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Flicker Chapter 20: Breakfasts
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Aside from her immediate need to touch Bette, everything else seemed to be slowly moving around her… She was in the middle of getting out of bed when she heard a loud shattering sound coming from the kitchen.
“Damn it!” Bette cursed under her breath, picking up broken shards of glass from the kitchen floor and carefully placing them in the trash… occasionally she took the opportunity to peek behind her shoulder just to check if Tina was awake.
She waited a few seconds trying to make sure, yet still there was no sign of her girlfriend anywhere, so Bette turned her attention back to the task she was carrying out a while ago. “Hey…” said Tina’s voice, seemingly coming out of nowhere. “T…” Bette looked like she had just been caught doing something red handed. Quickly she straightened out her clothes, giving Tina a chance to admire the simple lilac colored tank top and a pair of striped off-white silk bottoms she had brought over from home.
“I’m sorry, did I wake you…?”
“No, I was just getting up when I heard you” Wait, what exactly are you doing?”
“Hmm… As of ten minutes ago, I was actually trying to cook you breakfast.”
“And how’s that going along so far?” Tina raised a brow, genuinely interested in what Bette had to say.
“Well… let’s see… I managed to burn the toast… the coffee tastes completely bland… oh and I broke one of your plates.”
“All that in ten minutes?”
“What? Did I set some kind of record?” Bette cleverly remarked, trying her best to keep the indignant look on her face.
“Tell you what, why don’t I take over from here.” Tina offered in time to see a huge grin light up Bette’s face.
“Oh god… I thought you’d never ask.” the kitchen impaired brunette sighed in relief, giving Tina a small kiss before moving out of the way.
In the soft hue of the kitchen surroundings, Bette watched as Tina gingerly arranged slices of bread and fruit across a platter. Today Tina was wearing an over-sized pajama top stopping just above her calves, with the buttons unfastened a little bit too low, and her golden curls loosely tied up in a twist.
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CMC..what are you doing to us all – making us take cold showers at this time of day. Now this breakfast sounds good…can we join in or what. Post soon great update.
im now squared eyed cause ive just reread all your chapters leep em comin i look forward to each one
I’ll never look at my kitchen table the same again. I guess I’ll be eating in the living room. No Worries though—Loved your post!!!
AHHHHHHHH what a great Breakfast!..with all the trimmings… “wink” great post as ususal….as for my portable shower…water is getting very expensive to keep up with these posts…I think I need sell it on ebay and find another way to cool off….LOL
Oh my god!!!! What a chapter, makes me wish I had someone like that to “share” a table with! Excellent as usual CMC, you left me wanting more… hell I’d even settle for a PG-13 one!
oh my god! when’s the next chapter!!
Yum.. breakfast was good ;)
Fabulous story. Adore the way you twist and turn the plot and characters into a believeable story. More please, real soon.
Must say luve afterburn as well.
I normally don’t comment because I don’t think it’s worth the time, But right now I don’t think I have enough words to express how good I think you are… In my opinion this is one of the best Bette and Tina series I have read. Based purely on the great writing and believability factor present within the story. I’m glad after every chapter I read, everything seems so solid and well thought of. I also like the fact that as you write the characters in at their most vulnerable (whether in a love scene, or pouring all their emotions out) you never sell out and take away their depth, as if to make them a completly different person all together just to get a certain effect. Honestly I’m addicted, and like so many others I can read this stuff all day! Thank you
A pleasure reading your story…waiting for more!
I’m in agreance with Sara, I could read this story of yours all day…….in fact i could read anything you write all day……You are that good!!……Thanks for the loving, sweet update…….More soon please:)
Ok Craze, I finally did it!! I read the whole lot at once… well… one after the other. This is a great story, and I really enjoy your style of writing. I don’t know what you have been talking about in the chat. I don’t think your story could get any more perfect. I give you 5 of the biggest stars.
That was Grrrrrrreat! Hmmm…the kitchen table huh? Very good Craze I loved it..your writing style is very smooth and flows nicely. Keep up cummin
I will never look at my kitchen table the same!! Great job, can’t wait for the next chapter.
Amazing as always, I love this story and can’t wait for more!! =0)
some actions won’t hurt!LOL..thx for the update. Your stories is always loved!
Of course I will keep reading ur story..its GREAT and am LUVIN it. So sweet and fun and love-filled and all.
Btw..nice way to have break-fast *lol* but that line aint right:
kitchen impaired brunette sighed in relief” *LMAO*…she cant be that bad!?!?
Oh and just for the record:i do have work ethic..but i like to spice work up sometimes ;-)
Just getting caught up with all your chapters. Love this story. Eagerly awaiting your next update.
Excellent update, more please.
What a beautiful morning they have and in the kitchen table is so hot, love it. Please post soon the next one, thank you!
Another great chapter. It’s especially nice to see Tina in control. I do have a question…how do you burn toast? I don’t doubt bette burn it, but it always cracks me up. Thanks for posting.
loved how tina took control cant wait to see what happens next!!
Ah, I liked the pace of this. I was drawn into it like a vortex sucking everything in it’s path. Excellent job craze. Poof, thanks so much. “Hugs.” Have a Great and Safe Weekend. Carol.