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    Story written on July 21, 2008 by observer.
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    An epiphany

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    Coming down from the mountain was probably a difficult task but Dana wouldn’t remember a thing since she was in a world of her own. She unconsciously moved her arms and legs and managed to reach her car. Was the dog behind her or was he ahead of her? Was he even coming down with her? She honestly had no idea. The next time she saw him was when she turned on the lights of the car; he was standing in front of it. For the first time she saw him differently. He was her canine companion in this bizarre and enlightening experience now. They had shared something. She was not all alone up there.
    She opened the passenger’s door and waited for him. After a few whistles and a few words of encouragement he timidly entered the car as if he didn’t want to make a mess.

    They drove in silence to her house exchanging glances along the way.
    Only when she parked the car in front of her house Dana spoke.
    “I don’t want to talk about it yet”
    All she got in response was a big yawn and she gave him a faint smile back.
    “I know how you feel…”
    And then she got serious again.
    “You can stay if you want…..”

    She unlocked the front door and got inside but the dog wouldn’t come in whatever she did to convince him. She resigned trying. Her tiredness was winning. She brought him a bowl of milk, wished him goodnight and got inside to lie fully dressed on the bed. Her last thought before falling into a deep sleep was that she had to do something to fix things.

    TBC

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    1. What a powerful chapter! You are correct that we tend to miss the beauty and wonder around us when we focus on the artificial, technical distractions which are so common-place now. That was an epiphany and a rebirth for Dana. Love that Dana brought the dog home — even if he isn’t going to stay. Can’t wait to see how Dana changes herself and her path as a result of her night. Thanks so much!! Great story, observer!

    2. I echo what MaGoose said. Furthermore, at first I could only think of the dog like Stephen King’s Cujo, scary! By the end of this chapter, I feel that it was almost fairy like. It was never threatening but patient. I love how it led D up the hill and waited her to invite him into the car. And the fact that it refused to enter the house, I think the dog must think it was too filthy and rather stayed outside until the morning when D would be more energetic to clean it up. Excellent plot, The Observer! I am ready to follow D on this journey. Lastly, you are doing just fine. There is no need to apologize for the writing as long as you deliver your point. Thank you!

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