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Flower Power: Chapter 1
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A sly smile appeared on a flawless face. “I wasn’t done yet ….”
“Yeah? Well, I was about to become undone Bette.”
“And why is that so terrible?” Bette asked innocently.
Alice shook her head in annoyance. A random thought initially accompanied the abrupt side to side motion of her head, but was soon forgotten. Alice’s voice softened. “You’re ridiculous Bette. You know that right?”
“I’ll show you ridiculous a little later,” Bette winked. “So, I bet you’re starving aren’t you Al? You’ve been patiently waiting on me and not once have you complained.” Another short but sweet kiss landed softly on Alice’s lips. A quick glimpse of a pink tongue sweeping across an inviting upper lip nearly caused Alice to fall out of her chair. Bette flashed a mission-accomplished smile. “Are you starving sweetie?”
I so hate it when she transforms into a caring and sensitive human being.
“Um…yeah, I’m hungry.”
“Okay. Let’s order then.” Sable brown eyes smiled brightly before a full display of glacier white teeth received an urgent memo to do the same. Alice could barely absorb the intensity of the gesture, but somehow managed to return the sentiment.
My God. That smile of hers is going to be the death of me. Somebody, help me please.
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“Did you have a good class this morning?” Bette asked between forkfuls of food.
“It was soooo great! Check it out,” An excited Alice hurriedly chewed and swallowed a mouthful of jasmine rice. The display of genuine enthusiasm warmed Bette’s heart and the appreciative art dealer didn’t know whether to smile or to chew. Her sweetheart’s no-nonsense approach to life was something she both appreciated and despised. The reason being: Alice’s half-baked thoughts often manifested into words without any consideration of the outcome. And the guilty party seldom apologized for this frequent behavior. However, when Alice was sorry, she was extremely sorry. And Bette knew it.
“Okay. You are not going to believe this Bette.” Alice spoke in a secretive tone. “Today, we talked about color therapy!!” An emphatic and lively crescendo punctuated the sentence. “I was so stoked because I already knew a bunch thanks to you.”
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OMGOMGOMG *runs off to read*
OMG! G-Star has entered the motherfucking building, holla! lol It’s so good to see you back! I was just re-reading some of your chapters and one in particular: the tree one…so hot! As much as I can no way see A Alice/Bette relationship(They just do nothing for me) this was pretty hot! Can’t wait to see how this unfolds! Post soon!
One more thing: Can we have Bette eating unhealthy junk food? that was too cute!
I’m with smiley on this one. Normally I’m like, “Alice and Bette…ewww.” But this was hot. I’m assuming you wrote the whole story in accordance to the challenge so I already feel a little sad for Alice.
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG your back going to read it now
ok i am soooooooooooooo happy your back, you have scared me for life bette& alice lol it was hot though tina hurry up and get here.. 5 pages is good, longer
GT omg where have u been??? missed u love…well this was overwhelmingly cute and sexy!! plz bless us more with ur writing..toodles
Good to see you back.
Absolutely fantabulous! Welcome back…I missed you!
Oh my goodness. You do not understand how giddy I was to see your name on a story. And the story did not disappoint! Thank you and I am anxiously awaiting your next post. Peace /.
Wow it must be the holiday season, what a nice surprise. Greens it’s good to see you posting once again, you were missed.
Is this their relationship before Tina? There HAS to be a Tina…cause Alice & Bette (whereas this was kinda hot…ummm can’t see them together for long) Please bring on a Tina…NO HELENA PLEASE! Post soon.
I am so excited…going to go read now….don’t even care what it is about…just glad to see you.
You are amazing….you may have me wanting a Bette and Alice reunion…welcome back!
Greentea is back! Best news of the day, it’s been a long drought since Sun salutations.
heaven sent us back there angel.THANK GOD!i was sooo happy when i log on and saw your name that i fell out of my chair.anyway welcome!
