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First Year- Chapter 25
She continued her stretching with a watchful eye on me. Talk about being intimidating. She looked at me with a grin as if she knew she was about cause me grave bodily harm. After our period of stretching was completed she asked, “Are you ready?”
“Yes, let’s go.”
She went to her car and pulled out two containers with water and handed me one. She started with a slow jog at a pace that I had no difficulty keeping pace. I was in a comfortable stride when she picked up her pace. I was able to match her but found it was a little more challenging. Regardless, I was determined I was not going to let her run me into the ground or see me uncomfortable. I could see a slight tongue in cheek smirk on her face as we continued our run. We got to the park and took a short break. Actually I took a short break as I tried to not heave to catch my breath. She continued to jog in place while I calmly tried to catch my breath. I was sucking the water down fairly quickly when she pulled it away from me. “You are doing to need that. Don’t drink anymore. You might get cramps too.”
I inhaled deeply and nodded. I was still short of breath and really couldn’t muster up any words. I was bent over and had my hands on my knees but somehow, I thought I was holding it together. Once I felt I could stand and catch a full breath she asked, “Are you ready?”
Before I could nod, she took off into the park. We began a mile hike up to the top of the park. I knew she was an entirely different league than I was because I was really hoping for the slow leisurely walk up as a reward to the run we just did. But Bette did not want to miss her stride and seemed to want to run up this almost treacherous incline. Well it seemed treacherous to me. She laughed at me as it became quite apparent that my one week of attempted preparation was not sufficient to get into shape for this mad dash with Bette. I was determined to not quit. When we got to the top, I finally saw a bit of sweat on her brow, although I was practically drenched. My short sleeve shirt was plenty warm. Actually I felt way over dressed for the activity. I wished I was only in a sports bra. I was simply almost run into the ground. Once I caught my breath, I would appreciate the beautiful view of the city of LA. We could see the coast out in the distance, the downtown skyline, the Hollywood sign and I could just barely see snow capped mountains in the distance. Bette smiled as I sucked all the air of the top of the trail and asked, “Are you going to be okay?”
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(28 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
OK, babe. You hit another out of the park. Revenge is a dish best served cold.
azmama, what was the cold part? Sounded pretty hot and sweaty! Yeesh, I’m sure we all have things to regret saying from our adolescent years, but to be reminded of something particularly nasty by your victim whom you’re now attracted to? Awkward! Weeeeel, since Bette made a real revelation, I’d say it’s Helena’s turn.
Great chapter.
wow…now ain’t that a kick in the head…LOL…hmmm wonder what else B is thinking…that H is/was something else!!! Well done…I feel H’s pain after my steep walk on the treadmill tonight!!! Well done – yet again !!!
Very well done, Squirl. This chapter certainly gives us a new perspective on the roots of Bette’s tendency to withdraw and isolate. It also makes me wonder if she is still struggling a bit with hidden self-esteem issues. I didn’t take her showing her body to Helena as revenge though. I thought she was seeking confirmation and validation for the changes she had made in her appearance — I thought she wanted what she didn’t have before – Helena’s acceptance. This opens up a whole new avenue in the story. I hope these runs become a more regular event.
Squirl this might sound kind of goofy as my thought process is not processing properly today but lets try, sounds like Bette has/had a complex type of thing that allowed her to worry about what others thought. While sometimes that’s important I believe our young women and men should be taught that nagitive statements should be tossed away. So glad Bette was able to relieve herself of that demond and will now be able to not have it haunting her. I will be awaiting chapter 26. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Nice…and unexpected! I like this unknown (to Helena) layer in their relationship. It gives them a ready made emotional foundation….I can see…this will be fun! It is interesting that with the pain that Bette was so easily able to re-visit from a time past…that she actually provided an open ear to Helena when she needed it. Now we have an idea of why Bette works so hard to be perfect… and why she wanted to punish Helena… “She looked at me with a grin as if she knew she was about cause me grave bodily harm” lol!
How do i love this story…let me count the ways! 1) Bette shirtless :-)2) Helena throbbing over seeing Bette shirtless3) This whole section -That was all she gave me. I didn’t ask for more. She was definitely not willing or ready to share anything more. We stayed up there for a few more minutes and enjoyed the views and silently each other’s company. The more time I spent with Bette, the more she fascinated me and the more I wanted to spend time with her. There was definitely an air of mystery about her. She intrigued me. I wanted to know more about her and what ran through her head. There was much more to Dr Porter than she presented. PPS!
Great update! Now we can understand why Bette may have kept her distant from the others. I know revenge can be sweet at times, but I would think it would lose some of it’s appeal if you have to remind someone of what they did. I don’t think the joy would be there. Knowing the person who caused that pain, wasn’t even worth a memory to them. But we all were young once. And we all have said or did some really stupid things growing up. But you live and you learn, well some of us do.
Excellent chapter! Good for Bette for not harboring any bad feelings for Hel.
who new Bette would harbour such memories…Well she has Hels noticing her now.. good update
Is this a BeLena? Please, please, please! I am a TiBette fan but when the writing is good and all, I can be a BeLena too! Can this be a BeLena? Please? :)
S once again a great chapter, loved how Bette finally told Helena how they met and the horrible time how she spent it,in some ways just like Helena. It was not the best time of thier lives. I think that Rick noticed Bette and she saw it as love and it could be but not her real love IMO,not saying it’s Helena or Tina or ? but IMO time will tell. I so enjoy reading your story S!
Well at least Bette did something about her weight…and never seemingly hated Helena for it. Instead did something about it. And it has now paid off for her. Helena can not remember but at least she did not dismiss her actions towards Bette and apologized to her. Nice update…Helenas looking for condo’s how come? PPVS