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First love… or not? chapter 1
She sharply looks straight at Shane, who’s on her phone like usual
Jenny: I’m going for a fag, would anyone like to join me
Shane quickly snaps her phone shut
Shane: after you queen
Shanes glances up and follows jenny out the room giving Carmen a warm smile.
Carmen feels a lump in her throat and thinks to herself wow she’s an amazing girl
Carmen: Paul how long has Shane worked here for?
Paul: she started about 2 weeks before, she is as cool as fuck
Carmen: thanks Paul, I think I’m gona go and grab a quick fag.
Carmen walks to her bag in her locker and takes her phone out, knowing she doesn’t smoke but wants to fit in with the girls outside.
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Jenny: So Shane u wanna grab a drink after work, no where special the local horse and jockey?
Shane: urm what u off?
Jenny: I’m off at 6, the same time as u, I looked on the wage sheet before, and we are on the next 4 shifts 2geva with that new kid Carmen
Shane: ahhh the Latino, she’s cool, haven’t really spoke to her much
Jenny: Shane I wouldn’t bother, I don’t think she’s gona fit in around her… it’s not her style and plus I don’t like her attitude
Shane: well we are 2 different people aren’t we?
Carmen walks over to the smokers hut
Carmen: hey guys, can I pinch a fag, I forgot mine 2day and I’m dying for one
Jenny: aww I’m sorry Carmen I only have enough to last me all day
Jenny opens her packet and shows Carmen that’s she has about 15 cigarettes
Shane: hey have one of mine, I can easily go the shop and get some more
Shane passes one to Carmen who smiles from ear to ear
Carmen: why thank you Shane you’re a star
Shane: so you’re new hey
Carmen: well 2 weeks behind you I hear
Jenny: but your new Carmen, Shane knows everyone as her brother is the manager.
Carmen: really wow, I never knew that… come to think of it you guys do look the spit of each other
Shane: don’t say that it gives me a complex, ha ha but then again he’s my big bro and I wouldn’t swap him for the world.
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Nice beginning. Looking out for the next chapter! :)
your doing good stace..keep posting
Jenny is so freakin’ annoying.. argh you just want to wring her neck..LOL=Dgreat chapter=) I’ll be waiting for an update!!
cool start, looking forward to more.
Dude i really neva liked Jenny especially in season 5 mane she iz really a grade ‘a’ bitch . . . but im supa excited bout dis story so plz update like now, lol. Whelp like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS;p . . . Stank .. . . Da’ one and only, chicka, holla at me =D
That’s one wicked way to start a story. ;P I like it. Post soon. :D Don’t worry, you did great ;)