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Fire and Ice Chapter 33
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"Yes. You should have come." Bette stated, unhappy with the intruder but more so concerned for Tina at the moment. She looked at Tina who was now sitting much too far away from her.
"I was tied up…well I thought I was…plans fell through…which reminds me, Tina, lets reschedule that meeting soon." Jack began, knowing he should possibly take his leave.
"Absolutely." Tina nodded a little too enthusiastically, her composure completely shot.
"Well, good evening ladies." Jack nodded and turned on his heels to leave the women alone again.
"Oh my god." Tina put her head in her hands, shaking her face lightly between them.
Bette sighed roughly, all of a sudden offended by Tina’s reaction. "I don’t think he saw anything if that makes you feel better…"
Tina looked up, instantly meeting Bette’s hurt gaze. "It’s not that I’m ashamed…I just…I don’t want to be labeled anything…" The blonde began lightly.
"You mean you don’t want to be called a lesbian, but acting like one is okay?" Bette questioned curtly, surprising herself even. Her expression instantly softened as she bowed her head in guilt.
"I’m sorry…that was really out of line…" Bette began, shame dripping from her voice.
"No…you’re right. I don’t know what I am anymore…." Tina shook her head at her own predicament. Before she continued, she slowly closed the gap between herself and Bette, lightly resting her palm on the brunette’s.
"All I know is that…that I love spending time with you…I love being with you…being beside you makes me feel so…so good…and I have no doubt about." Tina admitted whole heartedly, her eyes full of truth.
"Tina…I…" Bette began, still flabergasted by her own sharp statement.
"No…shhh. You are being really patient with me…and I’m sorry if I made you feel like I was ashamed to be with you…because I am so honored to be at your side tonight…more than you’ll ever know…." Tina smoothed a stray curl from Bette’s cheek, smiling knowingly at the beautiful brunette. "I just need a little time, to get used to it."
Bette nodded, knowing Tina was done talking about it for now.
Their entrees arrived not a moment too soon, returning the women once again to playful banter and lighthearted conversation.
"This is delicious…" Tina purred as she savored the fresh fish.
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I forgot the hotel also,better start finding her a house abd get her stuff from Eric thanks
Did someone say hotel…get our girls there fast! PPS
HOTEL? did i read hotel?? ooohhhhhh too tempting to even go there!!!! but a girl can dream right??? lmao…another good one fire!
How convienent that they are going to the hotel bar, a short elevator ride away from bliss…
Way to manoeuver Bette Tina! Getting her to come to your hotel…night cap I’m sure! I LOVE this story Fire…have I told you that lately?
Fire- each word was exquisite…I loved the flirting…I loved the bourbon sharing…I loved that Bette focused on decreasing Tina’s discomfort…I love that Tina is made to confront her ideology. It was simply breathtaking… I can’t wait to see if the nightcap leads to more…and more…PPS
It is fun having Bette and Tina flirting and teasing one another. I am glad that Bette and Tina talked after being potentially busted by Jack. Though I understand how scary it is to come out publicly it also hurts to have someone seem ashamed of something so beautiful. Wonderful writing!
Was I the only one who remembered the hotel? Gold star for me!!! Great continuity fire…ure doing waaay better than Ilene. Uhhh, can I trade in my gold star for another chapter instead?
PS could the drink at the hotel bar please lead to a drink in the hotel room? Which could lead to…sexy time :)
WHAT HOTEL? Is that where T is staying? I forgot. I don’t blame T not wanting to wear other peoples’ labeling of her but do get Bette’s hurt. Didn’t last long tho’, thank goodness. Love this. PPS.
yeah, sorry…that was like, 80 chapters ago…i’m not surprised to learn you forgot! (she’s staying at the four seasons, btw. i’m trying to use real la establishments, save for the bette porter gallery, to give the story some angles…)
Great story. I love the pace, but at the same time it’s killing me :). I think Tina did remarkably well considering it’s her first real lesbian date/experience. Great update!
A nights recap it is. Got no problem with the pace whatsoever.PPS
i also forgot about the hotel… i think its also time for tina to find a place to live… and get her things from eric’s… after their drinks that is… maybe shane has a truck and the girls can help her move…
that was really perfect, thank you for this beautiful chapter and for this lovely dinner, I loved how their dinner date went, the drinks and the food were amazing, it really made me hungry, you make it sound very delicious and attractive, which I am sure is, I hope their night will never end, I am very excited to see what will take place next. post soon dear and I am glad you are fine. Take care Love
Okay nice dinner indeed love the playfulness. time for the ol’ night cap..:)PPS
I think Tina staying at the hotel was actually mentioned about 81 chapters ago (heehee)…and bring on the Four Seasons firestarter.
*glancing at me chilled beer… at the salmon… back at the beer…. salmon… beer…* can’t decide who’s the winner… the beer cools me down… and the salmon heats up the ladies… either very nice… BUT i love the way you charge the conversation with the nuances that make your story so special. thanks fire!
“Mrs. Kennard?!” Tina’s not married, right? Jack just made a slip of the tongue, right? Anyway, I knew it, that shot of bourbon won’t really help Tina because she’s already in heat. It’s like spraying gasoline on a raging bonfire. I loved the banter, the endless teasing and the way they fed each other the same dish was really sweet. They are moving forward, firestarter. And I’m glad that my unfounded fear and anxiety that this relationship would take as long to build as it took to build Rome is now fading fast. I’m glad to be proven wrong! :) Thank you for writing and posting this update, firestarter, and for putting up with all my teasing. :>
A nightcap, at Tina’s hotel right ;) pps
That was great and they are sweet!