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First, Last, & Forever? (Version 2.0 – Chapter 9)
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Bette finally unbuttoned the jeans and coaxed down the zipper, slipping her hands between the coarse fabric and Tina’s fair skin. Bette ran her hands lightly over Tina’s hips, caressing the soft skin underneath, causing Tina to shudder. Bette slowly slid the jeans down over Tina’s hips, guiding them all the way to the floor. Bette knelt down to help Tina step out of them. After Tina did so, Bette remained on her knees, and gently traced Tina’s c-section scar with her index finger. She leaned in and softly kissed the scar, running her tongue from one end to the other. She looked up at Tina to make sure she was okay. Tina smiled at her, and Bette kissed the scar again.
Bette finally stood up, still leaving her right hand on Tina’s stomach, gently caressing the line that Tina hated so much. She kissed Tina softly on the mouth, then pulled away just enough to lock her chocolate brown eyes onto Tina’s. While she could see the love and passion smoldering in Tina’s hazel stare, she could also see flickers of insecurity and doubt.
"I think you should know that I love your scar, Tee. I know you hate it, hate the way it looks. But it’s how our daughter came into this world. It is a constant reminder of the most precious gift you could have given me, and the sacrifice you made for our love.” Bette paused for a moment, before continuing, “And, I think it’s beautiful."
Bette waited silently to see how Tina would react, continuing to run her finger along the line that Tina found so offensive. It was now Tina’s turn to be speechless. She had never thought of her big, ugly scar like that, and was a little bit surprised that it was Bette, of all people, who would give her that perspective. Tina was never more sure of her love for Bette than at that moment, or of the fact that Bette had truly grown during their time apart.
"You’re right, Baby, I never thought of it that way." Rather than waiting for Bette’s reaction, Tina decided to show Bette how much better she had made Tina feel about herself, how safe, protected and loved she felt hearing Bette’s words. Bette was still running her finger along the scar line, and Tina covered Bette’s hand with hers, then moved both of their hands just inside her black thong. Tina stopped, just for a second, trying to judge Bette’s response. Bette had closed her eyes in anticipation, and Tina slid their hands further, pressing Bette’s fingers against her. Bette shuddered, and exhaled sharply. Tina felt an electric shock pass through her body as she felt Bette’s touch for the first time in months.
"Oh my god, Tee." Bette was amazed at Tina’s response, at how wet she was already. "I know I said I wanted to take this slow, but I don’t think I can wait any longer."
Tina drew both of their hands back from under her thong, and brought Bette’s fingers to her mouth, licking them lightly. Tina knew it always drove Bette crazy when she did that. Tina then kissed Bette, so Bette would taste her on her lips.
"Now, Tee, please." Bette forced the words out, again fighting to keep the air in her lungs. Tina leaned in, again running her fingers through Bette’s curly locks, and whispered in her lover’s ear.
"I need to go take care of some things. Please go turn off the oven, top off the wine glasses, and meet me in our bedroom in ten minutes, and not a second earlier, Bette Porter," Tina commanded, with a wink. Tina picked up Bette’s white shirt from the sofa where it had been tossed, and slipped into it, leaving it open, with her black bra and thong exposed. Bette watched her walk off to the bedroom, not knowing how she was going to occupy herself for the next nine minutes and forty-five seconds. As Bette began to watch the clock, it read 9:26.
(To Be Continued…)
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OMG, I think I’m first. be right back.
You snick this one in when I was commenting on the last chapter..does this mean that we will get “the chapter” soon???
Oh great, the dreaded TBC… ok, ok just because this is a great story and you are an amazing writer I’m going to have to learn how to be patient! Still, don’t make us wait too long… pleeeease? Great chappy!
Aww, Bette was mad sweet in this one. I’m glad there are so many chapters to this story already..its nice to read something long and not have to wait on updates. Next chapter is the one right? Or maybe the one after that?
damn Bette is like a kid in a candy store, pacing around wondering what to do for 10 mins or part there of. So am guessing Tina went to pump huh and you made that happen cause you are just plain evil due to the fact that you like teasing ppl!!!
Hey Steph, they just belong together, you can do it! Love your writting! PPS
It just keeps getting better and better. I love it when a plan comes together. PPS
Well that will be like a day or two rather then 9 + minutes…..right Steph…J
this was a beautiful chapter. thanks.
I can understand why this one of your favorite chapters. I had to read it twice to fully delight in and savor every word. Just beautifully written. Love the slow, however agonizing, build-up…. but to mimic Bette’s words, “I don’t think I can wait any longer.”
Tease! Mean cliffie…I love this story! Thanks Steph, it was a great read, just gettin’ better!
It was lovely the first time round..and still keeps me enthralled. Thank you!
Yeah this is torture!!! LOL
Now U really are being a tease but once again beautifully crafted, pps.
Damn that was beautiful and hot. Please post more, thanks!
tease LOL
Here I am, minding my own business, browsing the new fic stories and I come across yours…Just read it from the start and you end it here?? Thats SO not right! Love the story, look forward to your update….umm…like now would be good…
Steph!!! You left it there!?? GRRRRRR. You definately like to tease us don’t you? Okay, this line..”It wasn’t often that Bette didn’t know what to say,” was one I had to laugh at, only because it just reminded me of me. Ness has told me that its on those occassions when I’m speechless, that I actually speak volumes~ Go figure! LOL. Thanks for a fabulous update. Can’t wait to read more.
WOW!!! If that your R chapter I can not wait for the NC-17. Thanks that was wonderful PPVS
Okay, now is that 9 mins 45 seconds LWord hiatus time or real time Steph. You are killing us girl!! S-L-O-W B-U-R-N bummer!! Hope you are enjoying yourself……….pps
I love the build up of this story. There is so much for Bette and Tina to discover and rediscover about each other on their way to bed. Thank you for reposting this because I am STILL enjoying it thoroughly.
Great update, can hardly wait for more.PPS
what a tease… it would easier to have a baby than wait for ” the chapter”….sighs…pps
so sweet Thanks
Absolutely beautiful – I could see Jennifer and Laurel playing this scene with the rings, if only IC had your vision. Anyway it was awesome and then it got wonderful hot – you write so very very well. But you sure do know how to tease a reader.
That was a great chapter Steph! Love it. But have i told you lately that u r such a bad tease ;-)
Okay…so I’m behind and playing catchup, but I love this chapter so much because I’m a sappy romantic! The description of how Bette recognized the rings and the chain was so touching! Warmed the cockles of my mushy butch heart! And the slow burn is so appropriate here, as Bette gives Tina the reassurance of her love that she needs! So now, because I have waited, I can now read the other prelude to “the chapter”, which I know for sure will not disappoint! You truly know how to craft this tale in the way so many of us would have wanted to see on the show itself!