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    Flames of Passion Chapter 56

    Story written on April 24, 2005 by Mates4eva.
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    Sarah arrives at Shane’s, will they make up or break up??? Alice arranges a party that Bette and Tina will never forget……..

    Shane: Hey doc? (walking inside with Sarah gripping her hand tightly) hi guys! Sorry were a bit late.

    Sarah: (smiling sheepishly as she walked by) Hi Dr. Dana hey!

    Dana: Hey guys, (Danas eyes became wider and she glanced at Sarah and actually saw how ***** she looked) God Sarah, you look totally.Wow! Shane is going to let you out like that? Youll have every woman you see after you. Dana was practically drooling.

    Tina: (reinforcing) Danas right sis, you have totally got it working for you. You look amazing.

    Sarah was now feeling more confident, blushing slightly at the comments, Thanks guys. Sitting on the arm of the couch, Shane wrapped her arms around Sarah, standing right behind her.

    Alice walked over and tapped Dana lightly on the back of the head. She was still standing at the wide-open front door, her eyes glued, transfixed on Sarah.

    Alice: (loudly) Hey, doc, you can stop drooling now, Sarah has sat down.

    The girls laughed as Dana snapped out of her (x-rated) thoughts, (dazed) Huh, whatum, sorry. I wasntum I wouldnterr, I didnt Dana realized what she had done and embarrassed, she tried unsuccessfully to explain.

    Shane interrupted, saving her from further humiliation, Its ok Dane, I was the same when Sarah first showed me the costume. winking sexily at Sarah, mildly jealous and aroused at the same time, that another woman found her girlfriend so appealing.

    Dana: (politely) Yeah, thankssorry! (hastily trying to change the subject) So wheres Kit? Arent we supposed to have left like (glaring at her watch) like 20 minutes ago?

    The girls all burst into laughter at Danas obvious subject change and Alice interceded, Thats right doc! Id better get on the phone.

    Just as Alice flipped out her cell to dial Kits number, the gang heard a loud audible horn, continually beeping from the vicinity of the street. Alice looked out the window and smiled as she saw Kit pulling up out the front in the white hired mini bus.

    Alice: (joyfully) Ok girls, so Kits arrived, were good to go!! I just have a few points to inform you of before we head off ok! pulling out her infamous notebook.

    The girls all looked at Alice, petrified and excited at the same time, knowing Alice and not having the foggiest idea as to what she had planned for their evening, (assertively) Ok girls, heres the deal. I am going to divulge information to you all on a need to know basis only! Kit knows our destinations because she is our designated driver; but if any of you try and obtain any information from her there will be consequences! Do you all understand so far?

    They all looked at each other unsure whether to smile or cringe, almost all speaking in unison, Yes!

    Alice: (slightly smirking at the looks she was receiving from her friends) All right, this evening we are venturing on a pub crawl. During the night we will be visiting 5 different clubs, each one different, unique from the other. There are some tasks and rules associated with each different venue and I will brief you on the bus of these! Thats all you girls need to know right now. Any questions?

    Bette and Tina gripped each others hand tightly and smiled wearily. The rest of the women had a similar response.

    Alice: (cheekily) No questions, ok good! Lets go and party girls. leading the girls out to the mini bus.

    As the girls hesitantly, but timidly excited, piled into the vehicle; exchanging pleasantries with Kit, Alice smirked happily, knowing what they had in store for the night, (almost yelling at Kit) Ok, lets hit the road girl! (looking cheekily at Bette and Tina, who had claimed the back seats) Your bacholorette party begins now my friends are you both ready for absolutely anything??!!!?!

    Tbc

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    1. YIPPIE-KI-YAY-MOTHERF*CKER! About damn time!! (There’s about ten writers on this site, that I get so excited when I see them post a new chapter or story, you are definately one of them). Wow, today is like the return of the oldies….oldies, but definately a goodie. First, IMLOVINIT returned with a new chapter, and now you. I ‘m so glad I’m stuck at home today (I have a ten page papers to finish by tuesday for English Lit).

      About a month ago, I found you story, and was immediately hooked (read the entire 55 chapters that day), and I love how you changed Tina’s occupation, a woman in uniform is so sexy!

      Anyway, a-slap-on-your-ass-and-a-kick-in-your-shin-for returning. AWESOME!!

    5. Hey Mates! I was so excited to see a new post on this story! It lived up to all of my expectations and then some. And congrats on the award. You really deserve it!

    6. Hey Mates, once again you made my day!! Congratulations on the award, you totally deserve coz both your stories are absolutly AMAZING!!!! I’m sitting here with the biggest, goofiest, silliest grin on my face lol…. Can’t wait to see what Alice has in store for B&T, it sounds like a whole load of fun! ;) Thanx so much for the update and I can’t wait for more =0)

    8. Wow, I was so happy to see an update on this story. It has been missed greatly. Can’t wait to see what Alice has planned. Congrats on the award. Both your stories are brilliant!

    9. O.K. I need a smoke after the Shane and Sarah love scene (and I don’t even smoke). And this is going to be one wild time with Alice and gang – LOL. Hurry back!

    13. First of all Welcome back…I can’t wait to see where this story is going to head…When i first started reading this chapter it actually reminded me of a song… It’s by blur….

      Anyway…~wicked grin~ I sense this Party is going to be some awesome fun!!!

      dont leave me hangin to long….

      Congrats on the award too…

    14. Hey great way to have some fun. I love Shane and Sarah, Shane is so ready for love. Thanks for giving it to her. Congrates on your award it’s right on appropriate for all your great stories. Thanks

    17. Mates always a pleasor….I like your bacholor party dess up code. Nice one. Can´t wait to see what happens when the night starts. Great update Mates on a fantastic story. Post soon

    18. Mates, congrats on your award. I always look forward to one of your chapters. Both stories are great. I can’t wait to see what Alice has cooked up for Bette and Tina.

    19. great update! I can’t wait to see what happens on the pub crawl, it’s going to be great I’m sure! Excellent choice for Bette’s costume, I can see it now, Officer Porter, laying down the law!

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