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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 63

    Story written on July 6, 2005 by OCD.
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    Love, faith and honor

     

    What did she do?  Stacey asked

     

    She took off my shirt and started kissing my neck and bit down hard.  I know I shouldnt have even had her in this house, but I was more than lost at that point Stacey.  When she hurt me, it all came back to me why I hated her so much.  What she tried to do to Tina, all the bruises on Alice, I sobered up real fast and threw her off of me Stacey.  I told her I knew just how far I had fallen to even think of having her touch me.  Thats when she got mad and slapped me.  Before leaving she told me Kelly had taken Joshs things and left.  I knew then I had lost you.  Whit said crying, visibly shaking.

     

    Thats when she saw you gun?  Stacey asked

     

    Yes, I pulled it out of the lock box near the door.  Whit said.

     

    Then what happened?  Stacey said

     

    I made her repeat what she said about Kelly.  She wouldnt do it.  She thought I was going to shoot her at first.  Then she realized she was not my target.  I was.  She tried to talk to me but I made her leave.  Whit said wiping her face with her gloved hand.

     

    Why, Kacey?  How in Gods name did you fall that fast and that far and I not see it?  Crying Stacey looked away as she asked.  Feeling so ashamed, she had not been there for Whit.  She was so use to Whit shutting down about Police work that she didnt notice the danger signs.  Looking back, they were all there.  She just thought Whit was so strong.

     

    Baby, it’s not your fault.  I pushed you away.  No I shoved you away in the bathroom that day.  I cant explain how I felt other than to say that I no longer felt anything.  I love you so much all I could see was that you would be better off without me.  Whit said.

     

    How could I ever be better with out you?  You are my life, my soul mate Whit.  Stacey said as she reached for Whits hand. 

     

    Stacey I wasnt thinking.  Thats the point.  I wasnt thinking about you or Josh any more.  All I could see was that my partner was dead, my legs were gone, you were gone and finally I was gone.  Whit answered.

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    1. Please don’t get me wrong, I love your fic very much, OCD, but what’s up with the nosebleeds? If Bette loses some more blood, she’d be as pale as, er, Tina.
      I am not much into fairy tales but I am a big suck for happy endings/resolutions. Please let the nosebleed be something benign.
      Love your fic. Please post soon. Hope your arm feels better.

    4. Yes, Stacey & Whit drama does reflect what happened between Bette & Tina — nice touch. Setting up Cruz & Alice, that was cool. Darn, Bette having nosebleeds again…at least she set up an appointment…but still – OMG. Please continue…love your story.

    5. Baby, I loved every word. You are the master when it comes to story telling. A word to the folk out there, um this is a story!! You are the author so take us anywhere. We will follow where you lead. Great job!

    6. Whoooo… *wipe sweats off forehead*… TK, I am finally caught up with your story (all 600 chapters)!! Goodness, woman, your story is f***king intense!! I LOVE it, mama!! Go on with your bad self, this is just my kind of story! (Oh, hope that you had a great 4th!)

    7. All caught up again and all I can say is, DAMN GIRL!!! Our poor Bette deserves a break. Please don’t let anything be too serious. You’re getting damn good at torturing us.

    9. dude..seriously you are the meanest person i ever know…you have no compassion of us..what are you plan for bette now? Lobotomy..ok still i want some more..lol…

    12. Muahaha! Ahem, sorry, that came out for some reason. Anyways this was really good Tk, as always, heh! I told you it would be. Ooh glad B is making that apointment! More, Woo!

    13. The drama is soooooooo GREAT!!! I know that Bette wants to spare Tina from knowing about the nosebleeds, but she has to tell her. Nothing good can come out of Bette seeing the doctor without her. If it’s good news (although I can’t see any of those symptoms as good) then great, she didn’t need to worry Tina unecessarily. But if it’s bad, and then Bette has to confess to Tina about going to the Doctor and WHY she went…well Tina isn’t going to take that any well.

      Any update is a good update: long or short, it doesn’t matter. Thanks for the great chapter!

    15. Hot danget, here we go again. Bette should have gone to the hospital Shane or 911) afte she called the Dr. Berry. Some of the conversation between Whit and Stacey is a mirror image of Bette and Tina. Tina should really be able to help Stacey thru her issue with “another woman touching Whit”. Come on Stacey, she had hit ROCK bottom and nonething really happened. I really like the Cruz and Alice paring, NICE touch. Please post again soon.

    18. YEAH blood and drama my 2 favorite things from your story TK, keep up the good work, I had to make a appointment with my doctor today been having these mirgaines, not feeling to good about them.

    19. I still love your story but please no more sickness and turmoil at least not for a while. I can´t stand to see our lovely couple have so much to deal with in their everyday life. I´d much rather have a happy occasion such as a new pregnancy to be happening instead of all the bad stuff!

    20. “Then dialing Dr. Berry’s office she made an appointment to be seen first thing tomorrow.” Immediately after Bette hangs up the phone, a drop of blood dripped from her nose. Bette started to wipe it when an image of Tina and her twins flashed before her eyes. It was at that moment Bette resolved she was going to go to the emergency room. Better safe than sorry, she thought.

      Hey OCD, I know you’re a great writer and I love your spin on our fave TLW couple but I just thought I’ll put my spin on things — just in case you wanted to prolong the drama. Seriously your former job has made you such a drama queen. “Didn’t you rescue any cats out of trees or had to separate 2 horny dogs.” So much drama, it’s as if you love tragedy more more comedy.

      Hey don’t get me wrong OCD, I’ll read your story no matter what turn you take but can’t a let the good tymes roll, @least a little longer. Please. Ok let me stop whining, do as you wish, I’m going to read it and enjoy it anyway :)

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