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“It’s not that simple but I think you’re right. I’m not cut out to be a “player”. So I guess I don’t have a choice but to wait for life and chance to have their way with me.”
The girls stayed up until 3 o’clock that night. Alice decided to stay at Shane’s house for the night because it was too late and she wanted to live her triumph up close when Shane would wake up at noon. Shane’s alarm went off at 5:45 and she snoozed it for five more minutes. The second time it went off she reluctantly got up and walked to the kitchen to make coffee bumping on every furniture she could find on her way. She found her sunglasses on the kitchen table and put them on. It was then that she heard Alice’s loud snoring and realized that she had won the bet. She poured coffee in a cup and drunk it in no time. Then she refilled her own and made a second one for Alice. She brought it to her in the living room where she was still sleeping on the couch in the most awkward position ever.
“Al….. wake up Al ……Alice! Al……Al…..Al………ALICE!!!!!”
“Whaaaat? ….. Oh god! ………. What time is it?
“6 o’clock” (smiling)
“Are you fucking crazy?!! …. Do you hate me? ……….
“Come on Al get up.”
“Urghhhh ……. What did I do? …………….. Is this a punishment?”
“I won the bet Al! I got up at 5:55. You lost. You have to come for a run with me”
“Fuck……………………….the fucking bet!”
“Get up, get up!”
“Fuck ……………….. ok…. Just give me ten more minutes……ok? …………… and I’ll……….get……………………( light snoring).”
“No Al. Get up now! We have to go!”
“Huh? …..”
“GET UP”
“Jesus ………. You fucking nazi! …………………………Gimme my coffee! Quickly before I change my mind!”
Alice got up 5 minutes later and borrowed Shane’s second pair of shorts and a T-shirt.15minutes later they were in Alice’s car heading for the Runyon Canyon.
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Dana woke up at 5:55 that Saturday morning. It wasn’t the alarm clock that woke her up but Lighthouse. He came to her bedside and started licking the only part of her body that was not covered by the blanket, her hand. Soon Dana started talking in her sleep
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Fantastic development with so many great moments. Excellent job writing A & S as the dynamic duo. Love the betting scene. Sunglasses at 6am inside the house & “can’t fool anyone that we are regular runner,” lol. D waking up by Lighthouse licking her hand, lmao. I am so proud of A defending D. Really great dialogues throughout the chapter. I am still betting on Lighthouse being D’s guardian angel. Lighthouse purposely disappeared so that D had to go back to the main path to find him and got the chance to meet A. All around great job, observer. Thank you very much. p.s. pardon me if I don’t get to comment for the next few weeks because I will be away.
I’m not sure what you are talking about in your author’s notes, observer. I thought this was excellent. The Alice/Shane interaction is written really well. I could just picture the two of them at Runyan Canyon that early in the morning – too funny. I’m not quite sure how, but Lighthouse had a hand in both Alice and Dana being there at the same time. He certainly knew when to get himself “lost”. Loved Shane and Alice coming to help Dana with the jerk. Can’t wait to see what happens next now that they have all met. Thanks so much!!
Hey, love your update. I somehow think that Lighthouse is sent from heaven to match both Al and Dane. Thanks Observer, PPS…
please update this story…it’s a great and well written story…you have done a wonderful job and i can’t wait to see where the story lead dana..