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Final Chapter
They were probably being led to a trap, and enough away from Tina so that even if one of them survived, it would be difficult to climb all the way up to the penthouse.
Tom and Harry had already stopped a second earlier when the lights had gone out. Instinctively they began to back-track to the doors they’d each remembered seeing as they’d each scrambled after the figures they’d been chasing.
——————-Two seconds —————————————————-
Jack saw the semi-truck improbably accelerate even faster, barreling at high speed towards the armored car ahead of him. He screamed into his phone, “SEMI! Your three o’clock! Semi!”
“This your plan?” Bette asked Spencer.
“Yes. I told you…”
“Tina?”
“– She’ll be alright. Everyone will be ok.”
—- One second ————————————————————-——
Tina could hear Brom’s security detail yelling back and forth with someone. Must be through his radio because none of the phones are working. What was going on out there?
She motioned to her mother to stay put as she got off of the floor and headed towards the door of the bedroom.
(Boom) ————————————————————————-—-
Weehawken, NJ
The semi tore into the armored vehicle ahead of the Hummer, pinning it against the Jersey wall, as it merged into the roadway. The violent crash caused the semi to jackhammer, with its tail end slamming into the Hummer that had been ten feet behind the armored vehicle.
Jack had already swerved into the next lane, anticipating the whiplash action would likely cause the back of the semi to slam into them. The hard, vicious slam caused the Hummer to turn roll over once and turn turtle.
Etienne had been crushed in the resulting crash, while Brom had been thrown against Jack. The extra plating on the Hummer protected further damage, but the crash had cause air bags all around the Hummer to deploy.
As the Hummer rolled, Jules had been thrown back against the back rest, while Bette had been slammed against door.
When the Hummer stopped rolling and came to a stop, on its roof, three men in combat boots and flak jackets jumped out of the semi to inspect the first vehicle, while two others approached the Hummer.
As they drew nearer they saw Brom stirring in front, and Jules in the back.
Charlotte, NC
Tina turned the doorknob and pulled the door open just as she heard a faint roar many floors below. She grabbed the side of the door as she felt the building shake.
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Wow! That was awesome but I hate cliffhangers. Can’t wait for the explanation and who was that women?
Did i really see this is the final chapter? !
But we Need to know that Bette& Tina will survive the attack.
Please
I’m confused. …but patiently waiting, hoping this isn’t really the final chapter.
YES PLEASE THERE MUST BE MORE….. THX
OH NO YOU DIDN”T? You have just dropped this chapter on us and ran. Was the woman carrying the attackers in her heavy roller bags? Etienne is a traitor to Bette? How did Paul get in this mess? Nazi coverup because of papers Raoul left Bette? Tina is ok? Bette is hurt? Is George tied upon this strike? Have Mike and Brom failed to keep their promise? What a mess you have to resolve! Get busy and post again soon.
Haha, I think that magicspider covered pretty much everything.
Very exciting stuff, and enjoyable too. I hope the next book is coming soon.
Thank you!
You are a bit evil, lol!!! Nice cliff hanger…I’ll be stalking around and waiting for a sequel!! Great job!!
ladies: thanks for all your support and comments throughout. Epilogue coming soon.
Sky,
Great chapter with action and intrigue. Can’t wait to see this mystery unraveled.
“But this isn’t over.”
Dun-dun-dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And now for the conclusion to our story…….? No good person would leave all of us hanging ……of course someone else described you as evil! I will not be able to sleep tonight worried about what is happening to the girls….
ahhhh…epilogue on the way! That’s good – or else we send Jimmy two toes over to see you! Very exciting – but confusing to say the least! Who….what?! Wow!
Wow, all I can really say is wow. And who the heck is Carousel.
Damn dramas