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Final Chapter
Brom’s muscles instinctively relaxed as he felt Jack unclip his knife. He mentally switched to combat mode, braced to attack or defend without hesitation. There wouldn’t be time to decide what to do when a moment like this came. You had to rely on instinct, training to function.
Spencer mouthed to Bette “five seconds!”
Bette grabbed Jules’ phone and told Diane, “Do what you have to quickly. Something’s about to happen!” just as Jules pulled her down and covered her body with her own.
———————————————————————————————Five seconds ——
Charlotte, NC
8:30 am
“STATUS!” Mike yelled, as he chased after the fleeing figure, who at first had exited the stairwell, and ran down the hallway of the floor to reach the opposite end, and then sprinted down the north stairwell. Mike had not bothered to pause and duck from potential gunfire as the figure had been running without glancing back.
The radio exploded with simultaneous reports.
“13th floor!” Harry shouted.
“11th floor!” Tom yelled, panting.
“Everyone’s in the master bedroom, on the floor!” the security detail Brom had assigned to Tina spoke in clipped phrases. “In the living room. Blinds closed. Doors locked. Lights out.”
Weehawken, NJ
8:30 am
Bette could hear the man on the phone, cursing, “It couldn’t have been you!”
Bette heard a loud explosion in the background. Then the call fell silent.
She could feel the Hummer hurtling forward with increasing speed, and hear the voices of Brom and Etienne yelling at each other. If one of them draws a gun…
——————————————- Four seconds——————————————
Charlotte, NC
Mike thought quickly, “Why are we all converging to one floor?”
The lights suddenly went out in the stairwells.
Can’t see a fucking thing! We’re all in stairwells. Nobody can see in. We’re practically blind right this second.
New York, NY
Diane scanned the first document titled, “Open first.”
The document gave instructions on which files to open in succession. And, in the event of an emergency, to call a number, and give whomever answered a code word.
Weehawken, NJ
Spencer reached out to touch Bette’s hand, “Thank you for being true to Raoul. And telling me about him and Nelle.”
————————- —-Three seconds —————————————
“EVERYBODY FUCKING STOP WHERE THEY ARE AND GET OUT THE NEAREST DOOR!” Mike roared into his microphone.
All these unknown figures were running AWAY from the penthouse, leading them away from Tina, and to a common spot in the building! The way they suddenly appeared out of nowhere meant they must have been in the building all along.
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Wow! That was awesome but I hate cliffhangers. Can’t wait for the explanation and who was that women?
Did i really see this is the final chapter? !
But we Need to know that Bette& Tina will survive the attack.
Please
I’m confused. …but patiently waiting, hoping this isn’t really the final chapter.
YES PLEASE THERE MUST BE MORE….. THX
OH NO YOU DIDN”T? You have just dropped this chapter on us and ran. Was the woman carrying the attackers in her heavy roller bags? Etienne is a traitor to Bette? How did Paul get in this mess? Nazi coverup because of papers Raoul left Bette? Tina is ok? Bette is hurt? Is George tied upon this strike? Have Mike and Brom failed to keep their promise? What a mess you have to resolve! Get busy and post again soon.
Haha, I think that magicspider covered pretty much everything.
Very exciting stuff, and enjoyable too. I hope the next book is coming soon.
Thank you!
You are a bit evil, lol!!! Nice cliff hanger…I’ll be stalking around and waiting for a sequel!! Great job!!
ladies: thanks for all your support and comments throughout. Epilogue coming soon.
Sky,
Great chapter with action and intrigue. Can’t wait to see this mystery unraveled.
“But this isn’t over.”
Dun-dun-dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And now for the conclusion to our story…….? No good person would leave all of us hanging ……of course someone else described you as evil! I will not be able to sleep tonight worried about what is happening to the girls….
ahhhh…epilogue on the way! That’s good – or else we send Jimmy two toes over to see you! Very exciting – but confusing to say the least! Who….what?! Wow!
Wow, all I can really say is wow. And who the heck is Carousel.
Damn dramas