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FIX IT CHALLENGE #4: Infidelity?
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Tina felt herself shrug as the flickering of the screen was the only light in the room
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Lindsey76: I am just so scared…
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The anonimity of typing her words was a relieve for the blonde, and she found herself typing all her worries… All her pain… It was as if she laid her heart and soul in her fingertips as she saw the lettres form into words and then into the sentences that ment the centre of her being and her heart
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Lindsey76: Truth be told? I don’t like who I am any more, I don’t like who I have become… Not the way I look, but especially not the way I act… And if I can’t even like myself, how can someone else?
Daddyof2: I like you Lindsey… You are a very beautifull soul… When you open up and allow your heart to grow beyond the bounderies you mind has put on it… You are very special!
Lindsey76: I so much want to reach out… I felt so immensly strange sitting there at sextherapy… As if I even can’t do that anymore… I do feel sexual desire… I just am to afraid of rejection to act on it…
Daddyof2: Why don’t we practice?
Lindsey76: What do you mean?
Daddyof2: Do you want me to fuck you?
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Tina felt her eyes grow wide with amazement as she stared at those words and felt her body respond to them… The rhythm of her heart increased and she felt the muscles of her lower abdomen tighten as a shiver of desire went through her body…
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Daddyof2: Lindsey?
Lindsey76: Yes?
Daddyof2: Do you?
Lindsey76: Yes I want you to fuck me…
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Tina threw herself backwards in the chair as she saw the words she had just typed appear on the screen… A moment of fear and hesitation made it’s way to her heart and but she quickly pushed it back into her mind… Allowing her body, her desire to take over as she read how her chatpartner would please her…
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Daddyof2: Touch yourself…
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Yes, you fixed it! There is no conundrum yet created by Chaiken that cannot be converted to a connubial confection by our fearless fanfic fashioners! Another awkward agitprop averted! Bravo!
LOL when I read Bette saying that she loves Tina I was like WHAT? SHE’s CHEATING YOU!!!!!! then I continue reading and I was RFOLAMO when Bette says: who’s your daddy? LOL… I loved it!!!… excellent as always ;)
awesome! for a second i thought: wait a minute this is about fix! why she continued chatting! but then i can read how clever and fantastic writter you are! this was so so good, if just we can a little of this in the next season for B&T.
Okay, I am sorry but you can not study to be a doctor right at this moment. The show needs you now, Doctor justloveB+T. The show needs you to do several transplants of hearts and brains, ASAP. You are to be on the next plane to B&T land. Okay on a serious note, this was awesome. You took a horrible scene and turned into a very loving reconnection of my two favorite women. Now go study so that you can really fix their hearts. You really are going to make a good doctor someday.
If only, loved this Bette is so cute. thanks
Alright!!! You got this story right as it should have been. It’s so amazing how so many women here see Bette and Tina, wanting them together, happy in love. Thanks for this wonderful rendition of how the scene should have played out.
LMAO!!!!!!! I figured that was what you had done. I’m like, “Wait a minute. She’s probably a bigger TiBetter than me. No way in HELL will this go down the crapper!” Alright I need to wake up. It’s too damn early. =/
Oh F*ck that was good…I loved that story a lot B+T =)
Hehe, Mama T and Mama B are no longer making cookies. I love how you tied it to the sex therapist, very clever!
Oh JLB&T you’re so goood to our B&T, thank you.
i knew it!!!!! perfect…if only…this was perfect. TiBette forever!!! LOL
LMAO when I read daddyof2 saying that he loves Lindsey I was like WHAT? and when she said I love you, I need you. IN return I screamed HEY WHAT THE FUCK? But phew, than god I decided to finish from there.. Loved it..
Genius!
Okay now that I’m actually awake I read this again. LOL And I actually have a more intelligent comment this time. Way back when I was in my late teens I was engaged to a guy (Shut up! lol) that I had originally met online. Anyway, there were times it was tough for me to speak to him as Heather and Glenn, so every once in a blue moon we’d log onto different usernames and chat as we had when we first met (long-distance relationship for a long time, hence the chatting online) before things got serious. It actually did help, and this stand-alone took me back to that time in my life. So yeah just in case anyone might think doing that is a bunch of crap, don’t knock it till ya try it. ;)
Damn this is good and you are awesome JL B&T and this is the way for B&T that we all wanted. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Well, what can i say, writing these feelings down, i know for sure that you have had cybersex yourself in the past. I sure recognized them luv. Great writing. Bedankt liefje, mijn dag kan niet meer stuk nu.
Very nice – keep it up. We all wish this would have taken place in season 3 :o). Post soon
This story originally threw me for a loop when I read it last week (playing catch-up with all the challenge submissions), and I was so pleased to see how you truly did fix it! “Hey, baby, who’s your daddy?” ROTFLMAO! Great job! You tricked most of us, it seems!