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First, Last, & Forever? (Version 2.0 – Chapter 9)
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Tina slowly created a space between them, careful not to break their lingering kiss. She slid her hands down from Bette’s neck, between their bodies, and started unbuttoning Bette’s crisp white shirt. Bette, with her arms still around Tina’s waist, managed to unhook her cufflinks to make sure there would be no unnecessary resistance when Tina was ready to help her out of her shirt completely. Tina finished the last button and decisively pushed Bette’s shirt off of her. Bette moved her hands back to Tina’s waist, softly stroking up and down her back.
Tina’s hands quickly returned between them, first caressing Bette’s breasts through her bra, then massaging them, feeling Bette’s nipples harden to her touch. They continued their soul-scorching kiss, and Bette let out a low moan of approval. Bette so desperately wanted to help Tina out of her t-shirt right at that moment, but knew she needed to go slowly, and let Tina run the show. Bette finally broke the kiss, and looked into her wife’s eyes as she tried to catch her breath.
"Do you have any idea how much I want to make love to you, Tee?" Bette whispered hoarsely, her chest still heaving.
"I think I might have some idea." Tina’s eyes twinkled, her look telling Bette it was okay for her to undress her as well. She held Tina’s gaze while sliding her fingers under the hem of Tina’s t-shirt, allowing the soft material to slip between the long digits before she finally grasped the offending garment firmly. Tina lifted her arms, and Bette pulled the t-shirt over Tina’s head. Bette looked down, and very gently stroked Tina’s nipples through her bra.
"Is that new?" Bette asked, not recognizing the black lace that was keeping Bette from Tina’s breasts.
"Yes, do you like it?" Tina asked, feigning shyness.
"I like it very much.” Bette raised an eyebrow, and smiled wickedly at her wife. “But I will like it even better off of you." Bette reached down to unbutton Tina’s jeans, allowing the tip of her index finger to roam over the cool round button, then lightly trace over the zipper.
“Mmm. My favorite jeans. Of course, you know the only time your ass looks better is when you’re not wearing anything,” Bette mused, causing Tina to blush as though on cue.
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OMG, I think I’m first. be right back.
You snick this one in when I was commenting on the last chapter..does this mean that we will get “the chapter” soon???
Oh great, the dreaded TBC… ok, ok just because this is a great story and you are an amazing writer I’m going to have to learn how to be patient! Still, don’t make us wait too long… pleeeease? Great chappy!
Aww, Bette was mad sweet in this one. I’m glad there are so many chapters to this story already..its nice to read something long and not have to wait on updates. Next chapter is the one right? Or maybe the one after that?
damn Bette is like a kid in a candy store, pacing around wondering what to do for 10 mins or part there of. So am guessing Tina went to pump huh and you made that happen cause you are just plain evil due to the fact that you like teasing ppl!!!
Hey Steph, they just belong together, you can do it! Love your writting! PPS
It just keeps getting better and better. I love it when a plan comes together. PPS
Well that will be like a day or two rather then 9 + minutes…..right Steph…J
this was a beautiful chapter. thanks.
I can understand why this one of your favorite chapters. I had to read it twice to fully delight in and savor every word. Just beautifully written. Love the slow, however agonizing, build-up…. but to mimic Bette’s words, “I don’t think I can wait any longer.”
Tease! Mean cliffie…I love this story! Thanks Steph, it was a great read, just gettin’ better!
It was lovely the first time round..and still keeps me enthralled. Thank you!
Yeah this is torture!!! LOL
Now U really are being a tease but once again beautifully crafted, pps.
Damn that was beautiful and hot. Please post more, thanks!
tease LOL
Here I am, minding my own business, browsing the new fic stories and I come across yours…Just read it from the start and you end it here?? Thats SO not right! Love the story, look forward to your update….umm…like now would be good…
Steph!!! You left it there!?? GRRRRRR. You definately like to tease us don’t you? Okay, this line..”It wasn’t often that Bette didn’t know what to say,” was one I had to laugh at, only because it just reminded me of me. Ness has told me that its on those occassions when I’m speechless, that I actually speak volumes~ Go figure! LOL. Thanks for a fabulous update. Can’t wait to read more.
WOW!!! If that your R chapter I can not wait for the NC-17. Thanks that was wonderful PPVS
Okay, now is that 9 mins 45 seconds LWord hiatus time or real time Steph. You are killing us girl!! S-L-O-W B-U-R-N bummer!! Hope you are enjoying yourself……….pps
I love the build up of this story. There is so much for Bette and Tina to discover and rediscover about each other on their way to bed. Thank you for reposting this because I am STILL enjoying it thoroughly.
Great update, can hardly wait for more.PPS
what a tease… it would easier to have a baby than wait for ” the chapter”….sighs…pps
so sweet Thanks
Absolutely beautiful – I could see Jennifer and Laurel playing this scene with the rings, if only IC had your vision. Anyway it was awesome and then it got wonderful hot – you write so very very well. But you sure do know how to tease a reader.
That was a great chapter Steph! Love it. But have i told you lately that u r such a bad tease ;-)
Okay…so I’m behind and playing catchup, but I love this chapter so much because I’m a sappy romantic! The description of how Bette recognized the rings and the chain was so touching! Warmed the cockles of my mushy butch heart! And the slow burn is so appropriate here, as Bette gives Tina the reassurance of her love that she needs! So now, because I have waited, I can now read the other prelude to “the chapter”, which I know for sure will not disappoint! You truly know how to craft this tale in the way so many of us would have wanted to see on the show itself!