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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 62

    Story written on July 2, 2005 by OCD.
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    Fourth Of July Party
    Drama, sex, lies and more drama. Someone is shot?

     

    Just wait here.  Ill go get him and let everyone know youre ok.  Tina said as she walked inside.

     

    In the mean time Bette was back in the bathroom with tears streaming down her face.  Her heart crushed with sadness for two of her dearest friends and anger from Whit having slapped her.  On top of that she struck Helena. 

     

    Bette, baby, are you ok.  Let me in.  Tina said knocking lightly on the bathroom door.

     

    Honey, I’m fine.  I just need a minute, ok.  Bette said as she wipes the blood away from her nose.

     

    Ok, listen.  Stacey is leaving.  She going to take Josh and stay at their house in town.  You might want to check on Whit later.  Ok?  Tina said.

     

    I hear you.  I’m sure shell be preoccupied for a while with that ***** given the drunken state of mind she is in.  Bette said trying to control the bleeding. 

     

    Tina went outside to collection Josh and his stuff and apologizes to everyone.  Alice was a total wreck crying into Danas chest.  Tina motioned for the party to continue and shed be right back.  Shane and Carmen had the twins and Josh in the play area, so they didnt actually see Bette pound Helenas head into the table.  Thank goodness. 

     

    Whit and Staceys Beach house. 

     

    Stacey is on the phone with Kelly when Whit arrives home with a guest, Helena.  Stacey told Kelly to pack her and Joshs things for a few nights and leave.  They could get the rest later.  Stacey asks if everything is ok so far since Whit got home, warning that she was extremely drunk.  Kelly was hesitant to mention Helena sitting in Whits lap with her hands all over Whits body.  She packed and left without Whit seeing her.

     

    Meanwhile Helena followed Whit in to the family room.  Whit pulled Helena down into her lap again as Helena began to pull Whits shirt off over her head.  Helena started getting rough with Whit and some how that snapped Whit back into reality. 

     

    So you like it rough do you?  Whit said holding Helenas hands taking control back.

     

    Why yes I do as a matter of fact.  Helena purred against Whits ear. 

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    1. Okay, maybe not hunted down, it turned out better than I expected(not that I didn’t think it would be awesome) Anywho, this was simply the best…as Tina Turner would say. Woo!

    4. OK TK I think you are setting us up again!! great about Whit but i won’t be happy until I hear more about bette’s bleeding!! There were no ad’s and the story was 8 pages and I love long posts

    5. you are a horrible person. But your story is so amazing. there are just not words to say how great your story is. It is the best story i’ve read. Im happy for whit. i hope things work out with her. I also hope that bette’s okay. they’ve gone through enough, they don’t need to go through anymore. post really soon please.

    7. please tell that Bettes bleeding is just stress..i cant take it another cancer..Geezzz this is L word fanfic or ERs? i can smell medical alcohol already…OMG i still cant breathe have i said that you are a very mean person..cuz you are..lol..amazing fucking chapter..ohh and for last..i hate Stacey atitude..love is not only good moments

    8. man oh man…gotta love all the drama. Helena needs to die a horrible death.
      Bette’s bleeding again…not good. She shouldn’t keep it hidden like she is. Best to get that looked at ASAP…but it IS Bette after all. It’ll be a lot worse for Bette if Tina happens to find a bloody tissue in the trash.
      Glad Whit is better…I can imagine the challenges that she’s going to face…with therapy and trying to get her life together again.

    12. Oooh, oohh! I…I…I am wading in blood!.
      What a roller-coaster of a tale is this one, OCD! The ups and downs and lefts and rights and all arounds have left me with a whiplash on my neck and a WICKED grin on my face. Let this ride go on forever PLEASE.

    15. OH this chapter was very great. I hope Bette will be OK. Yes Whit needs some help and I can understand why Stacey left her. Perhaps Whit can say to Tina she was sorry kissing Bette like she does ? They’re friends or like a family but only friends.
      Please post soon next chapter. Thank you.

    17. ….This is my first post on this story…not sure why though?!?….anyhowz that chapter was fantastic & I love this story & the drama.

    18. My God…such drama…loved it. Whit comment about hitting rock bottom — that was good. And Helena having a bit of humanity and doing the right thing…well, a surprise. But, now Bette’s bleeding again — damn…no more heartache. Loved it, please continue on.

    19. I have just spent a very long time getting caught up on all your chapters. Reba told me about you and you are awsome to say the least. I love the way you write. You put your heart and soul into every chapter. I find this very refreshing and hard to find on FF. Give me a shout on my email. I hear we are about the same age(i won’t mention the number) and we live very near each other. Great job on the writing. beachcatyello@yahoo.com

    20. Wow I thought you were going to kill Whit off THANKS FOR NOT DOING THAT…I don’t like that Bette was bleeding AGAIN..GREAT JOB PLEASE POST SOON……

    22. Oh holy shit, this is unbelievable amazing chapter. Damn I just don’t know what to said, just one word “Excellent”. Glad Whit ok and hope she will be able to walk soon. Bette is bleeding again and please don’t let anything happen to Bette. Please post soon, thanks!

    23. The drama was great I died when whit shot herself you brought me back to life now that she can feel her legs anain . pleas don’t let bette be really sick.Bette and whit BFL hang in their stacy Once again great chapter

    24. So far so good TK. When Bette startet to bleed out her nose, I really wantet to hunt you down…because I thought OH GOD HERE WE GO AGAIN. But I guess I´m going to have to wait until next time. Amazing update TK – but I know you have something installed for us in the next post. Can´t wait for more drama to come. You go girl.

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