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First Year- Chapter 26
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I thought to myself. This was beautiful but I cannot begin to imagine the price tag on this one. Bette had taken off to explore the loft on her own. She yelled down at me, “Helena, you have to get up here and see this place. This is incredible.”
I went up the stairs to meet her on the entrance to a private oasis. The bedroom has a wide view of the large picture windows that accentuated downstairs and showed the incredible views of the mountains and skyline around LA. The bedroom was spacious and easily accommodated the king-sized bed and the other furnishings. The bamboo floors were covered with scattered beautiful throw rugs. The custom built closet with multiple high end built-in maple wood features, was definitely large enough to accommodate my clothing and then some. The bathroom had a separate garden tub and a large shower stall with multiple shower heads. Bette playfully pretended she was taking a shower with water coming from every direction. I had to admit, I did envision her naked in the shower waiting for me to join her. I blushed and had to shake that image from my head. I smiled as I looked around, I thought, I was definitely liking that place.
We went back downstairs to join Janet, who smiled when she saw our reaction. “I thought you would love it. Well, ladies do you think it would meet your needs?”
I was initially perplexed at the question but I realized she thought Bette and I were a couple. Bette quickly corrected, “No, no, this is Helena’s hunt. But I know Rick would love this place.”
Janet looked back and forth at us and I clarified, “Rick is her boyfriend. We are not together.”
“I’m sorry. I assumed. Not a problem.”
Bette and I looked at each other then chuckled. I shook my head to shake off such thoughts and turned back to Janet. “Okay, this place is great. Did you say what the asking price is?”
"I can tell you this, the seller is very anxious to sell. That’s who I was talking to on the phone when you came in. I think there is definitely room to negotiate. He is asking four and half million dollars.”
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S, am I the first to post :-) Just got our of work and come to find your new chapter up, lucky I am. Now I really enjoyed how both women had a gret time and how Bettte ended up looking at the new condo that would most likely be Helena’s and even maybe Bette one day,,,,only time and love will tell for these women huh S? I like this Janet a very good salewoman and knows all the tricks in the book IMO. I too would like to know what Bette is thinking when she hides back within herself…..loved it S!
This story is just amazing. The narrative, the dialogue….all top drawer. Maybe Belena not right away but soon?
Well, Bette is rather more noble than most going into dermatology. She was right about the umbrella, for sure. I once sat outside in shorts to read my Western Civ chapter. Took about an hour and a half. Next morning, while every thing else was fine, my shins and the top of my feet were violet (not a color I’ve ever seen in human skin before or since). When I got out of bed to get ready for French class I screamed and fell back on the bed. Felt like daggers being thrust into my lower legs. Needless to say I do NOT sunbathe. You could not pay me to get on a tanning bed. Good news is people are genuinely surprised to hear my age. Is it going to be the Peabody Penthouse? It WOULD be a good investment. Seems Bette and Helena are getting very close. Send more soon.
OH GOODY, my day is complete now, thank heavens you posted Squirl it just wasn’t Saturday without you. So Ms Bette is hesitating on the marring Rick gig, well ain’t that a beautiful thing. I think that Hels has to meet a few more people in her rotations though. Looking forwarad to the next round. Hope all is well with you. Thank you, Md aka Oma
This is my favorite chapter so far. Excellent writing.
hello my passionate friend… all the way from the beach to say you are completely and utterly amazing… your words have accompanied me on this journey and I cannot think of a more beautiful and passionate story by a more beautiful and passionate soul to be with… love and hugs, always and forever, JC
Indeed that was a good day with excellent company…Bette is revealing more…Janet is relentless and the place sounds beautiful…with bamboo floors, beck and call five star service, and multiple shower heads to boot! Verrrry nice feel! PPS
Hola Squirl…why didn’t H just ask her…”a penny for your thought”? As usual loved the update…their dialogue was really good and genuine… Tres bien!!!
ahh I love this story annd your a kick ass writer :)
I think Hels dont really know her own mind…one minute its all Dylan then Carmen and both at the same time than came along Lara…Tina and Bette have always been a maybe…Jeez Helena slow your roll. I think that she needs to focus on her self more and not unavailable women. And its true for all she knows Bette could be into her man and their future.She needs to stop dreaming, having fantasies and come back to the real world where she needs to be.PPVS. I want to see whether Helena can maintain an actual friendship while theyre in a relationship. I do hold out for her and Bette. But not like this, for things to become simplier and both women free from entanglements. Gr8 work
Great post, Squirl. I wish Bette would be a little more forthcoming with Helena… I guess Helena won’t be asking more pointed questions – she already feels as though she is walking on eggshells around Bette and is fearful of losing her friendship. The salesperson was hysterical – I could so see that happening. I hope Helena gets the money together – maybe from her upcoming trust dispersement. I agree that the Peabody Penthouse has a nice ring to it. Oh, and since Bette already saw the place, she’ll know exactly where to go once things start to heat up…boy, do I hope its soon, too. :)
Helena needs to get attached to the condoa nd the company (“Bette” of course). There has to eb something deeper and Bette and Helena having this growing friendship that if we’re lucky enough will blossom into something more. Didn’t that condo have 2 master suites? I can see Bette and Rick having some major fallout and Bette needing a place to stay for a while… We all know what can happen duirng the late night hours when… I’ll stop now, but pps!
I’ve been lurking here 4ever but this is only my second time commenting. I’m loving the story and I wait with bated breath for each post. It seems Helena is falling for Bette. I’m hoping this is where she can do some learning and through Bette’s non-interest in her see the effect she has had on Carmen. I truly think she loves Carmen but at the moment is far too ill-equipped emotionally to admit it. After her breakup with Dylan, she needs to take time for herself and just be by herself. Definitely, she needs to have some dalliances to appease her libido, just NONE with her co-workers. But after that she needs to re-evaluate things and hopefully she comes to the realization that she is indeed in love with Carmen.
I’ve been lurking here 4ever but this is only my second time commenting. I’m loving the story and I wait with bated breath for each post. It seems Helena is falling for Bette. I’m hoping this is where she can do some learning and through Bette’s non-interest in her see the effect she has had on Carmen. I truly think she loves Carmen but at the moment is far too ill-equipped emotionally to admit it. After her breakup with Dylan, she needs to take time for herself and just be by herself. Definitely, she needs to have some dalliances to appease her libido, just NONE with her co-workers. But after that she needs to re-evaluate things and hopefully she comes to the realization that she is indeed in love with Carmen.