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Flower Power: Chapter 4
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“Yeah. I am.”
“I’m glad to hear it. You’re hell when you’re grumpy Bette. You’ve really got to start incorporating relaxation into your routine.” Alice stretched her arms high above her head. Her joints cracked like a #2 pencil being snapped in half.
“Perhaps I do,” Bette admitted and repeated in a whispery confirmation. “Perhaps I do. So Al, what are you so deep in thought about?”
“Oh, just writing a little sumthin’ so I don’t have to carry the weight of my thoughts around in my head.”
“Well, I think your head is large enough to accommodate them.” Bette soon realized this wasn’t a laughing matter and stopped joking when Alice didn’t reply. “Wouldn’t it be quicker to type whatever it is you’re thinking Al? Your laptop is nearby.”
“Nope, ‘fraid not. I need paper for this.” Alice’s mouth automatically opened again and remained that way for a few seconds. She hoped her thoughts would soon transpire into something that made sense. She wanted Bette to understand the dilemma she often faced and how important writing was to her.
“Sometimes I write instead of typing because I just have to. It’s like I have this need to feel my pen glide across paper.”
“Oh yeah. Why is that?”
“Because then I can see my thoughts come to life. And whenever they appear, I capture them before they disappear.”
“And if you don’t write them down, then what?”
“Then they haunt me until I do.”
“They become scary?”
“No. Not scary.” Alice was beginning to lose patience but kept her cool despite her impatient feelings. “Bette, if I don’t give my thoughts attention, they nag me until I do. I don’t know if that makes any sense but …”
“It makes perfect sense Alice.” The calm brunette knew Alice was struggling with finding the right words in an effort to be understood. And Bette understood.
The next statement out of the art collector’s mouth was as direct as mid-day exposure to the sun.
“So….let me hear what you wrote about me.”
“God! Bette you’re so vain. You probably think these words are about you.”
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Hey Green!! glad to see your post. I wonder when Tina will appear. Bette seems to be biding her time with Al until something better comes along. they don’t really seem to be in love, in like maybe, but not love. please post soon babe. great job!!!
OMG, you are such an A+++++ Tease!!!! that was wonderful, and thankyou!!! Now more pls…oh, and no drama…
scraring me for life with this A&B story but i cant help it were is tina
GT its tru u got a gift for written communication!! hot damn woman B and A communicating nicely for once!! hope more follows soon
Greenie ~ what is it that Alice doesn’t want to talk about? Don’t leave us in suspense for too long…post again soon!
greenie, hmmmm. “so i dont carry the weight of my thoughts around in my head…” i think i heard that before. i love your words, your thoughts, your descriptions. i hear them and i think and wonder, what if??? thanks for your story and all that it gives us.
Greens, how much did a love this post? As much as a recent photo I saw of JB showing lots of leg, wearing fuck me shoes, and killer specs. You can do no wrong in my book.
What is it that Bette wants to talk about that Alice is not ready to handle? Is it about an ex-girlfriend? Whatever it is, has Alice unnerved. I really enjoy the sweet, thoughtful gestures these two make for the other. Alice giving Bette a relaxing massage after a horrible day at work. Bette planning that romantic dinner for Alice in the flower garden. But something isn’t quite right….hmmm…… I love your writing Greenie. I don’t just enjoy the words you write for us to read, but I love all the things that are left unwritten, and up to us, the readers , to interpret. THanks for chapter and as always, looking forward to your next post
Uh oh, talk about what? I love this pairing of Alice and Bette. I’m quite surprised by this because I could never imagine them together based on the show. You are able to present the two as unique characters in this fanfiction, and I dig that. I forgot that Alice was a writer on the show, so I’m impressed by your choice to focus and create this character as one who is dedicated to writing. Thanks for your story, Greentea. Please give us more soon!
“Enemies, as well as lovers, come to resemble each other over a period of time.” I hope your quotes by certain people aren’t an indication of what is to come.
this chapter was such a mix of everything that now i have a mix in my head, good mix though…it was sweet, it was deep, it was intense and it was profound…does it bother you that i’m still waiting for Tina? LOL…don’t be bothered by this, i love this story
God Greentea…YOU CAN WRITE!!!!! Thank you!
I’m curious as well as to what Alice doesn’t want to discuss. “Okie dokie smokie,” chirped a cheerful Alice. – My mom says that a lot so I heard my mom’s voice when I read that line. lol
You are such a tease!!!!!!! but we love it – can’t wait for more to come. Post soon
Is Alice in denial about Bette’s committment to non-committment? A great glimpse into their past..PS
Good chapter and can’t wait to see Tina appearence soon. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Hey Tealeaf, Wonderful to have another gorgeous and sexy posting from your seductive and sensuous hand. The sultry massage followed by the charged morning conversation. All interspiced with delicious dialogue that challenged and electrified; hurt and provoked, calmed and soothed by each measures. Your talent shine through in every word, phrase and sentence. Thank you for this pleasureable and enticing read. I can’t wair to see how this all plays out. Will Bette have a luscious and lascivious night at the opera before the influence of a blond comes to the fore. Please continue soon. Your grateful and Loyal Fan.
GT! IS TINA GOING TO MAKE A APPEARENCE IN THIS STORY?bette/alice will kill each other and they are cute together..p.p.s. teaseer!!!!
GT! IS TINA GOING TO MAKE A APPEARENCE IN THIS STORY?bette/alice will kill each other and they are cute together..p.p.s. teaseer!!!!
wow! a great chapter Tea! :)
His beauty HIS …subject and object need to agree… okay, then. Your description of the Alice/Bette thing is most plausible – like Bette putting her head on Alice’s shoulder in the last episode. I hope you understand how these traits can cross gender. Yeah, you do. Your Bette is a driven career woman, had to capture, hard to keep occupied. Thanks
I know this will sound strange, but you have captured the essence of a difficult, cerebral person who is attempting to be captured in a relationship, but…just isn’t quite…your Bette reminds me so much of my brother – brainy, wants to be a lover but just can’t quite manage to keep it all in balance — has to challenged on so many levels and UNDERSTOOD for their unique beauty, despite their difficulty. I hear you, GT. Thanks!