Greentea is back!!!! hey babe, glad to see you back with a new tale. I missed you writing while you were gone. about the story, poor alice really can’t handle how freaking charming Bette is huh? can’t wait to see how this one goes down. again welcome back!
Greenie, glad that you will bless us wth another plot from the fertile ground that is your mind. I will be following along this journey as I did the last. I know that we will have fun.
OMG! OMG! It’s GREENTEA…what a day, what a day! Chicki, Ally, Gumby and GREENTEA!!!***doing a happy dance*** I absolutely LOVE your writing and I am soooo happy **HUGE GRIN***that you are back! Alice and Bette….not my favorite, but I don’t care…it will be hot with Greenie at the wheel!!! okay….I’m going to re-read this and breathe..**deep, yoga breathing***LOL!PPS.
Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank goodness your back…I can barely breathe I’m so excited…Oh, and so excited about this beginning…something new something different, and something happy, happy, happy…well hopefully. Pls Pls post again soon as I know your sitting on a bunch of completed chapters already…oh, did I say pls…This is how I pictured Bette and Alice
*yelling* Hey….everybody….yeah you…Green Tea is back. You know the author of Sun Salutations. Awesome right? As with those whose comments have preceded me, I was absolutely ecstatic to see that your name. I love the way you melodically compose phrases. Really, it can be nearly hypnotic. So B and A have been dating more than the 6 weeks we have been led to believe. All I have to say is that anyway, you decide to go with this, I know I will love it. Thank you for sharing.
Welcome back! This was a nice discovery after a long break from fanfic land. I look forward to seeing where this story leads.
Good to see you again Greantea and this is good start and can’t wait to see more. OK post soon please, thanks!
O.M.F.G…..greenie, is it really you? you can’t imagene how many times a day i would drink green tea and think about you, after awhile i had to switch to coffee because it became too painful LOL…..i’m so happy you’re back with a new story, i’m happy you’re still writing, i’m just happy
you are back! is so good! let us see how you will handle this.
Greenie…You’re back! Yea!! Excellent work. You’ve captured their personalities perfectly. Is Alice going to meet w/Heartache? PPS.
HEY GREEN!!! It made my night to see you back! Will enjoy following this story as i have with everything you have written. Looking so forward to your next post.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!OMG!!!!! Its YOUUUUUU!!! Ok i gotta go and read the whole thing now but i dont care one bit who it is about…! You are baaaack…that totally made my day, my week and possibly a few more as well! :-D Ok..off to read now!!
Uh…excuse me while I write a memo to myself: Clarity, there are certain things in this life that are proven facts. For example, Michael Richards is nuts, Britney Spears has way too much money to not be wearing underwear, and Greentea’s fantastic writing style. With that said, now that Greentea has started a new story, you will no longer question the existence of God, Britney’s underwear…or Madonna’s love for Malawian babies. Welcome back like Kotter Greentea! Please raise your hand for a virtual high-5. Looking forward to your next installment of greatness…no pressure!
well well well, looked who popped up! very happy to see you baby girl. have sorely missed you. have lot to catch you up on. would love to hear bout your goings on. email me sometime sweetie. oh and about the story. loved it as always. ya know what your writing does for me. it still does. your great and im glad to see your still creating. thanks.
The Yoga Goddess is back, what a surprise, welcome back. Looking forward to reading what you have in store for us. Thank you.
WELCOME BACK yoga-girl, you’ve truly been missed and what an amazing comeback!!!! That was the hottest PG-13 post I’ve read in a while. There is just one thing I don’t understand – it sounds like Bette is in love with Alice, but how can that be…..when we all know she loves her soulmate Tina LOL :o)). I’m really looking forward to where this story is going, you’ve me hooked already :o))
Wow, green tea, where have you being. So glad to see you back, and I must say this story rocks! :)
I am presuming, before indulging in the next chapter, that this is going to result in the opera visit during which, Bette uses her fingers to, erm, ‘make Alice happy’ – And after which she finishes it for Tina?