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Family Woman (Chapter 11)
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They all rubbed their eyes as they walked to the door, Angelica being the most excited. “I bet Santa gave lots a presents!”
Bette and Tina chuckled. “Let’s go and see …” Bette let Angelica to her feet, and she nearly ran down the hall before her mothers.
“PRESENTS!!!”
“Are you still …”
“Yeah, I’m still insane.”
Tina chuckled, resting her head on Bette’s shoulder. “Just checking.”
Angelica waited, which seemed impossible, before starting into her many presents. She was spoiled, and Bette and Tina knew it, but she never acted that way. They loved to treat her whenever they could, and watching her joy brought them a deeper joy to share.
“What’s that one? It looks reeeally cool,” Tina smiled, leaning against Bette as Angelica wiggled her way up to it and then shook it as hard as she could.
“Thank god nothing’s breakable,” Bette whispered to her, kissing Tina’s head and finally moving over to the couch. “Uhh …”
“Tired?” Tina asked, taking Bette’s hand and kissing it when she saw her nod. “You’re okay though, right?”
“I’m invincible,” Bette chuckled, dropping her head back in a way that left Tina utterly unconvinced.
“Uh huh. Ooh look! Look how excited she is, baby.” She nudged Bette who quickly picked her head up and enjoyed in the adorable scene before them.
After what seemed like an eternity of Angelica’s presents, Tina turned to Bette while their little girl played with all of her toys. “I know you might not have had any time to get me a present, so I’m not expecting anything … but …”
“Oh, well I guess I should return this then,” Bette smirked, lifting a cute little box into her hand, and then back down onto a small table behind the couch.
“No!” Tina gasped, as if Bette really would return it. “No … I wanna see what you got me.”
“I don’t know …” Bette teased, moving it in her hand until Tina reached over and took it in hers.
“What is it?”
“Open it and see,” Bette chuckled, watching Tina’s surprise and excitement when she opened the box to see a beautiful necklace, like the one she had always wanted. She’d mentioned it in passing, but had no idea Bette would have gone out to get it. The white gold twinkled at her, and she stared up at Bette. “How did you …”
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I was so excited when I saw you’d posted – I was like Angie on Christmas morning! That was a fantastic chapter. You manage to write a piece that is heart-rending and yet also funny and sexy (VERY sexy!) I loved how Tina put herself in Bette’s position and was so trusting of what she was telling her, and I seriously loved the ending. I can’t wait for the next chapter, even though I’m having a mini sulk because it is the final one! Thank you!
Excellent choice for Bette’s landing in time!
What a beautiful twist! I was hoping you were going that way with this story but wasn’t sure. I have to say I will hate to see this story end, but as I’ve said to you before school has to come first. Your story has taken me on a wonderful ride. I can’t wait to read how it ends. Thank you.
Yes! This is sooo sweet, they’ll get all the time together! Glad you decided to go with this twist, hope everything will turn out just great! Tnx for posting!
Wonderful job! I really love this story and can’t thank you enough for writing and sharing it with all of us. Great Job!
LOVE THE TWIST!!!CAN’T WAIT FOR THE REST
Bette is going home…This is great – just this morning I was thinking about this story and how much I missed it – but you are right; school has to come first – enjoy it!!! And hopefully we will be hearing from you soon with a new story.
Yeah Bette´s going home – perfect way for Bette´s travel back to Tina. I loved the honesty and love between them. Thank you for an awesome story.
I know you’re busy,i know you gave us a pretty long update…But, would it be too much to ask you for some update.. Now?
Oh wow, I loved this ending. I was wondering how this would end. Bette and Tina had to be together. Now, they can truly be together.
I’m really sorry,that this wonderful story comes to end.Finally Bette is going home.Looking forward to the next chapter.
OMG that was unexpected
B, that was a fantastic chapter. You’re da best! I’m so glad Bette has the chance to remedy her mistake and win back her girl. All the best with school and remember to have fun too.
loved this… i never saw the movie… will have to watch out for it now… i am sads your ending it after the next chapter… but school first…(See again working night has its benefits…)post when you can… don’t rush it…thx
That’s how I thought the movie should have gone. Thanks for such a great post! I love this story. I will be sad to see it end, but you’ve definitely improved on the movie.
Great story, lets hope Bette can fulfill both dreams… Love and the career she has always wanted…
Wow, I wasn’t expecting that! This is great. She gets a chance to do things differently this time around. I wonder if she will have her memory of everything that has happened forever or if she’ll forget it all and just go back to the younger version of Bette.
I confess I don’t want this story to end. I really love these versions of Bette and Tina – without all the heartbreak and angst and guilt. I will miss the relationship they have in this story– thanks! I think we’re gonna need a sequel sometime…just saying. No hurry. Looking forward to the last chapter.
Brilliant work, B! That was a most excellent twist! Good luck with the school thing – I’m with you on it-stats this quarter – ugh! Just keep on when you can!
Uuuh… Nice one Bii!! Now curious where the story goes, then what happen to T and Angie, and … I just still a bit overwhelmed by the complexity of the timelines and the sweetness connection between Bette and Tina.Overall… Looking forward to your next chapter!! :-D PS: thanks for posting regardless ur hectic schedule. And enjoy your schooldays! Might sounds lame now, but believe me that oneday you might look back and miss all those days.. And all those craziness of too much assignment too! :-p ha3
This is much better! She was back at the very beginning!..Hurry Bette!… GO HOME!
Just amazingly brilliant. Love the twist in the end. Excellent Love it and can’t wait for the next update. Will be so sad to see this end. thank you.
Absolutely Brilliant!! This has got to be one of the best stories I’ve read on here and believe me I’ve read hundreds! So gutted the next ones the last one though :( please tell me you’re writing something else to ease the pain ;)
Hey biissexi, It really is fab to have you back posting more of this amazing adventure. Bette and Tina were so honest that it hurt during this last chapter. The truth did set them free. It was so sweet and precious to have they simply spooning each other to demonstrate their love and attraction. Angelica was adorable and so cheeky jumping on her mommies on Christmas morning. I am so happy that they got to share event as a family. And now the end is near as Bette returns to that pivotal moment. I can’t wait to read more so please continue whenever you can. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Brilliant twist bi! I can’t wait for the next post. Everything is just beautiful, I can’t even pick out a favorite chapter or scene. Good luck in the new semester and hope you’ll have more time to post :)
Tina is so tender and loving to a confused BP. I love their interactions…and a little something-something. LOL! Thanks for telling an amazing tale…you rock!
Great story, really enjoyed reading it. Shame it couldn’t have lasted longer.
So happy to see your post and loved the twist! Love the way you’ve written their relationship and truly hate to see the story ending. Good luck with school and thanks for taking time to entertain us!
Great twist!! Love to see the way you end this!! Love it!!
Love it…
This is so good and awesome, love it!