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FIX IT CHALLENGE #4: Infidelity?
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The blonde complied to the sentence, but also to the outcry of her body as she allowed her hand to drift inside her top, to her breast, caressing her allready hard nipples, she moaned softly and unzipped her pants with her other hand, letting her fingers slip inbetween her legs, towards that one spot that was screaming for attention…
Momentarily letting go of her breast she typed those two words… Her fantasy of the moment, pushing all other thoughts out of her mind…
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Lindsey76: You too…
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The strenght of her own passion, surprised Tina as she saw the answer.
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Daddyof2: I already am…
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Waves of desire went through her body as she let a finger slide inside of her… She moaned, feeling the wettness and hotness of what was the center of her being at this moment… With the tips of 2 fingers of the other hand she obeyed the demand for attention of that small nub… Carressing it carefully she felt the tension of all her muscles increase… She felt as if her heart was pounding only in that part of her now… Her skin was glimmery with sweat and as she thrusted her fingers inside of her with more force she felt the orgasm beginning to build up… The thought of her chatparter mastubating to almost pushed her over the edge… And she felt how her fingers increased the rhythm in which they stroked the clit and as she felt the muscles of her face tighten she pushed the fingers that were inside her up against herG-spot… That marvelous feeling of riding a wave of lust and desire merged into her orgasm. She felt her body jerk intensly as she let out all her bounderies and felt heavenly for at least a minute, before she withdrew her hands…
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Daddyof2: Are you still there?
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Tina felt tears well up into her eyes as the fear got a hold of her heart again…
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Lindsey76: Yes…
Daddyof2: Did you feel that? Are you ok?
Lindsey76: I am not sure…
Daddyof2: I love you…
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Tina stared at those words, feeling the tears roll over her cheeks…
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Lindsey76: I love you too… I need you…
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There was a silence between the two… As Tina covered her face with her hands and began to sob, letting all her emotions run through her and feeling all her guilt and pain…
Oh Bette…
She mumbled, still staring at the words on the screen.
Feeling the soft hands on her shaking shoulders, Tina turned and grabbed the woman who was standing behind her, clinging onto her tightly…
I do love you T…
Bette uttered, stroking the blondes soft hair, pulling her even closer… The deep sobs slowly grew less intense and Tina looked up to the love of her life, shyly, as Bette turned the chair and crouched before her, tenderly cupping her wifes face and pressing her lips on hers gently… Kissing her repeatedly
Tina glanced over at the screen and felt her face jerk into a smile…
You are something else… Daddyof2???
Cocking one eyebrow the blond looked, wondering how her wife had come up with that name, into the chocolatebrown eyes she was drowning into after all those months of avoiding eyecontact… Any contact…
Bette shrugged and smiled back, softly kissing Tina’s lips before she withdrew and spread her arms for Tina to feel welcomed in them
Hey baby… Who’s your daddy?
The brunnette laughed and Tina got up, playfully pushing her life’s partner towards the bed… As the brunnette tripped and fell backwards onto the matrass, she pulled Tina with her and they just laid there staring into eachothers eyes…
That chatting idea of dr Farber sure paid off…
Bette said, pushing an escaped lock of blond hair behind Tina’s ear, looking tenderly into her wifes hazel eyes, that instantly began to sparkle, as the blonde leaned in for a kiss…
I love you Daddyof2
Love you too Lindsey76
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Yes, you fixed it! There is no conundrum yet created by Chaiken that cannot be converted to a connubial confection by our fearless fanfic fashioners! Another awkward agitprop averted! Bravo!
LOL when I read Bette saying that she loves Tina I was like WHAT? SHE’s CHEATING YOU!!!!!! then I continue reading and I was RFOLAMO when Bette says: who’s your daddy? LOL… I loved it!!!… excellent as always ;)
awesome! for a second i thought: wait a minute this is about fix! why she continued chatting! but then i can read how clever and fantastic writter you are! this was so so good, if just we can a little of this in the next season for B&T.
Okay, I am sorry but you can not study to be a doctor right at this moment. The show needs you now, Doctor justloveB+T. The show needs you to do several transplants of hearts and brains, ASAP. You are to be on the next plane to B&T land. Okay on a serious note, this was awesome. You took a horrible scene and turned into a very loving reconnection of my two favorite women. Now go study so that you can really fix their hearts. You really are going to make a good doctor someday.
If only, loved this Bette is so cute. thanks
Alright!!! You got this story right as it should have been. It’s so amazing how so many women here see Bette and Tina, wanting them together, happy in love. Thanks for this wonderful rendition of how the scene should have played out.
LMAO!!!!!!! I figured that was what you had done. I’m like, “Wait a minute. She’s probably a bigger TiBetter than me. No way in HELL will this go down the crapper!” Alright I need to wake up. It’s too damn early. =/
Oh F*ck that was good…I loved that story a lot B+T =)
Hehe, Mama T and Mama B are no longer making cookies. I love how you tied it to the sex therapist, very clever!
Oh JLB&T you’re so goood to our B&T, thank you.
i knew it!!!!! perfect…if only…this was perfect. TiBette forever!!! LOL
LMAO when I read daddyof2 saying that he loves Lindsey I was like WHAT? and when she said I love you, I need you. IN return I screamed HEY WHAT THE FUCK? But phew, than god I decided to finish from there.. Loved it..
Genius!
Okay now that I’m actually awake I read this again. LOL And I actually have a more intelligent comment this time. Way back when I was in my late teens I was engaged to a guy (Shut up! lol) that I had originally met online. Anyway, there were times it was tough for me to speak to him as Heather and Glenn, so every once in a blue moon we’d log onto different usernames and chat as we had when we first met (long-distance relationship for a long time, hence the chatting online) before things got serious. It actually did help, and this stand-alone took me back to that time in my life. So yeah just in case anyone might think doing that is a bunch of crap, don’t knock it till ya try it. ;)
Damn this is good and you are awesome JL B&T and this is the way for B&T that we all wanted. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Well, what can i say, writing these feelings down, i know for sure that you have had cybersex yourself in the past. I sure recognized them luv. Great writing. Bedankt liefje, mijn dag kan niet meer stuk nu.
Very nice – keep it up. We all wish this would have taken place in season 3 :o). Post soon
This story originally threw me for a loop when I read it last week (playing catch-up with all the challenge submissions), and I was so pleased to see how you truly did fix it! “Hey, baby, who’s your daddy?” ROTFLMAO! Great job! You tricked most of us, it seems!