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Flower Power: Chapter 2
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“They are so intelligent you know. Don’t you think children today are smarter than adults were when we were kids?” Alice laughed. “Okay, not a good analogy, I don’t even know what I’m trying to say. But right here, in this very room Shane, my little people are learning life skills to cope with fucking shit like this. Stuff they can’t control.” Alice exhaled and examined her nails not knowing what else to do. She had been thrown for a loop and whoever was supposed to stop the room from going round and round forgot to flip the switch to the off position.
Shane watched as Alice’s eyes became dimmer by the second. She had to revive her friend somehow, she couldn’t let her crash.
“So Al…. they like to write?”
“Yeah, they do. Writing is such terrific therapy Shane. These guys are way ahead of so many grown-ups. They already know how to channel their thoughts and feelings into words on paper. Fucking awesome.”
“That’s really great Al.”
“You know…I just,” Alice began. She was quickly drifting to another place and needed to feel the strength of Bette’s arms to secure her. The wobbly and unstable feeling she was now experiencing was for the birds. Alice needed grounding and Bette was her anchor.
“You just what Al?”
“Um… I just want these kids to be able to write when they can’t do anything else. You know, when they can’t talk. Or think, or sleep, or eat. I want ‘em to write as an outlet so they don’t lose their minds when things don’t go their way. Or better yet, when things do go their way.” Alice sighed. And sighed again. “I just hope they never fucking lose themselves. You know what I’m saying?”
Shane nodded. “I think so.”
A huge smile crept onto Alice’s face as she revisited a previous thought. “I have the absolute BEST girlfriend in the entire fucking universe. Bette is SO great. She’s unbelievable Shane. But back to what I was saying.” Shane tried her best to keep up with Alice’s stream of consciousness, but it wasn’t easy.
“I absolutely love meditating. Love it. Love it. Love it. I was so lost without it.” Alice smiled at the thought of doing something beneficial for herself.
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first runs off to read
Im so glad your writing again you have such a fantastic way with words it feels like im there. Poor Alice , Poor Bette, bloody Gabby(mmmm guin turner) Bette needs to get her ass over to Alices and grovel then listen to her girlfriend who needs to fall apart for a few hours then take her mind off it all. I wait to see where you take us with anticipation. Post soon
omg, I love your bette, well the first half of the chapter anyway…She’s way to alpha nasty in the latter…Love the story, not sure about where it’s going….can’t we stay in happy happy land….at least say for….30 chapters. Really, that would be nice, especially your happy land!!!! sigh…
Once again I do the happy dance and grin – and once again the story does not dissapoint. I am already so into this story. Anxiously awaiting the next installment.
Greenie,You’ve got the skills, girl. The dialogue is superb, just spot on. Bette is just alpha, she’s nasty. Alice just wants Bette to listen and tell Alice that she has nothing to worry about w/Gabby cos she and Al are together. Al needs reassurance but Bette is somewhat insecure as well and selfish. But sexy as hell. PPS. this is very enjoyable.
Multiple emotions in this chapter. The beginning was happy and sexy with Alice saying to hell with being on time and making time for Bette. Alice and Shane in the classroom was sad because it seems like Alice is trying really hard but is easily swayed to a bad place with the news of Gabby’s return. And at the end, disappointment evolving into anger with Bette going on and on about her major faux pas with the art critic. Sure we all have moments where it’s all about us and we need to rant, but then she cut off Alice after asking about her day, and then that night she zoned out while on the phone. Man Bette really did look like an asshole in this chapter. lol
Uh…yeah Greentea…this memo just came in for Bette: 1)True – heartbreak may be on the horizon for you. 2)True – It may be Gabby induced…but it also may be having your head up your ass induced. Listen, as opposed to hearing, Bette! I once dated someone who communicated to me over the phone that they’d like to take a cruise. Well I decided to tune out the conversation and when I finally tuned back in and realized that I had been asked a question, my answer was, “Absolutely!” That inattentive “absolutely!” that I uttered had me paying for a cruise…for two. I’m just trying to help a sista’ out, Bette. Greentea, a virtual high-5 to you for yet another stellar chapter. No doubt I’m awaiting the next one
TINA WHERE THE HELL ARE U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am being scared for life here lol yeah al go back to gabby like yesterday 5 PAGES LONGER
“A gentle kiss on flowering lips” is this where the story title,” Flower Power” generated from…hmmm? I feel bad for Alice. Bette is all wrapped up in her own little “art dillema” that she isn’t there to support Alice with her insecurity about Gabby. Lucky for Alice that Shane is a good listener…she is going to need her to deal with Gabby’s return. Bette maybe HOT, but Hotness shouldn’t be confused with the word RELATIONSHIP. PPS.
hey gt! im glad you posted tonite,and it took ya long enough..loloh wheres our special lady laurel..p.p.s.
wow, another miracle happened and we didn’t have to wait a year for chapter 2 LOL…well, bette is behaving just like she was with tina sometimes, i guess tina did change her some if they were together 7 years and not 6 weeks like alice and bette…anyway, i love alice, i really do but is it wrong of me to wish for tina to appear really really soon? LOL until she does, i will read to see how alice will deal with gabby who was such a bad ass in a good way…did i mentioned how happy i am that you’re back :)
hey greenie! great chapter. I can only assume that Bette is being portrayed as a bit of an asshole in order to dramatize to difference between bette prior to meeting Tina, and how she is after? so do as you must missy, you know im always game for your tales.
I love Alice but not as much as I love Tina so Bette hopefully will be meeting her soul mate soon.
its delicious. staying up just to read. oh those damn little things called communicatin and listening. where would we be if we did it in our relationships. ;)thanks sweetie.
Bye Alice – Hello Tina :o))
For some reason, my first comment did not post a moment ago. So I’ll say again, while Bette is more than a little annoying in this chapter, I really HOPE a Bette and Tina relationship is not in the future. :)
Ohhhh I can’t belive you’re back “doing the happy dance” but B & A – what are you thinking……..ohh mann and I’m sitting here drunk reading you strory after a chrismas lunch – jesus. And then you pull this on me :O) but wonderfull to see you back. Post soon
Oh damn this is bad, but hope Bette and Tina will meet soon and bye Alice!
Wonderful chapter greentea! Love the way you write. Now where is T …
I just love it when Bette yells “FUCK” and it’s always a true pleasure to your one of your posts.