Fan Fiction
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Flair for the dramatic
“Hi Tina. Hey I just spoke to Alice. She told me you were just leaving the mall. Could you possibly come and pick me up? I’m about 15 minutes away at the beach. I had car trouble and they had to tow it so I’m stranded. I called Alice but she said she had a dinner appointment that she couldn’t break.”
“Yeah sure I can get you. Do you know what’s wrong with the car?”
“Not sure. It was late when they took it in. The mechanic had already gone home. I’ll have to wait until tomorrow.”
“Where are you?”
“I’m really close to a seafood restaurant.” Shane gives her the name and location of the restaurant. Tina knows it well since it’s just a few blocks from their beach house. It’s become one of Bette and Angie’s favorites and she loved their desserts.
“Wait for me in front of the restaurant. I’ll see you in about 15 minutes OK?”
Before they hang up Shane suggested maybe they could have dinner together before heading home. Tina calls Bette to check in since they hadn’t spoken to each other all afternoon.
***
“Hey Tee.”
“Hey babe. How was your day?”
“Angie and I had a great day. How was yours?”
“Well I had a nice visit with Leigh this morning.”
“Really. So what was the problem at the condo? I thought you guys had everything inspected.”
“Don’t play innocent. You know she just used the problem at the condo as an excuse to get me to come over so she could deliver your little surprise.”
Bette is laughing. “Oh that was clever. I didn’t know she would be delivering it in that way. I just told her to make sure she gave it to you sometime this week.”
“Well I got it. Are you going to tell me what it’s about?”
“I told you in my note. I will tell you when you see me. I can’t do it over the phone. So where are you now? Are you still shopping with Alice?”
“No actually I’m heading to the beach to get Shane. She had car trouble and is stranded. They had to tow her car. She won’t know what is wrong with it until tomorrow.”
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Tina is not the only one who is overwhelmed, i have so much emotions running wild, i am surprised with my reaction to this story.
BAT2012, you for sure are a master in describing everything in detail and i fell in love with your Bette&Tina and the other people in this story.
Up to the final!
I’m with BIBI truly overwhelmed at the love and attention BETTE displays in delivering her acts of love.True friends ready to help with only a phone call or a spoken word without looking for anything in return just knowing they helped someone fulfill a wish.thanks pps.
I’m with the comments made by Bibi and dunnthat :)
I love Bette but your version of her in this story I love even more :)
Mixed emotions regarding the finale tomorrow – looking forward to it but sad that’s it here.
Thanks BAT, please now get your Act together for the Sequel asap especially as I’m a big Peggy fan :)
This was one of the best chapters to this story! In my opinion! Even though I love the whole story! I’m sad to see the end tomorrow:( I’m just looking forward to the next phrase of their lives. Off to eat me some strawberry shortcake that I made. PPS
OH that was good!!
What a great chapter. Loved it, thanks
It was fantastic that chapter, and I’m getting
sad because after going to the next chapter
It will be the end.
I spent my whole afternoon sitting here alone
to update the excellent story! .
Bette and Tina are a wonderful couple!
The complete constellation.