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For the Love of You, Revisited post 40
“It’s on.” Tina murmured a few minutes later.
“What’s on?” Bette feigned innocence.
“I’ve tried to take it slow with you. I truly don’t want to hurt you…” Tina moved down the bed and made herself comfortable between Bette’s thighs. She spread her nether lips and found her clit hard the way she liked it. She considered teasing her a bit but the scent of her made her mouth water and she knew she couldn’t pull it off. Instead she touched the tip of her tongue to her hard shaft and stroked her.
It was Bette’s turn to gasp and grasp the sheets tightly.
Girl relax, let’s go slow
I ain’t got nowhere to go
I’m just gonna concentrate on you
Girl are you ready, it’s gonna be a long night
Throw your clothes on the floor
I’m gonna take my clothes off too
I made plans to be with you
Girl whatever you ask me you know I’ll do
Tina licked her with all deliberateness until Bette was writhing beneath her mouth. She probed every fold and kept her hard. Tina licked at her opening not entering her but instead reveling in the slick juices. She licked her until she was dry everywhere except her center. She carefully sucked her into a frenzy.
“Tina…” Bette gasped and shuddered. She reached up and stoked a nipple never letting her tongue stop its pointed exploration. Tina spread her just a little bit wider and then entered her with her tongue. Bette was more than ready and with a whimper clamped her thighs around her face. Tina continued to probe her with her tongue until she surrendered every illusion of control coming into her mouth.
Baby tonight is your night
And I will do you right
Just make a wish on your night
Anything that you ask
I will give you the love of your life
I’ll make love to you
Like you want me to
And I’ll hold you tight
Baby all through the night
I’ll make love to you
When you want me to
And I will not let go
Till you tell me to
I’ll make love to you – boyz2Men
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Ehum K, I am speechless,,,,,,,,,
Dang it I just left a comment on the last post. This is steamy and sensual.
I think I better leave these two alone and finally conclude this story so I can post the epilogue. They take me places… these two. Yes I know I’m crazy… I have to go to sleep because ‘Freaky'(Let me lick you up and down…still you say stop…) is is my head and they need their privacy…
Those were all beyond hot!!!!
YOU ARE NOT CRAZY. I understand how they take you places.. but please don’t end it yet. What I don’t understand is how you can write only 1 page and leave it. Yeah, they need their privacy but, we need you to keep writing. Your love of the girls shows through every word that you write and we love all those words. Please continue to write for us and do a couple of chapters on “Freaky,” before you post the epilogue. PLEASE!!!! Thanks for posting. Love your work.
OMFG…You Take My Breath Away! That was very, very sensuous. I almost felt like a voyeur in those last 2 chapters. Kelika, magnificent as always!
Damn, that was HOT!!!! I’m going to have to take an extra long COLD shower now….Please don’t stop, I love this story.
F**K both these chapter where beyond HOT!!!!!! Thanks K
Hello Kelika, Fabulous!!! The intensity of Bette and Tina’s need for each other was overwhelming and finally satisfied. Still warm in their after-glow. Splendid!. More please. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Dang K, the sight goes down for half a day and you come back and almost burn it down LOL. I LOVE this story and how B&T are getting to experience being mothes from the opposite propective this time around with Laurel. You don’t have to end it, but we will support whatever you decide to do. Nice pick of the old school Boyz to Men song. PPS :o).
You bring us up to date and then you leave us hanging, and panting like that. OMG>
dear god in heaven woman, some of us read this at work, how will i explain what this chapter has done to me, my co-workers are calling 911 as i type!!great, great job!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well HOT DAMN!
wonderfully written…I actually am supposed to be preparing 4 a job interview but I had to read Kelika, Sofasitter,& Sunkissed b4 I go do the serious prep!!!! Thank u & Good night now. Not sure if I want the job but I should at least prepare huh????!!!! BTW, howz your job going? let me know, I’m interested.
BTW, u don’t really have to stop writing this story…but if u choose to, I am hoping u’ll come back to us with another.
Do we have to say anything???????????
You always pick the best songs. thanks to you I will be picturing Bette and Tina the next time i hear it. Thanks Kelika!
caught up… and this is where u leave it…. wow..:)
OMG THIS IS SO FREAKING HOT!