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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 62
I can ***** do it myself, Porter. I’m not a kid that needs you to push me around in my poor little chair. So get the ***** off! Whit said getting even madder.
Whit you have had way too much to drink and you are being a real ***** right now. Thats not like you. Why was Stacey crying? What the ***** is going on with you? Bette asked taking a seat next to Whit.
Whit grabbed the back of Bettes head and forcefully pulled her into a kiss. Bette tried to pull away but Whit held her deepening her kiss. Finally getting the upper hand Bette shoved Whit away.
What the ***** has gotten into Whit?! Bette said wiping her mouth. Were best friends. Why in gods name would you pull this ***** on me Whit? Bette said shocked and confused.
See Porter, theres nothing left of me. Even you dont find me *****. I cant make love to you, so hey, I’m a safe ***** arent I? Ha! Talk about safe *****. I cant please my wife any more. I cant do anything and you ask whats wrong with me? What the ***** do you think is wrong with me? Whit said trying to kiss Bette again.
WHIT, Stop! Why are you so desperate to push everyone out of your life? No I dont want you to kiss me. I dont find you ***** or attractive. Bette could finish.
Whit slapped Bette hard across her face for that last statement.
Grabbing her face. Whit, I love you as a friend. Bette said as she got up and left Whit sitting there.
Turning in her chair to see Bette leave the room. Bette, I’m sorry. I I didnt mean it. Please Bette. I didnt mean to hit you. Whit yelled then stopped seeing Tina and Stacey standing there in shock having seen the kiss and the slap. Tina followed after Bette to check on her while Stacey stood frozen in disbelief.
What has gotten into you Whit? I cant take this any more. Shoving me and pushing me away is one thing, but kissing and then slapping our best friend. I cant take any more. I’m taking Josh and were leaving. I’m going to stay at the house in town and you can keep you sorry drunken ***** at the beach house. Stacey said as she stormed out of the room.
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(40 votes, average: 3.78 out of 5)
Okay, maybe not hunted down, it turned out better than I expected(not that I didn’t think it would be awesome) Anywho, this was simply the best…as Tina Turner would say. Woo!
She’s bleeding again? Not good.
OH NO… PLS don’t let anything happens to bette…
OK TK I think you are setting us up again!! great about Whit but i won’t be happy until I hear more about bette’s bleeding!! There were no ad’s and the story was 8 pages and I love long posts
you are a horrible person. But your story is so amazing. there are just not words to say how great your story is. It is the best story i’ve read. Im happy for whit. i hope things work out with her. I also hope that bette’s okay. they’ve gone through enough, they don’t need to go through anymore. post really soon please.
Love this story. Keep up the good work.
please tell that Bettes bleeding is just stress..i cant take it another cancer..Geezzz this is L word fanfic or ERs? i can smell medical alcohol already…OMG i still cant breathe have i said that you are a very mean person..cuz you are..lol..amazing fucking chapter..ohh and for last..i hate Stacey atitude..love is not only good moments
man oh man…gotta love all the drama. Helena needs to die a horrible death.
Bette’s bleeding again…not good. She shouldn’t keep it hidden like she is. Best to get that looked at ASAP…but it IS Bette after all. It’ll be a lot worse for Bette if Tina happens to find a bloody tissue in the trash.
Glad Whit is better…I can imagine the challenges that she’s going to face…with therapy and trying to get her life together again.
Nice and long… and loving it!
K
Wow that was a lot of drama. Great chapter. Just love it.
But why does Bette have to be bleeding again?…
Oooh, oohh! I…I…I am wading in blood!.
What a roller-coaster of a tale is this one, OCD! The ups and downs and lefts and rights and all arounds have left me with a whiplash on my neck and a WICKED grin on my face. Let this ride go on forever PLEASE.
omg!!! fuckin amazing!!!!!! lol i love it love it love it!!!!! i love bette and this makes her i dunno but i loove her even more if possible and yeah ok well excellentness and keep up the wonderful work!!!
OMG you are the drama queen. Great Chapter, I love it, please post soon
OH this chapter was very great. I hope Bette will be OK. Yes Whit needs some help and I can understand why Stacey left her. Perhaps Whit can say to Tina she was sorry kissing Bette like she does ? They’re friends or like a family but only friends.
Please post soon next chapter. Thank you.
so far so good! except the bleeding part….no more bleeding for bette anymore okay!!!!
….This is my first post on this story…not sure why though?!?….anyhowz that chapter was fantastic & I love this story & the drama.
My God…such drama…loved it. Whit comment about hitting rock bottom — that was good. And Helena having a bit of humanity and doing the right thing…well, a surprise. But, now Bette’s bleeding again — damn…no more heartache. Loved it, please continue on.
I have just spent a very long time getting caught up on all your chapters. Reba told me about you and you are awsome to say the least. I love the way you write. You put your heart and soul into every chapter. I find this very refreshing and hard to find on FF. Give me a shout on my email. I hear we are about the same age(i won’t mention the number) and we live very near each other. Great job on the writing. beachcatyello@yahoo.com
Wow I thought you were going to kill Whit off THANKS FOR NOT DOING THAT…I don’t like that Bette was bleeding AGAIN..GREAT JOB PLEASE POST SOON……
Wauw, what a rollercoaster ride, can´t wait to see the continuation. Hopefully everything will turn out okay for Whit & Stacy.
Oh holy shit, this is unbelievable amazing chapter. Damn I just don’t know what to said, just one word “Excellent”. Glad Whit ok and hope she will be able to walk soon. Bette is bleeding again and please don’t let anything happen to Bette. Please post soon, thanks!
The drama was great I died when whit shot herself you brought me back to life now that she can feel her legs anain . pleas don’t let bette be really sick.Bette and whit BFL hang in their stacy Once again great chapter
So far so good TK. When Bette startet to bleed out her nose, I really wantet to hunt you down…because I thought OH GOD HERE WE GO AGAIN. But I guess I´m going to have to wait until next time. Amazing update TK – but I know you have something installed for us in the next post. Can´t wait for more drama to come. You go girl.