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Flames of Passion Chapter 56
Previously:
Just as Sarah was about to sprint back inside to appropriately clothe before going to find Shane she heard a loud voice call her name.
Sarah looked up at their window and saw Alice yelling out to her, Hey Sarahhere you go babe! throwing a long black button up jacket and her car keys down to her, (smiling cheekily) Go after your womanyou two need to talk, Im guessing!
Sarah: (smiling back at Alice immediately covering up her scantily clad body in the coat) Thanks Al, I owe you! winking playfully at her roommate before jumping in Alices car and heading over to Shanes place.
Chapter 56
Sarah turned into the street containing Shanes apartment in record time. She didnt fully comprehend how she actually stayed in control of Alices car on the drive over; all she could remember was that she couldnt get there quick enough as far as she was concerned.
Sarah saw Shanes car parked just down the street and the moment she did she exhaled a huge sigh of relief. Thank god, at least shes here. Sarah thought, uncertainty consuming her mind.
She hastily parked the car; right behind Shanes and just sat there, her heart beating a thousand miles a minute as she collated her thoughts, determined to try and get Shane to divulge to her the reason for her obvious contempt of their previous encounter.
Up until that point in time all Sarah had wanted to do was to get to Shane, to be in the same immediate vicinity as her; Sarah had no idea what she was going to say, no idea why Shane was SO upset with her and no way of knowing if her presence was even wanted.
Sarah quickly was beginning to become unsure of herself. unsure of her relationship.
She opened the car door and exited, making her way determinedly but cautiously across the street and up to Shanes apartment.
When she climbed the last stair, and turned the last corner her eyes immediately affixed on the sullen figure of Shane. and her heart just melted; Shane was sitting on her doorstep, obviously deep in thought, holding her head in the palm of her hands.
Sarah hesitantly approached, (softly whispering) Shane..?
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(55 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
YIPPIE-KI-YAY-MOTHERF*CKER! About damn time!! (There’s about ten writers on this site, that I get so excited when I see them post a new chapter or story, you are definately one of them). Wow, today is like the return of the oldies….oldies, but definately a goodie. First, IMLOVINIT returned with a new chapter, and now you. I ‘m so glad I’m stuck at home today (I have a ten page papers to finish by tuesday for English Lit).
About a month ago, I found you story, and was immediately hooked (read the entire 55 chapters that day), and I love how you changed Tina’s occupation, a woman in uniform is so sexy!
Anyway, a-slap-on-your-ass-and-a-kick-in-your-shin-for returning. AWESOME!!
Can’t wait this should be interesting…I love Alice and her plans…(that never seem to work out like she wants them to.. ;-)
Glad this story is back. Great job!
Very good. Can’t wait for more. please continue soon.
Hey Mates! I was so excited to see a new post on this story! It lived up to all of my expectations and then some. And congrats on the award. You really deserve it!
Hey Mates, once again you made my day!! Congratulations on the award, you totally deserve coz both your stories are absolutly AMAZING!!!! I’m sitting here with the biggest, goofiest, silliest grin on my face lol…. Can’t wait to see what Alice has in store for B&T, it sounds like a whole load of fun! ;) Thanx so much for the update and I can’t wait for more =0)
Congratulations on the award Mates.
Looking forward to what Alice and the girls have in store for B&T, i’m sure it will be smokin!!!
Thank you.
Wow, I was so happy to see an update on this story. It has been missed greatly. Can’t wait to see what Alice has planned. Congrats on the award. Both your stories are brilliant!
O.K. I need a smoke after the Shane and Sarah love scene (and I don’t even smoke). And this is going to be one wild time with Alice and gang – LOL. Hurry back!
Hei !! where you are going to continue?????
love the story, I hope you will continue some day :)
YAAY! We’ve been waiting FOREVER! Haha, great chapter! I’d love to see Bette in an LAPD uniform! Please post again soon!
First of all Welcome back…I can’t wait to see where this story is going to head…When i first started reading this chapter it actually reminded me of a song… It’s by blur….
Anyway…~wicked grin~ I sense this Party is going to be some awesome fun!!!
dont leave me hangin to long….
Congrats on the award too…
Hey great way to have some fun. I love Shane and Sarah, Shane is so ready for love. Thanks for giving it to her. Congrates on your award it’s right on appropriate for all your great stories. Thanks
i almost fell off my chair when i saw rhis chapter,yeh mates, this sounds like a fun night in the making,, can you pick me up on the way?
Great story Mates. Congrats on your award, so well deserved. Thank you for every twist and turn.
Mates always a pleasor….I like your bacholor party dess up code. Nice one. Can´t wait to see what happens when the night starts. Great update Mates on a fantastic story. Post soon
Mates, congrats on your award. I always look forward to one of your chapters. Both stories are great. I can’t wait to see what Alice has cooked up for Bette and Tina.
great update! I can’t wait to see what happens on the pub crawl, it’s going to be great I’m sure! Excellent choice for Bette’s costume, I can see it now, Officer Porter, laying down the law!
Welcome back Mates, U have no idea how happy this story coming back makes me. Please continue your wonderful writing.