch out for it now… i am sads your ending it after the next chapter… but school first…(See again working night has its benefits…)post when you can… don’t rush it…thx
That’s how I thought the movie should have gone. Thanks for such a great post! I love this story. I will be sad to see it end, but you’ve definitely improved on the movie.
Great story, lets hope Bette can fulfill both dreams… Love and the career she has always wanted…
Wow, I wasn’t expecting that! This is great. She gets a chance to do things differently this time around. I wonder if she will have her memory of everything that has happened forever or if she’ll forget it all and just go back to the younger version of Bette.
I confess I don’t want this story to end. I really love these versions of Bette and Tina – without all the heartbreak and angst and guilt. I will miss the relationship they have in this story– thanks! I think we’re gonna need a sequel sometime…just saying. No hurry. Looking forward to the last chapter.
Brilliant work, B! That was a most excellent twist! Good luck with the school thing – I’m with you on it-stats this quarter – ugh! Just keep on when you can!
Uuuh… Nice one Bii!! Now curious where the story goes, then what happen to T and Angie, and … I just still a bit overwhelmed by the complexity of the timelines and the sweetness connection between Bette and Tina.Overall… Looking forward to your next chapter!! :-D PS: thanks for posting regardless ur hectic schedule. And enjoy your schooldays! Might sounds lame now, but believe me that oneday you might look back and miss all those days.. And all those craziness of too much assignment too! :-p ha3
This is much better! She was back at the very beginning!..Hurry Bette!… GO HOME!
Just amazingly brilliant. Love the twist in the end. Excellent Love it and can’t wait for the next update. Will be so sad to see this end. thank you.
Absolutely Brilliant!! This has got to be one of the best stories I’ve read on here and believe me I’ve read hundreds! So gutted the next ones the last one though :( please tell me you’re writing something else to ease the pain ;)
Hey biissexi, It really is fab to have you back posting more of this amazing adventure. Bette and Tina were so honest that it hurt during this last chapter. The truth did set them free. It was so sweet and precious to have they simply spooning each other to demonstrate their love and attraction. Angelica was adorable and so cheeky jumping on her mommies on Christmas morning. I am so happy that they got to share event as a family. And now the end is near as Bette returns to that pivotal moment. I can’t wait to read more so please continue whenever you can. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Brilliant twist bi! I can’t wait for the next post. Everything is just beautiful, I can’t even pick out a favorite chapter or scene. Good luck in the new semester and hope you’ll have more time to post :)
Tina is so tender and loving to a confused BP. I love their interactions…and a little something-something. LOL! Thanks for telling an amazing tale…you rock!
Great story, really enjoyed reading it. Shame it couldn’t have lasted longer.
So happy to see your post and loved the twist! Love the way you’ve written their relationship and truly hate to see the story ending. Good luck with school and thanks for taking time to entertain us!
Great twist!! Love to see the way you end this!! Love it!!
Love it…
This is so good and awesome, love it!