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Feeling safe and wanted again – Chapter 35
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“I just needed to hear your voice. This case is killing me, it’s heartbreaking and devastating, I just needed to hear a kind voice.” Bette says.
“Aw, I’m sorry that you’re having a hard time with this case. I hope you’re close to catching him or her.” Tina says.
“We are…. They are only kids Tina, their whole life ahead of them and some sick monster is depriving them of that and the way he’s done it, it’s… I don’t think I’ll ever forget this case.” Bette says as she starts to cry. The reality of the case hits her together with the fatigue she’s feeling after only slept 5 hours the last five days.
“Oh babe, I’m sorry, but you’ll catch him and then you come straight here and I’ll give you the biggest and warmest hug you’ve ever had.” Tina says.
“Ah, I’m looking forward to that, you have no idea how much. I miss you so much.” Bette whispers the last part.
“I miss you too baby.” Tina replies.
“Will you kiss Evan for me? And tell him to kiss you for me.” Bette says.
This made Tina let out a soft laugh.
“I will babe. I love you and stay safe okay?” Tina says with concern in her voice.
“I will, and I love you too. I’ll see you soon.” Bette says tiredly. They hang up.
Bette gets to sleep for about an hour, before her partner knocks on the door and tells her that they know the location of the killer, and that they are making plans to get him without the hour. This makes Bette jump up and wide awake within seconds.
“Great, come on, let’s get this monster.” She says and follows him out into the conference room, where they are setting up the operation.
The Captain is laying out the plans.
“I know we are all tired and that all we want to do is go home and sleep and give our kids a hug, but we have to finish this. We almost have him and we are going to get him. I know we can do this, we are smarter than him. Bette, you’re the agent in charge at the scene. Thomas, you and your team will close off the area, keep people out and away. Everyone else, you know what to do. Ask Bette if any questions. So, let’s go people, let’s take this monster down.” The Captain says as everyone walks out and gathers up their equipment.
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Any chance you’ll take pity on us and give us another post today? That’s just cruel to stop there.
Oooooon you’re soo bad!! To end the chap this way!!!! Grr!:))
oh crap oh crap… Come on! Bette can’t get injured now… :/ You’re an awesome writer and I really love this story, please make it right again!! :)
Gosh no, not Bette, not now, hopefully it is not a serious wound, tell me she did have her vest on. She and Tina don’t need this now that their move is imminent. Maybe this will get her out of law enforcement and into being a gallery owner. No more dangerous stuff with criminals, just dangerous women that she knows how to fend off. Great update. Thanks for posting.
Crap, crap, crap. Tina!!!!!!
Hey Lauren25, Bette and Tina have truly committed to each other now so you can’t have Bette dying in the line of duty. What a cliffie. I really can’t wait to read how this all plays out. More please and real soon. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
OMG! :o PPS
come on… not bette… not now… pps
Master of the twist that you are, good thing they have their vests on; a good leader leads by example. Don’t want her “down” for long now that she is happy. Macrabre twist
It`s a little bit cruel to stop now.Pleasedon´t let her be serious injured.They both suffered enough.Thank you for the update.PPS
Oh that was so mean of you to leave us hanging. Please don’t let Bette be seriously injured. Thanks for this story.