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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 48

     

    Having gotten caught up at work, Tina met Alice for lunch at the Planet today.  Alice didnt want to go there at first until she found out Lara was off.  They ordered lunch and sat out on the patio to talk.

     

    Tina:  Al, whats up with you?  You seem so sad all the time lately.

     

    Alice:  Tina, I just dont know how much more I can take.  Lara is everywhere.   I think Dana is going to leave me to go back to her.

     

    Tina:  Al, why would you think that?

     

    Alice:  I can see it in her eyes; T. She doesnt love me like that any more.

     

    Tina:  Alice, have you sat down and really talked about this with Dana?

     

    Alice:  Yes.  She tells me everything is ok and I’m overreacting.  I’m not, T.  Shes busy all the time lately.  She didnt even want me to go to her last tournament.  But Lara just happen to be off that day as well.

     

    Tina:  Al, I’m sure it was just a coincidence. 

     

    Alice:  No Tina, It wasnt.  I went on my own and I saw her there.        

     

    Tina:  Alice, you were checking up on Dana? 

     

    Alice:  Tina, she wont talk to me.  I know something is going on.  I had to find out for myself. 

     

    Tina:  Alice honey, you are my dearest friend.  You cannot let this tear you apart like this.  You have to talk to Dana and then trust what she tells you.  Checking up on her like that is only going to push her away.

     

    Alice:  I think I already have, T. I have never been so needy before in my life.  Jealousy and needing to know where she is all the time.  Calling her constantly.  Thats just so totally not me.  I dont know whats wrong with me, T?  Has she fallen out of love with me because I pushed her away?  Or is Lara so much better than me?

     

    Tina:  Al, honey.  You are the most wonderful person in the world.  Yes, you can get on my nerves from time to time, but still.  You are my friend and I love you.  There is nothing wrong with you.  Dana loves you.  The two of you were always such best friends.  I couldnt see Dana doing anything to her you.

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    1. Good chapter. Damn you scare me man, I thought Bette is dead and thank god she’s not. Glad Bette and Tina have a good time now. Ok about Dana and Alice, they need to talk and see how is go. Post soon, thanks!

    2. See, I told you that people would want to murder you after reading the first part, heh. It got better though. Glad Dana was talking with someone, it should be with Al, but anyone is good too. More!

    3. OCD, you really had me in the beginning…I was lit. Finally, Bette & Tina are good. Your drama is killing me…but I’m enjoying it very much. Pls. keep posting. Great job.

    4. I must say TK that I almost shoot you there when I read page 1. I was still in chock after your previuous chapter and I thought “here we go again”. You almost had me there – but glad you continued in a nother direction. Wonderful tallent you have TK. You are so damn good at this. So keep up the great work

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