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Flower Power: Chapter 2
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A visibly disturbed damsel willed the hands on the giant wall clock to move. “C’mon loser, just give me one more tick followed by a fucking tock and I’m outta here.” Today was one of those days. Alice’s darling kids were getting on her nerves and the tired teacher was about to lose it. The unenthusiastic woman leaned against the edge of her desk and crossed one leg in front of the other. She glared at small, curious faces as if they were across enemy lines. Stubborn arms remained tightly folded across a rapidly rising and falling chest.
The bell finally shrieked and many, mini-people scurried out of the door.
“Thank God!” Alice yelled in relief.
“Are you telling me what to do again?”
“Well, if it isn’t ‘Shane the Pain’. My favorite WeHo Ho.”
“Alice, a couple of kids are still in here,” Shane tilted her head toward the stragglers.
“Fuck ‘em. Those little shits have hopped on every single nerve I have and danced a goddamn jig. I need a drink and some ganja Mon. I cannot believe I got out of my warm bed with my wonderfully, hot, hot, HOT woman for this. And I’m telling you Shane, this morning was Bette-topia. Then, I get here and I don’t know if it was the rain or what, but all the kids were going fucking bananas.”
“Bummer.”
“So Missy, what brings you to suburbia proper?” Alice tapped her foot to an unknown rhythm while waiting on a response from her visitor du jour.
Shane looked uncomfortable. Nervous perhaps. Her fatigued friend didn’t seem to notice.
“I’m just seeing what you’re up to Al.”
While Alice processed Shane’s reply, the scent of a zillion breathtaking blossoms tickled her nose. The infatuated female caught a quick glance of the colorful arrangement and smiled to herself. Or at least that was her intention.
“Al, why are you cheesing like that?”
“Shane, don’t hate,” Alice firmly stated. “I just wanted to get my smile on for a minute. But back to you. You coulda called to see what I was up to Miss Liar-Liar, a visit was not required. Although, I must admit that it’s always nice to see you. Actually, I take that back.” Alice stared for a few seconds at the slim, boyish figure before her. “Spill it Shane. You’re killing me here… and let me tell you something. You better tighten up on that poker face ‘cause you’re slipping McCutcheon.”
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first runs off to read
Im so glad your writing again you have such a fantastic way with words it feels like im there. Poor Alice , Poor Bette, bloody Gabby(mmmm guin turner) Bette needs to get her ass over to Alices and grovel then listen to her girlfriend who needs to fall apart for a few hours then take her mind off it all. I wait to see where you take us with anticipation. Post soon
omg, I love your bette, well the first half of the chapter anyway…She’s way to alpha nasty in the latter…Love the story, not sure about where it’s going….can’t we stay in happy happy land….at least say for….30 chapters. Really, that would be nice, especially your happy land!!!! sigh…
Once again I do the happy dance and grin – and once again the story does not dissapoint. I am already so into this story. Anxiously awaiting the next installment.
Greenie,You’ve got the skills, girl. The dialogue is superb, just spot on. Bette is just alpha, she’s nasty. Alice just wants Bette to listen and tell Alice that she has nothing to worry about w/Gabby cos she and Al are together. Al needs reassurance but Bette is somewhat insecure as well and selfish. But sexy as hell. PPS. this is very enjoyable.
Multiple emotions in this chapter. The beginning was happy and sexy with Alice saying to hell with being on time and making time for Bette. Alice and Shane in the classroom was sad because it seems like Alice is trying really hard but is easily swayed to a bad place with the news of Gabby’s return. And at the end, disappointment evolving into anger with Bette going on and on about her major faux pas with the art critic. Sure we all have moments where it’s all about us and we need to rant, but then she cut off Alice after asking about her day, and then that night she zoned out while on the phone. Man Bette really did look like an asshole in this chapter. lol
Uh…yeah Greentea…this memo just came in for Bette: 1)True – heartbreak may be on the horizon for you. 2)True – It may be Gabby induced…but it also may be having your head up your ass induced. Listen, as opposed to hearing, Bette! I once dated someone who communicated to me over the phone that they’d like to take a cruise. Well I decided to tune out the conversation and when I finally tuned back in and realized that I had been asked a question, my answer was, “Absolutely!” That inattentive “absolutely!” that I uttered had me paying for a cruise…for two. I’m just trying to help a sista’ out, Bette. Greentea, a virtual high-5 to you for yet another stellar chapter. No doubt I’m awaiting the next one
TINA WHERE THE HELL ARE U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am being scared for life here lol yeah al go back to gabby like yesterday 5 PAGES LONGER
“A gentle kiss on flowering lips” is this where the story title,” Flower Power” generated from…hmmm? I feel bad for Alice. Bette is all wrapped up in her own little “art dillema” that she isn’t there to support Alice with her insecurity about Gabby. Lucky for Alice that Shane is a good listener…she is going to need her to deal with Gabby’s return. Bette maybe HOT, but Hotness shouldn’t be confused with the word RELATIONSHIP. PPS.
hey gt! im glad you posted tonite,and it took ya long enough..loloh wheres our special lady laurel..p.p.s.
wow, another miracle happened and we didn’t have to wait a year for chapter 2 LOL…well, bette is behaving just like she was with tina sometimes, i guess tina did change her some if they were together 7 years and not 6 weeks like alice and bette…anyway, i love alice, i really do but is it wrong of me to wish for tina to appear really really soon? LOL until she does, i will read to see how alice will deal with gabby who was such a bad ass in a good way…did i mentioned how happy i am that you’re back :)
hey greenie! great chapter. I can only assume that Bette is being portrayed as a bit of an asshole in order to dramatize to difference between bette prior to meeting Tina, and how she is after? so do as you must missy, you know im always game for your tales.
I love Alice but not as much as I love Tina so Bette hopefully will be meeting her soul mate soon.
its delicious. staying up just to read. oh those damn little things called communicatin and listening. where would we be if we did it in our relationships. ;)thanks sweetie.
Bye Alice – Hello Tina :o))
For some reason, my first comment did not post a moment ago. So I’ll say again, while Bette is more than a little annoying in this chapter, I really HOPE a Bette and Tina relationship is not in the future. :)
Ohhhh I can’t belive you’re back “doing the happy dance” but B & A – what are you thinking……..ohh mann and I’m sitting here drunk reading you strory after a chrismas lunch – jesus. And then you pull this on me :O) but wonderfull to see you back. Post soon
Oh damn this is bad, but hope Bette and Tina will meet soon and bye Alice!
Wonderful chapter greentea! Love the way you write. Now where is T …
I just love it when Bette yells “FUCK” and it’s always a true pleasure to your one of your posts.