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    Flower Power: Chapter 4

    Story written on January 17, 2007 by greentea.
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    Touchie Feelie.

     

    Both women laughed freely.    

     

    “I was not writing about you.  You are not the center of the universe.”

     

    “Maybe.  But I’m becoming the center of yours,”  Bette grinned.

     

    “I’ll ask a question you asked me last night.  Have you been smoking Bette?” 

     

    “Not today.”  Bette giggled and examined the underside of her nails before honing in on her girlfriend.  “So, are you going to share what you’ve written about me?  Just read the first line and I’ll leave you alone.”

     

    Alice sighed in surrender.  “It’s too deep for you Bette.  I’m not sure you can handle this.”

     

    “Try me.”

     

    Alice’s eyes maintained their hold on Bette’s.  There was no need to reference her paper in order read the first line.  It was etched in her memory and engrained in her heart.  Alice narrowed her eyes and observed Bette before softly revealing what she had written.

     

    Just for you Bette.  Here goes.  Heartfelt words softly entered the atmosphere.  “I watch her sleep and am thankful for my sight.”

     

    Bette’s eyes sparkled brightly, but she remained quiet.  Her mind rewound to the time Alice had written herself into a profound solitude after breaking up with Gabby.  She had constructed her own personal Great Wall and there was no way it was coming down.  And now, for Alice to share one word of anything she had written was monumental.  Bette Porter captured the moment with a mental snapshot and a grateful smile. 

     

    “See…told you it was deep.  Do NOT mess with me.  Wanna know why?  Cause I am profound Bette.  What ‘cha know ‘bout that Curly?”

     

    A sensual, “I like the way you write Alice,” flowed from soft lips.   Bette flashed a mega-watt smile that lit up every single corner of the room with voltage to spare. 

     

    “Correction Curly, you like the way I write about you.”

     

    “Well, I especially like the way you write about me but you certainly have the gift of written communication.”

     

    A smile of thanks was exchanged for a welcome hug.  “Remember the other night in the garden Al?” 

     

    “I don’t think I’ll ever forget it.  You are such a romantic Bette Porter.  How did you learn so much about flowers?  What’d you do?  Switch all your investments to FTD?” 

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    1. Hey Green!! glad to see your post. I wonder when Tina will appear. Bette seems to be biding her time with Al until something better comes along. they don’t really seem to be in love, in like maybe, but not love. please post soon babe. great job!!!

    6. greenie, hmmmm. “so i dont carry the weight of my thoughts around in my head…” i think i heard that before. i love your words, your thoughts, your descriptions. i hear them and i think and wonder, what if??? thanks for your story and all that it gives us.

    7. Greens, how much did a love this post? As much as a recent photo I saw of JB showing lots of leg, wearing fuck me shoes, and killer specs. You can do no wrong in my book.

    8. What is it that Bette wants to talk about that Alice is not ready to handle? Is it about an ex-girlfriend? Whatever it is, has Alice unnerved. I really enjoy the sweet, thoughtful gestures these two make for the other. Alice giving Bette a relaxing massage after a horrible day at work. Bette planning that romantic dinner for Alice in the flower garden. But something isn’t quite right….hmmm…… I love your writing Greenie. I don’t just enjoy the words you write for us to read, but I love all the things that are left unwritten, and up to us, the readers , to interpret. THanks for chapter and as always, looking forward to your next post

    9. Uh oh, talk about what? I love this pairing of Alice and Bette. I’m quite surprised by this because I could never imagine them together based on the show. You are able to present the two as unique characters in this fanfiction, and I dig that. I forgot that Alice was a writer on the show, so I’m impressed by your choice to focus and create this character as one who is dedicated to writing. Thanks for your story, Greentea. Please give us more soon!

    10. “Enemies, as well as lovers, come to resemble each other over a period of time.” I hope your quotes by certain people aren’t an indication of what is to come.

    11. this chapter was such a mix of everything that now i have a mix in my head, good mix though…it was sweet, it was deep, it was intense and it was profound…does it bother you that i’m still waiting for Tina? LOL…don’t be bothered by this, i love this story

    13. I’m curious as well as to what Alice doesn’t want to discuss. “Okie dokie smokie,” chirped a cheerful Alice. – My mom says that a lot so I heard my mom’s voice when I read that line. lol

    17. Hey Tealeaf, Wonderful to have another gorgeous and sexy posting from your seductive and sensuous hand. The sultry massage followed by the charged morning conversation. All interspiced with delicious dialogue that challenged and electrified; hurt and provoked, calmed and soothed by each measures. Your talent shine through in every word, phrase and sentence. Thank you for this pleasureable and enticing read. I can’t wair to see how this all plays out. Will Bette have a luscious and lascivious night at the opera before the influence of a blond comes to the fore. Please continue soon. Your grateful and Loyal Fan.

    21. His beauty HIS …subject and object need to agree… okay, then. Your description of the Alice/Bette thing is most plausible – like Bette putting her head on Alice’s shoulder in the last episode. I hope you understand how these traits can cross gender. Yeah, you do. Your Bette is a driven career woman, had to capture, hard to keep occupied. Thanks

    22. I know this will sound strange, but you have captured the essence of a difficult, cerebral person who is attempting to be captured in a relationship, but…just isn’t quite…your Bette reminds me so much of my brother – brainy, wants to be a lover but just can’t quite manage to keep it all in balance — has to challenged on so many levels and UNDERSTOOD for their unique beauty, despite their difficulty. I hear you, GT. Thanks!

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