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First Year- Chapter 19
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I felt cold and dead in my heart. I spoke to her with contempt. “Dylan, I’m so sorry you had such little faith in me. Please keep the money. I know my mother will not take it back. This was just another business deal for her. Just like her marriage. There is no point in trying to return it. You’ve kept up your end of the deal. We are in separate programs and we are over. You’ve kept this from me since you interviewed here last December. The match was in March and you hid it from me then. We graduated in May and you hid it from me them. All this time you could have told me, you could have convinced me you made a mistake but you didn’t. It’s almost a year since you made your deal with the devil. You had enough opportunity to tell me. I don’t think you really wanted to tell me.”
“I didn’t know how to tell you.”
“Dylan you’ve practically had a year to come up with a way to tell me. You didn’t intend to return the money. I don’t believe you. I don’t believe you really regretted it. There is no point to this. I need you to leave.”
She nodded and began to leave. She got to the door then turned before she left, “I just want to know one thing Helena. Were you faithful to me while you were here?”
The questioned stunned me. It was as if she was trying to justify her behavior, justify the deal she made. I refused to answer but she persisted. “Were you? Were you with anyone else?”
“Dylan it doesn’t matter anymore, now does it?”
“I may not matter to you but it matters to me. Were you faithful or did you cheat on me?”
The truth would verify that my mother was right about me. But did it justify what Dylan did? I gave her a truthful but incomplete answer. “My heart never strayed from you. You were the keeper of my heart. I’ve loved no one but you.”
“And your mind and body? Can you say the same of them? Did your mind and body stray?”
I didn’t answer. What was the point? She responded sarcastically, “You don’t have to answer. Your silence says it all.” Tears began to stream down her face. She spoke angrily to me, “How long do you think when your mind and body strays before your heart does too? How long Helena?”
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Meh. Whether or not Helena got some on the side, whether or not everybody is very young and pursuing an intense career fanatically, whether or not Peggy is the devil incarnate, Dylan was feeble. It’s not like her debt appeared one day suddenly. She knew going into Med school what would be waiting for her on the other side. And it doesn’t sound like Peggy had to work hard to get her to accept. I doubt they would have lasted even if they’d been together. And not being pious, pledge taking Xtians, I suspect sooner or later both of them would have tasted other fruit. But Dylan sold her soul. And became a big, old whore. Hope you’re feeling better, Squirl. Perhaps a nice hot bubble bath to open the sinuses.
I’m still with Squirl. So I thought I would get my comment in early this time. I don’t doubt Helena’s and Dylan’s love for one another. But I do doubt faith and trust in one another. Because if you believed that your love is that strong for that person then temptation would not have made any decisions in your behavior. It would have been no on both accounts. The power was within them not Peggy or Carmen. Like I said before people do make mistakes. Helena and Dylan both have betrayed their relationship and now must live with choices of their actions.
Woah Dylans caused my skin to burn also. I feel she knows she did wrong but so did Helena and she is not he innocent party in all this. Although I do believe Helena did not betray Dylan in the way she did. The turmoil in the relationship started when Dylan went to another programme and I think their relationship would of ended in tears even if Peggy did not make her offer. Sometimes people are just not matched for commitment.
Hey there S, I had read the story very very early in the morning but needed to go to work and would not have enough time to post only read,;) I must say that Dylan really didnt know Helena at all, for many reasons such as she didnt believe in thier love, she had to have some low self esteem and trust issues to not believe, have faith and LOVE the woman she proclaimed, that she didnt fight very well for her love and took the money. Now I am not excusing Helena cause she should have remained loyal in mind and body and she did cheat on Dylan proclaiming she loved Dylan at the time. We make mistakes but Helena continued to sleep with Carmen (I like them as a couple FYI), so she is partially to blame herself as well IMO. But Dylan apparenlty don’t have a backbone or word cause she was not honest with Helena and she didnt keep her word to stay away from her, so what kind of person is she,,,,,WEAK!!!!! Helena needs a woman who is strong in character when needed, tender, loving,playful and serious and with Dylan she didnt get that but a woman who took the $$$$$. I liked how Carmen was and is indeed a wonderful friend and Helena seems to be finally realizing that and hope to she cherishes that with Carmen either by being lovers or best friends. It hurts to love and then be betrayed, hopfully Helena will learn from here on end. Great chapter S!
I hope Dylan uses the money for the Dylan Moreland charity Fund Pay off her loans and getout free of debt. So there is two broken people now Peggy had already told Dylan that she was not going to be with Helena. Helena was having an affair.Call it what you want it was an affair. I just hope Helena can find love again but not with Porter. I still would pick Tina. Hey I;m a Dylan fan and I would love for her to find love and believe me she has learn a hard lesson.
