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FEB FF CHALLENGE: A Time For Healing Fourth Final Chapter
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The trip to the Lightenings game was cool and Dana appreciated the gesture her friends tried to make. Bette had been there providing her with support and warmth. Tina ended up staying at home with Angelica, for two reasons one Angie was coming down with a cold and the other was she didn’t think Dana wanted her there. But the words that Dana had said to her was kept on repeat in her mind, causing her to become more unsettled then ever before.
The following day brought on swimming lessons for Angelica and some other kids. Bette was there with Angelica in the pool while a father and his son arrived. Bette noticed immediately Tina checking the father out. Bette tried not to let her hurt show on her face, but Helena was able to pick it up. She glanced at Tina who seemed to be fawning over the man.
“I don’t suppose you could get the kids something to drink Tina?” Helena asked breaking the staring contest of Tina and this new man. Tina looked at the pool and immediately realized that Bette was there as was Helena. She felt the guilt flood her and mumbled something and quickly left. The man made it into the pool for quick introductions.
“Hi I’m Henry and this is Mikey.”
“Helena and that over there is Wilson and this is Jung Li.”
“Bette. This is Angelica.” Henry smiled and inquired about where the two ladies lived.
“I live here with the blonde.” Bette tilted her head in the direction of Tina who was now coming out of the house with lemonade. Henry blinked and got a confused looked on his face. He had been certain the blonde had been flirting with him. Bette suddenly sick of all the bullshit happening between Tina and herself, decided she was no longer going to sit by and watch Tina float from one man to another. She was going to start putting up a fight.
“We’re partners. You know…” Bette suddenly leaned towards Henry and whispered the last word, “lesbians.” Henry nodded slowly not really understanding what was quite going on, but not questioning it. Tina came into the pool with cups of lemonade for the kids. She passed them out, smiling at Henry who gave her a confused smile. She then went over to Bette and Angelica and watched as Bette smiled at her. A large infectious Bette Porter smile. Tina blinked at the brunette in a confused fashion.
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(56 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
very beautiful, thankyou.
WOW that was heartbreaking. Bravo for Dana,she told Tina like it was, At least Tina can see some of the things that she has been doing and how wrong she was and is. thanks so must for this story.
That was heartbreaking pands! And very beautifully written…You’ve done brilliantly with this challenge…and I think you deserve to win it…you’ve definately got my vote…as soon as I get these tears all mopped up!!!
That was so beatiful and painful. It was so much more than sex with them, it was actually helping and getting each other through terrible times… How deeply they were able to affect the other for good… so wonderful. Thank you. (I’m actually tearing up, and I’m pretty much a robot when it comes to emotions)
Wow, wished you were writing this during the 3rd season. Amazing story, thank you.
Absolutely beautiful, pandamel. It must make it all worth while when you receive such heartfelt comments like jomarad’s. Thank you for sharing your lovely words with all of us.
Wow Pands…..I’m speechless….that was beautiful…Thank you for sharing.
A zillion stars – WOW doesn’t begin to say how moving and impactful this was. Thanks
:*( That was the ending I wanted. Thanks for writing it so beautifully
I just read this all at once, and it is indeed a beautiful story, Pands! Everyone so true to their characters, and so much love expressed in so many ways. I did sense something special when Bette showed Dana how to meditate–this was so much better than what we saw on the show. They should definitely hire you! Simply beautiful, kid!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wow.. pandamel, this was so beautiful and sad…
Absolutely heartingbreaking…yet so full of hope and love. Thank you…thank you.
I’m not a writer, I can’t express what I feel in words like you do, but if you could look in my eyes for just one moment you would know what this story did to me. I’ve saved it in a word document, I’ve printed it out so I can treasure it and read it every time I feel the need too. Thanks.
wow, that was just beautiful, you should have written that chapter for the show,it sure beats the shit ileane wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aww that was amazing, P… really really beautiful.. thank you for bringing this to us..
I agree with annieb69, I wish they’d used that on the show.
Thank you for this heartbreaking yet ever so beautiful story! I’ve read it from the day your posted the first chapter. I’m most grateful for you sharing this wonderful story of yours with us readers.
Wow that was amazing and beautiful, thank you for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon!!!!!!!!