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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 65

    Story written on July 13, 2005 by OCD.
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    Kiss Me While I Sleep.
    Sex, drama, blood, kiss.

     

    Thirty minutes later the twins were fighting and Josh was crying his little heart out.  Whit went into the kitchen to see chocolate all over the kitchen table, floor and the kids. 

     

    ALICE!  Why in gods name did you feed them chocolate cake?  Have you lost your mind?  They will be wide ***** open for the next several hours.  And you know what?  YOU are going to take care of them when they go off on their sugar high.  Whit said with steam coming out of her ears. 

     

    What Id do.  Whats wrong with chocolate cake?  My Mom use to give me cake when I was their age.  Alice said.

     

    Yea, and look how you turned out.  Ms. Motor Mouth.  Whit said laughing as she washed the childrens faces. 

     

    Shane and Dana just stood their both shaking their heads.  They could not believe Alice did this, yet knowing Alice somehow it fit.  The twins were wide open for the next several hours until they finally ran down taking Alice along with them.  Alices hair looked like shed been through a car wash with the top down.  Finally the children fell asleep on their little mats in the family room with Auntie Alice in the middle of the pile.

     

    Meanwhile in the ICU

     

    Stacey and Kit left to shower, change and come back.  Since they left Tina had been pacing back and fourth around Bettes room.  Still wearing the dress from the night before, she had taken off her heels during the night.  Tina leaned down and kissed Bette softly on her lips and whispered, “I love you.”  Then continued to pace the room as her tears made her eyes burn.  She felt her entire body tremble as she heard Bette speak.  Tina gasped as she turned around to see Bettes eyes were open. 

     

    T!  Tina?  Help me!  Was all Bette could say? 

     

    Tina ran over to Bettes side taking her hand.  Baby, I’m here.  I’m right here baby.  Open your eyes again Bette.  Open your eyes for me honey.  Please Bette look at me honey.  Tina pleaded as she pushed the Nurses button.  

     

    Dr. Berry and Bettes nurse entered the room.  Dr. Berry checked Bettes pupils and got a good response.  Her right eye was a bit droopy as was her face, but that was to be expected.  She took out a needle pin and traced it down Bettes right side for reflex reaction.  Bettes right side responded but not as well as her left side.  Again this was expected from what Dr. Berry had seen on her CT scan and MRI.

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    3. Another really great chapter! I look forward to your postings because I know they’re gonna be long and exciting. Keep it up. You’re doing a great job!

    5. You can not keeping these through, so much tournment, it is a bit cruel, exept, I undersand the concept, please give them a little respite. But I do look forward to your next chapter.

    7. Geeezzz what more left for that woman go trought??? plane crash??..lol..and in your author note you said ” So let’s have some fun”..if this is your idea of fun god help us when you start the Drama..lol..amazing chapter OCD i love it and you more than deserve a “L word award” for your story ok post real soon thanks

    9. now dont take this the wrong way, i love your story. i have since the first chapter. i have one question though… do you like bette at all? i mean you just give here more and more sickness. its like you are still punishing her for hurting tina. please go easy on her?

    10. yeah i agree with some of the readers here – it does seem you have a ‘fondness’ of torturing the B&T family and the gang with all these sickness; melodramas etc. do you derive pleasure in making ppl suffer – dont you think the world is bad enough with all the sufferings that you must keep doing this. you reminded me of ano writer who also loves to inflict pain and torture throughout the entire story on B and it still going on it seems. come on there is always a rainbow at the end of the rain – other than that i like yout story still (for the time being until i see how far you go with these sufferings).

    11. I am so sad right now. How will she ever be able to hold and play with her children? I have a huge lump in my throat cause I’m trying not to cry!!! Evil I say!!! j/k (about the evil). Could you would you please make Bette the way she was before she had the stroke. I know it’s not realistic to all of a sudden have her make a full recovery but could you do it just once for all of us Bette and Tina (they will live happily ever after) fans???? :(

    14. I feel sorry for bette’s run of bad luck also, but she always has a way of bouncing back. keep up the writing. i love your story.
      sorry to hear of your bad luck with your arm. probably not the way to make the paper. would have been better if it said something about “Lesbian Fan-Fic Goddess” writes another great chapter. haha!! keep your chin up and your fingers on the keyboard OCD

    16. Man, I don’t know how much more of this I can take – just when I think everything is going to be ok you throw in another HIGH drama. Please post soon – need to know that Bette is going to be ok. Btw – this is an awesome story.

    21. TK this was awesome you get better with each chapter you write and I just can’t say enough about how much I love your characters. I can see everyone of them thanks for that and please see our Bette though this thanks

    22. You could be a writer for the daytime soaps :-) which I love btw! .. Just got caught up and can’t believe all the drama that continues in the lives of these folks. Never a dull moment when I read your chapters. Great update. btw – saw the pic in the N&O also. Hope that eventually everything will work out for you and the rest of the folks that have been caught up in this mess.

    23. I love your story, but I must agree with soui, can Bette get a BREAK and not her leg. I know there must be drama, but why must it always be at Bette’s expense. PLEASE give the girl a break, and let someone else carry the drama. Hot danget! Just let Bette be healthy for a NICE change.

    25. Fuck TK – you do know how to leave us hanging here. OMG – the drama continues. Wonderful update TK and I do hope you are feeling better. I can hardly wait for the next post to arrive

    26. I’m finally getting caught up w/ your story. All I can say is you’re fucking killing me here. Please bring some happiness into the Kennard-Porter household, soon.

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