Squirl I’m sorry that I want give Helena a break but I really don’t like her so far and I don’t like people who think that they can do what they want but when someone else does something bad to them they act like it’s the end of the world. Helena can rationalize it all she wants but the bottom line is she didn’t have faith in their love just as much as she blames Dylan. I do believe Helena is more upset in the fact that Peggy was right about her then what Dylan did but she’s just to stubborn to admit it. I really hated the fact that she had the nerve to call Dylan a hypocrite when all the while she was fu*cking another b*tch in the process and then had the balls to have her ho there when Dylan comes to talk to her. I know this is a long story and I’m going to try and hold judgment until the story ends but in the back of my mind I was thinking that something like this was going to happen. No offense but I hope this wasn’t a cop-out for Helena because she was cheating. Helena so far seems to put her problems on everyone but herself. Her willingness to not love has nothing to do with Dylan because before she knew what Dylan did she had already given up on their relationship. I think Dylan needs to work on her insecurities and move on. Helena needs to grow up and come to terms with the real reason why she can’t commit.
Hey you… you betta not be quiting this here story… you hear me… nope nope nope… I won’t accept that… NOPE… so there I have spoken… and well yeah… so there and well while I am yet again behind I am following it diligently and have it tucked away in a neat and safe place for my reading pleasure and also I need to keep up on my PHd somehow and you give a lot to think about… and well yeah, love and hugs, JC
A few little known facts… A) there are 19 chapters of this story so far, B) this here story has reached 49,304 words, C) it takes place over a 1 year period of time, D) We are in what September I believe or maybe I’m behind a little, maybe its a little later but I don’t think we have quite reached the quarter mark of the year yet, so if my calculations are correct you still have about 60 chapters left to share with us… giving that each quarter is only going to get more involved and the relationships are going to develop further and some people will come and some will go, she will fall in love a couple more times before she finds someone that is worth of her heart and soul, so yeah I’m thinking maybe 60+ more chapters… hows that for math, huggles, JC
Ouch Squirly that was some painful stuff, I am very glad that Helena recognized the fact that trust broken like that is something that will never mend. Glad because trust is stronger than love and if she stayed w/Dyaln she would second guess herself for as long as she did, mothers input or no mothers input. Glad that Dylan decides to give the money away, big mistake on her part but not one that can’t be overcome if the lesson is learned and the money can help someone or something else, that is a good place to start her healing process. Moma P has to chill though, let her daughter make her own mistakes and learn and grow from them, Helena didn’t need the extra hurt and confusion from her mother. Dana can pull through this illness, she is in weak times but treatment and faith and friends can pull her through so she can be at the top of her game again. Can we see something happy for Carmen and Alice, please………………. Thank you and thank you for the shout out. Md aka Oma. Looking up, ya JC you tell it like it is, go bro.
Although Helena cheated on Dylan (thus actually proving Peggy’s point — which I hope Helena actually deliberates in another chapter) Dylan simply had no defense for her actions. If she was fearful of Peggy and she loved Helena, it seems she would have cried wolf to her lover. Helena definitely would have paid off her loans so I just find it difficult to accept that she took the money for that purpose. It just seems to me as though we aren’t getting the entire picture at this point. This leads me to believe that you have another twist up your sleeve my dear Squirl. Hmmm… I’m waiting and reading with anticipation…and don’t you dare stop this story…I haven’t gotten my promised(?) Belena action yet. Woot! Woot!
Indeed, where is the love in that…poor Dylan, she should have trusted H more…end of the day, insecurity and greed are a mother!! Not to be selfish or anything (big smile) but ur (cough, cough) when will this become a H and B story…I mean Carmen is a friend and all, but she isn’t B and Tina is a hooch…so if your intent to allow this to slowly build, I can dig it, but beg of you that you drop a couple of crumbs…pweese!!!
Helena doesn’t seem capable yet of loving heart, body and soul, until she is, she will not find true love. I can understand Dylan worrying that H would eventually be unfaithful and taking the money. It’s unfortunate that this is the way things turned out. They were both wrong and did things they shouldn’t have. I hope they both learned a lesson here.
Thanks Azmama…I didn’t take it in a negative way. I was just saying, I’m glad someone likes the minutia, cause there is a lot of it in the story…Seriously…It was taken as a compliment…Thanks again……BTW Funnyone—I am well…Back in full swing and looking forward to a bubble bath tomorrow.
When I wrote that I enjoyed the minutia, it wasn’t a pejorative statement. I just really enjoy the detail to the story. It makes the story substantive. I really have to read the story not skim. Pls. continue. PPS.