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Flicker Chapter 20: Breakfasts
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Bette marveled at this sight for what seemed to her like forever, until finally she could no longer resist. Promptly she moved in from behind, slowly tracing a finger along the arch of Tina’s back, and kissing the bare skin that exposed the nape of Tina’s neck before distinctly resting her head on one of her lover’s shoulders. The breath that escaped Bette’s lips was enough to excite Tina’s senses, but out of concern for her girlfriend’s well being, Tina let her rational side take over.
“Bette what are you doing?”
“… Finishing what we started last night…” smoothly she slipped a hand up Tina’s shirt, settling on the blonde’s midriff before steadily roaming upward… reaching higher and higher until Tina interrupted with:
“But baby, if we keep going at this rate, we’d starve ourselves to death.”
Bette let out a slight chuckle, Tina was right… she was starving. Considering that by the time she got back to the gallery yesterday she barely had anything for lunch, and completely missed out on dinner the last night, she was amazed at how her resilient her body was to hunger…
“Just a little longer… please…” Bette pleaded, pressing her body against Tina’s, molding their forms perfectly…
Tina put everything she was doing aside and turned to face Bette, a mischievous grin on her face, “Well in that case, I think this is going to take a little longer than what you had in mind…”
Unaware of what she had just done, Bette unwittingly put Tina in control… Now, to her credit Tina did try to give her a chance to call the whole thing off… but then again, who in their right mind would? She backed Bette into an alcove by the fridge, then proceeded to pin her against the wall as she moved to assault Bette with random kisses, some of them soft and then some impressively hard… then back to soft again…
To Bette the sensation was indescribably good, so she just closed her eyes and moaned Tina’s name in praise… in the middle undoing the twist in Tina’s hair, an idea came to mind.
“Tina…” Bette breathed, her eyes now open and apparently focusing on something Tina couldn’t see.
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CMC..what are you doing to us all – making us take cold showers at this time of day. Now this breakfast sounds good…can we join in or what. Post soon great update.
im now squared eyed cause ive just reread all your chapters leep em comin i look forward to each one
I’ll never look at my kitchen table the same again. I guess I’ll be eating in the living room. No Worries though—Loved your post!!!
AHHHHHHHH what a great Breakfast!..with all the trimmings… “wink” great post as ususal….as for my portable shower…water is getting very expensive to keep up with these posts…I think I need sell it on ebay and find another way to cool off….LOL
Oh my god!!!! What a chapter, makes me wish I had someone like that to “share” a table with! Excellent as usual CMC, you left me wanting more… hell I’d even settle for a PG-13 one!
oh my god! when’s the next chapter!!
Yum.. breakfast was good ;)
Fabulous story. Adore the way you twist and turn the plot and characters into a believeable story. More please, real soon.
Must say luve afterburn as well.
I normally don’t comment because I don’t think it’s worth the time, But right now I don’t think I have enough words to express how good I think you are… In my opinion this is one of the best Bette and Tina series I have read. Based purely on the great writing and believability factor present within the story. I’m glad after every chapter I read, everything seems so solid and well thought of. I also like the fact that as you write the characters in at their most vulnerable (whether in a love scene, or pouring all their emotions out) you never sell out and take away their depth, as if to make them a completly different person all together just to get a certain effect. Honestly I’m addicted, and like so many others I can read this stuff all day! Thank you
A pleasure reading your story…waiting for more!
I’m in agreance with Sara, I could read this story of yours all day…….in fact i could read anything you write all day……You are that good!!……Thanks for the loving, sweet update…….More soon please:)
Ok Craze, I finally did it!! I read the whole lot at once… well… one after the other. This is a great story, and I really enjoy your style of writing. I don’t know what you have been talking about in the chat. I don’t think your story could get any more perfect. I give you 5 of the biggest stars.
That was Grrrrrrreat! Hmmm…the kitchen table huh? Very good Craze I loved it..your writing style is very smooth and flows nicely. Keep up cummin
I will never look at my kitchen table the same!! Great job, can’t wait for the next chapter.
Amazing as always, I love this story and can’t wait for more!! =0)
some actions won’t hurt!LOL..thx for the update. Your stories is always loved!
Of course I will keep reading ur story..its GREAT and am LUVIN it. So sweet and fun and love-filled and all.
Btw..nice way to have break-fast *lol* but that line aint right:
kitchen impaired brunette sighed in relief” *LMAO*…she cant be that bad!?!?
Oh and just for the record:i do have work ethic..but i like to spice work up sometimes ;-)
Just getting caught up with all your chapters. Love this story. Eagerly awaiting your next update.
Excellent update, more please.
What a beautiful morning they have and in the kitchen table is so hot, love it. Please post soon the next one, thank you!
Another great chapter. It’s especially nice to see Tina in control. I do have a question…how do you burn toast? I don’t doubt bette burn it, but it always cracks me up. Thanks for posting.
loved how tina took control cant wait to see what happens next!!
Ah, I liked the pace of this. I was drawn into it like a vortex sucking everything in it’s path. Excellent job craze. Poof, thanks so much. “Hugs.” Have a Great and Safe Weekend. Carol.