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FORCE of NATURE
“Madie, this is Pete, and he has been waiting to meet you.”
Madie reached out with her left hand and gripped her mommy’s shoulder, gathering the loose material of Bette’s shirt in a tight fist. Her right hand tentatively pat Pete’s head and back. “Hi, Pete.” She said to the pup as her astonished expression grew into the biggest smile in her Porter smile repertoire.
“Is he going to live with us?” She whispered, stilling her petting motion in wait for an answer.
“Yes, sweetie, he’s going to live with us…”Bette spoke softly, and feeling Madie released her shirt she added. “That is if you think four is old enough to help care for him?”
“Oh yes mommy, I will take extra good care of him…” She said bringing her left hand up to pet the puppy with both hands. “May I hold him?” She asked trying to grip the pup around his belly.
Tina had moved with the camera to capture the birthday girl’s reaction and mentally wished she hand recruited help to have a second camera on Bette. When Bette instructed Madie to sit beside her to receive Pete in her lap, Tina adjusted her position to finally get a full front shot of mother and daughter.
Kit had been enjoying the scene unfold of not only her niece’s reaction but of her sister’s handling of the pup. She was amazed Bette was so at ease with Pete, ‘Where did that come from?,’ she thought to herself. When the blonde executive moved in front of Bette and Madie, Kit took close notice of her for the first time.
‘So this is the woman baby sis is a mess over?’ Kit thought examining Tina’s profile. ‘Umm hmm… she’s got that little butt sis likes… needs more meat on it if you ask me.’
Bette had set Pete gently in Madie’s lap and as he had done with her, the pup sprang into lick mode. Madie giggled and laughed from the tickling affection. Anthony moved closer in and sat on his knees on the other side of Miss Bette, creating a semicircle of attention on Pete. He laughed with his friend at the hyper pup.
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Hey there Sunkissed…first time reader. Just found your delightful story! What a treat…3 in a row today…you so spoil us…thank you!!! The writing is so great…as we hear the dialoque and witness the inner minds talking. Love Anthony…use to live in TX, now on the west coast…miss the “yes Ma’am” politeness. So cute to see the attraction slowly coming to a boil. So much fun!!!!! Great job!!!!
Came online after dinner and ‘voila’ another chapter had appeared – wow! And re: ‘…do you think this is enough for spaghetti?” – please tell Anthony not to worry; I’m sure your readers are more than willing to contribute toward a ‘sketti dinner’ for two… ;-)
Anthony steals the show for me every time! Can’t wait for Bette and Tina to have a moment alone to chat. It’s a real treat to have three chapters in one day. You’re spoiling us. PPS
Loved it! And the extra posts. Made my day. I loved the kid conversation. Sweet looks like they want to buy their mommies dinner and Madie whats them to kiss over spaghetti. Sweet. Looking forward to your next update. soon I hope. I’m getting spoiled.
this story is totally awesome I can’t wait to read more.
this story is totally awesome I can’t wait to read more.
Lovely! Thx for posting…. Again!!! : )
What a trifecta of posts! Pete is one lucky puppy. Bette’s hands would make any highlight reel. Thanks. : )
Can’t wait for the spaghetti dinner. PPS!!
such a cute cute chapter…and three in a row, that was a pleasant surprise…so cool that the kids are plotting something special :)
While reading your updates, I have a permanent smile on my face.Is this normal? And it comes back every time I think of this story. Should I worry?
Sunkissed thank you so much for giving us three chapters tonight, that was wonderful and I am delirously happy. Anthony is such a little gentleman and has quickly stolen Kit’s heart. So lovely to read. Bette and Tina are both goners. Can hardly wait ffor more. Thanks again. PPS
hey Sunkissed, you are woman of your words. Thank you for showering us with multi post lol. Still I am not overdose yet pmsl. You really have spoiled us. Always fun to read this story,”yes ma’am” and….. the diner is coming. Can’t wait to read the kids proposition to Kit for their mothers’ diner lol. How cute, they are only four and already ploting. So funny and reading it made me happy for the day lol. PPVS
Anthony and Madie are too cute! So are their mothers… Great stuff, thanks, sk! :)
What a wonderful way to start my evening with 3 wonderfully amazing updates. Even the 2nd time around I just can’t get enough of this story SK. Thank you very much.
Hey, sk! Wow, three on Sunday! Thanks so much. Love being spoiled. ;)
Awesome! How lucky we were to have 3 posts this weekend – thank you and PPS!