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Fire and Ice Chapter 33
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"Mmmm…I agree. It’s so fresh. Do you suppose they flew it in today?" Bette questioned as she tasted from her own plate.
"Mmmm…I would imagine. This is just too good to be true…" Tina mused.
"Hmmm." Bette started, unable to stop herself from intiating another seemingly innocent exchange. "I wonder if yours tastes the same as mine?" Bette looked at Tina playfully, silently requesting that Tina offer her a bite.
"Huh. I don’t know…you wanna taste?" Tina arched her eyebrow seductively, a warm smile enveloping her lips.
"Yes, if you don’t mind…I do." Bette set her fork down gingerly, placing her hands in her lap, anticipating Tina’s offering.
"With or without the glaze?" Tina asked, quickly glancing at Bette, her grin softer but no less seductive.
"Oh. With…please." Bette smiled as Tina traced a small slice of salmon through the rich miso glaze, carefully wiping off the excess before she rose the fork from her plate.
"Here it comes…" Tina eyed the small serving on the fork, cupping her hand below to capture any traces that might fall on the way to its destination.
Bette parted her lips, her mouth wet with anticipation.
Tina gently slid the fork into the brunettes mouth, watching Bette’s lips close slowly around it, slipping the morsel free.
Bette let out a little moan as she closed her eyes and nodded her head.
"Yeah. Yours definately tastes better…a think it’s a little…sweeter than mine." She opened her eyes to glance longingly at the brunette, washing her bite down with another slug of bourbon.
"I’ll be the judge of that…" Tina motioned with her eyebrows to Bette’s own plate of food.
"Oh, you want…" Bette began, already cutting a small piece of fish from the filet.
Tina only nodded, easing her body forward a little to make it easier for the brunette to guide the food into her mouth. Bette smiled as she watched the blonde take the bite delicately from the fork, her own moan suggesting appreciation.
"Oh. I don’t know. That’s pretty good." Tina winked a little as she chewed.
They finished their meals in much the same way, occassionally sharing bites and lingering looks. By the time dessert was offered, they were too stuffed to even contemplate the potentially sexy interlude sharing dessert would present. Food was no longer satisfying the two women…
"Look, Tina…I can drive you back to the gallery later if you’d like to…you know…go somewhere else…" Bette offered, crossing her fingers that Tina would say yes.
"What did you have in mind?" Tina asked, her breath slightly hitching.
"Well, we could go for a night cap…" Bette casually suggested, tilting her head in question.
Tina thought for a moment about the invitation. Her eyes widened as she seemed to arrive at something in her mind. "Hey…there’s a small piano bar in the lobby of my hotel….it’s nothing much, but…how does that sound?"
Bette’s smile radiated. "That sounds…perfect."
TBC
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I forgot the hotel also,better start finding her a house abd get her stuff from Eric thanks
Did someone say hotel…get our girls there fast! PPS
HOTEL? did i read hotel?? ooohhhhhh too tempting to even go there!!!! but a girl can dream right??? lmao…another good one fire!
How convienent that they are going to the hotel bar, a short elevator ride away from bliss…
Way to manoeuver Bette Tina! Getting her to come to your hotel…night cap I’m sure! I LOVE this story Fire…have I told you that lately?
Fire- each word was exquisite…I loved the flirting…I loved the bourbon sharing…I loved that Bette focused on decreasing Tina’s discomfort…I love that Tina is made to confront her ideology. It was simply breathtaking… I can’t wait to see if the nightcap leads to more…and more…PPS
It is fun having Bette and Tina flirting and teasing one another. I am glad that Bette and Tina talked after being potentially busted by Jack. Though I understand how scary it is to come out publicly it also hurts to have someone seem ashamed of something so beautiful. Wonderful writing!
Was I the only one who remembered the hotel? Gold star for me!!! Great continuity fire…ure doing waaay better than Ilene. Uhhh, can I trade in my gold star for another chapter instead?
PS could the drink at the hotel bar please lead to a drink in the hotel room? Which could lead to…sexy time :)
WHAT HOTEL? Is that where T is staying? I forgot. I don’t blame T not wanting to wear other peoples’ labeling of her but do get Bette’s hurt. Didn’t last long tho’, thank goodness. Love this. PPS.
yeah, sorry…that was like, 80 chapters ago…i’m not surprised to learn you forgot! (she’s staying at the four seasons, btw. i’m trying to use real la establishments, save for the bette porter gallery, to give the story some angles…)
Great story. I love the pace, but at the same time it’s killing me :). I think Tina did remarkably well considering it’s her first real lesbian date/experience. Great update!
A nights recap it is. Got no problem with the pace whatsoever.PPS
i also forgot about the hotel… i think its also time for tina to find a place to live… and get her things from eric’s… after their drinks that is… maybe shane has a truck and the girls can help her move…
that was really perfect, thank you for this beautiful chapter and for this lovely dinner, I loved how their dinner date went, the drinks and the food were amazing, it really made me hungry, you make it sound very delicious and attractive, which I am sure is, I hope their night will never end, I am very excited to see what will take place next. post soon dear and I am glad you are fine. Take care Love
Okay nice dinner indeed love the playfulness. time for the ol’ night cap..:)PPS
I think Tina staying at the hotel was actually mentioned about 81 chapters ago (heehee)…and bring on the Four Seasons firestarter.
*glancing at me chilled beer… at the salmon… back at the beer…. salmon… beer…* can’t decide who’s the winner… the beer cools me down… and the salmon heats up the ladies… either very nice… BUT i love the way you charge the conversation with the nuances that make your story so special. thanks fire!
“Mrs. Kennard?!” Tina’s not married, right? Jack just made a slip of the tongue, right? Anyway, I knew it, that shot of bourbon won’t really help Tina because she’s already in heat. It’s like spraying gasoline on a raging bonfire. I loved the banter, the endless teasing and the way they fed each other the same dish was really sweet. They are moving forward, firestarter. And I’m glad that my unfounded fear and anxiety that this relationship would take as long to build as it took to build Rome is now fading fast. I’m glad to be proven wrong! :) Thank you for writing and posting this update, firestarter, and for putting up with all my teasing. :>
A nightcap, at Tina’s hotel right ;) pps
That was great and they are sweet!