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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 63

    Story written on July 6, 2005 by OCD.
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    Love, faith and honor

     

    Getting out of the pool and walking over to grab a towel.  Bette dried off before sitting down on the lounge chair across from Shane. 

     

    I was thinking about you before my swim.  Bette smiled.

     

    I know.  I was thinking about you too.  Thats why I came over Shane replied

     

    Strange how we do that isnt it?  Bette said.

     

    It is, isnt it.  Shane answered. 

     

    So why havent you told me you were having relationship problems with Carmen?  Bette asked.

     

    Why hadnt you told me youre having nose bleeds again?  Shane asked. 

     

    If I didnt know better Id swear we were Twins in another life.  Bette answered.

     

    I agree, but you cant avoid my question that easily.  Shane said.

     

    Oh I know.  You never were one to let me get away with that were you? 

     

    Nope.  Shane replied.  So Bette, have you been to see the Doc yet?  Shane asked.

     

    No, I was hoping it was from  No, I havent Shane.  Bette finally answered knowing she couldnt keep anything from the all knowing Yoda. 

     

    So youll check it out tomorrow right?  Shane asked.

     

    You wont leave me alone until I do?  Bette said.

     

    Nope.  Shane answered

     

    I assume if I dont do it soon as in tomorrow youll just happen to mention it to Tina correct?  Bette said

     

    Correct.  Shane answered

     

    I thought so.  Well looks like Ill be calling the doc tomorrow then.  Bette said smiling at Shane.

     

    Ok, well I’m gonna head out.  Call me tomorrow and let me know.  Shane said as she hugged Bette good bye. 

     

    You know I will.  Bette said watching her caring friend leave. 

     

    Whit and Docs beach house

     

    Stacey looked out towards the ocean knowing that Joe and Whit had gone out.  Her body froze suddenly when she noticed Whits wheelchair sitting on the deck with no sign of Whit.  She wouldnt have left it here if she went out.  Stacey opened the door and stepped out. 

     

    There at the bottom of the steps sat Whit all by herself.  It was only about 10 or so steps that she had somehow found her way down.  What was she doing down there?  Had she fallen?  Stacey started to call out but her voice  Nothing came out.  Finally finding the nerve.

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    1. Please don’t get me wrong, I love your fic very much, OCD, but what’s up with the nosebleeds? If Bette loses some more blood, she’d be as pale as, er, Tina.
      I am not much into fairy tales but I am a big suck for happy endings/resolutions. Please let the nosebleed be something benign.
      Love your fic. Please post soon. Hope your arm feels better.

    4. Yes, Stacey & Whit drama does reflect what happened between Bette & Tina — nice touch. Setting up Cruz & Alice, that was cool. Darn, Bette having nosebleeds again…at least she set up an appointment…but still – OMG. Please continue…love your story.

    5. Baby, I loved every word. You are the master when it comes to story telling. A word to the folk out there, um this is a story!! You are the author so take us anywhere. We will follow where you lead. Great job!

    6. Whoooo… *wipe sweats off forehead*… TK, I am finally caught up with your story (all 600 chapters)!! Goodness, woman, your story is f***king intense!! I LOVE it, mama!! Go on with your bad self, this is just my kind of story! (Oh, hope that you had a great 4th!)

    7. All caught up again and all I can say is, DAMN GIRL!!! Our poor Bette deserves a break. Please don’t let anything be too serious. You’re getting damn good at torturing us.

    9. dude..seriously you are the meanest person i ever know…you have no compassion of us..what are you plan for bette now? Lobotomy..ok still i want some more..lol…

    12. Muahaha! Ahem, sorry, that came out for some reason. Anyways this was really good Tk, as always, heh! I told you it would be. Ooh glad B is making that apointment! More, Woo!

    13. The drama is soooooooo GREAT!!! I know that Bette wants to spare Tina from knowing about the nosebleeds, but she has to tell her. Nothing good can come out of Bette seeing the doctor without her. If it’s good news (although I can’t see any of those symptoms as good) then great, she didn’t need to worry Tina unecessarily. But if it’s bad, and then Bette has to confess to Tina about going to the Doctor and WHY she went…well Tina isn’t going to take that any well.

      Any update is a good update: long or short, it doesn’t matter. Thanks for the great chapter!

    15. Hot danget, here we go again. Bette should have gone to the hospital Shane or 911) afte she called the Dr. Berry. Some of the conversation between Whit and Stacey is a mirror image of Bette and Tina. Tina should really be able to help Stacey thru her issue with “another woman touching Whit”. Come on Stacey, she had hit ROCK bottom and nonething really happened. I really like the Cruz and Alice paring, NICE touch. Please post again soon.

    18. YEAH blood and drama my 2 favorite things from your story TK, keep up the good work, I had to make a appointment with my doctor today been having these mirgaines, not feeling to good about them.

    19. I still love your story but please no more sickness and turmoil at least not for a while. I can´t stand to see our lovely couple have so much to deal with in their everyday life. I´d much rather have a happy occasion such as a new pregnancy to be happening instead of all the bad stuff!

    20. “Then dialing Dr. Berry’s office she made an appointment to be seen first thing tomorrow.” Immediately after Bette hangs up the phone, a drop of blood dripped from her nose. Bette started to wipe it when an image of Tina and her twins flashed before her eyes. It was at that moment Bette resolved she was going to go to the emergency room. Better safe than sorry, she thought.

      Hey OCD, I know you’re a great writer and I love your spin on our fave TLW couple but I just thought I’ll put my spin on things — just in case you wanted to prolong the drama. Seriously your former job has made you such a drama queen. “Didn’t you rescue any cats out of trees or had to separate 2 horny dogs.” So much drama, it’s as if you love tragedy more more comedy.

      Hey don’t get me wrong OCD, I’ll read your story no matter what turn you take but can’t a let the good tymes roll, @least a little longer. Please. Ok let me stop whining, do as you wish, I’m going to read it and enjoy it anyway :)

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