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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 66

    Story written on July 16, 2005 by OCD.
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    Redeeming Love

    Tina sat watching over the love of her life.  In order to bear up with all that was going on Tina was trying to hang onto positive thoughts.  Her mind drifted back to there time at the Catalina Islands where their hearts, body and souls reconnected with one simple question.  She could hear Bette as clearly now in her head as it was the day she said to her Do you trust me? she felt as Bette touched her lovingly.  Each tender and gentle caress they shared that day reminded Tina of the love they rebuilt that night.  They had shared all of their inner being. 

     

    Tina turned her ring round and round on her right hand as she looked at the birth stones of her two children and the stone that represented their 9th anniversary three years ago.  So many wonderful memories they had made together.  So many horrible times that she forced herself to forget.  No not forgotten but she had to stay positive right now if she was going to get through this.  No matter the good or bad they had always survived.  They always found their way back to one another.  This time would be no different.  Tina would fight to find their way for the both of them.

     

    Kit walked into the room and sat next to Tina.  Kit wondered if she had ever really told Bette just how proud she was of her.  How much she loved her baby sis.  Melvin never was one to express any kind of emotions and Bette took after Melvin in that department.  Although Kit knew she was no better at expressing her feelings, she so wanted Bette to know now.  Bette had suffered so much.  Kit just wished she could have taken all of her sisters pain away and protected her.  She hadnt always been there for Bette but she was now.

     

    “Come here, sit down, will you give me that.”  Bette said chasing Jordan around the family room trying to put his diaper back on. 

     

    NO!  Me do it!  Me do it!  Jordan yelled as he ran butt naked from his mother. 

     

    Jordan Taylor Kennard-Porter, get your ***** over here right this minute!  Bette said stomping her foot. 

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    1. oh my god!!! hell must have frozen over. what a truly sad day. poor tina. i can’t imagine the love of my life leaving me. thank god it’s only fan fic. i have loved this story, but it has me wondering if this is the end, or a beginning?

    2. HOLLY SHIT TK!!!
      wow my jaw is still open I had to read that a couple of times, fuck you had to have the last twist with that didn’t you. WOW still fucking speechless right now.

    4. WOW TK..amazing chapter you never stop to surprise me i´m so glad Bette is fine and the whole gang too..and about your healthy i hope you be better soon have faith..amazing chapter thanks

    7. God, god, I’m currently weeping rivers, right after your so unexpected last chapter totally broke my heart… That was truly beautiful, however, and god knows how much talent a writer must have to break readers this way…
      So, even if I cannot manage but feeling in total dispair since I read these last lines again and again, bringing back an incredibly amount of hidden tears from the very bottom of my heart, I have to salute your talent.

      All I hope now is that you’ll recover the best possible and as soon as possible.
      Cheer up !

    9. I love your stories since the beginning, they made me dream and laugh especially with the twins. But I don’t understand where this last paragraph comes from. It’s really falling like a hair on the soup.

    10. Wauw that was truly an ending I didn´t expect. However I have loved your story from the beginning and I have laughed, cried and wept the tears of my face when needed, so if you by any chance will be able to write again, then i´ll be a very faithful reader. When it comes to your healt, I´ll keep my fingers crossed and pray for your recovery. Even though you´re having a tough time right now, then you must keep faith and still believe deep down inside of you that it will get better. I know from personal experience that the road can be rocky, and how easy you become tired of being hopitalized. (I had a double lung transplant in December 2002 and after spending almost 10 months in hospital that year I got tired of white walls so believe me when I say that you have my deepest sympathy going in and out all the time)However I keep my fingers crossed and hope to see you back on the Fanfic site when you have recovered.

    11. First of all let me say that tho i dont comment much ive never missed a chapter of you wonderful story i really hope that what ever health problems your having are soon gone and you will be back to writting very soon so get weel soon! NOW!… im so shocked at the ending of this great story,really wasnt expecting that,so very sad!the sign of a good writter tho throwing that at us! well thankyou and hope to read more from you soon,

    12. WOW… that’s is all I can say right now…

      I am really hoping for your recovering, just take your time and the things will get better. Take care of yourself and when you recover let us know…

    14. I have not commented often, but felt it was necessary this time. The story was a wonderful story. I was taken aback by the ending, but it was a beautiful ending. You could feel the love.

      As for you TK, You are in my prayers, don’t give up, you have your family here that will be supporting you with their prays here. Keep in touch and maybe you can give us another story in the near future. But first take care of yourself.

    15. I can honestly say my heart was in my throat at the last paragraph. I’m not sure where it came from. What a shock.

      As for you TK, your story has been amazing and you have given a lot of pleasure, I hope your health improves soon.

    17. Hey TK Thank you for that WONDERFUL STORY that I always read I’m Love that Story well it’s really Great and enjoy reading you’re story so much Thank you for that you are really Amazing writer we are gonna missed you’re Story and Good luck TK you’re fan fic reader momo.

    18. ok TK I’m back, my mouth is now closed and I can speak and from my own experience having to recover from injury, stay strong, and fight it every way you can. And I can’t beleive you killed bette off can we at least know what she died from? or some kind of closing because that was some shock you left us with.

    19. First of all I hope you continue to fight for your return to good health. I have loved this story, but like moonglow I do not see where that ending came from. Poor Bette, I know that we do not have to have happy ever after, but I thought she had earned a shot at longivity with Tina and thier kids. And how about Kit? Why does everybody except the straight girl find thier soulmate or someone to share thier like with. Come on Kit deserve so good straight lovin. Being a Bette and Tina fan, I am really not feeling this ending for them. Good luck and may God bless you.

    22. I never saw this coming….My eyes are a new source of water!!! then I remember you saying……
      Author’s Note: Once again I am going into hiding. I promise Bette will not die. No main ppl will ever die in my story ok. Sorry it took me so long to post. luv4nrt inspired me to write the first part. I hope she still luvs me. LOL… Thanks to my grls for helping me out. Reba-kathy my babe, Petluvr my grl and Jwet my bud…
      …But I will forgive you for changing your mind….even though I hate the ending!!!!! Truly your writing was a gift to all of us who followed your story…and for that I say Thankyou, Thankyo, Thankyou….This has totally ruined my day, but thank goodnes it’s only fanfic….and I’ll try and focus on that part!!! Tks Again

    23. im stunned scocked at your ending my tears are blinding me ive really enjoyed your storty your a great writerhoping youll make this a sad dream get well ill be praying for you

    24. Ripley died in Aliens 3. Obi-wan Kenobi died fighting Darth Vader. Thelma and Louise drove out into a cliff. Rachael turned out to be a replicant, ergo, good as dead. Neo died. Hector Iliad died.

      Heroes and heroines, they all frickin’ died. And now, Bette. Hhhuuuhhh! I am getting myself something strong to drink. The unreality of it all just escapes me. Gawd!

      But then again, it is always the JOURNEY and not the DESTINATION. And I must say it’s been an amazing trip, OCD. A veritable emotional rollercoaster ride.

      If this is your ending, I beg you to write some more (other stories, if possible). The hydraulic fluid may have fucked up your arm but your brain is as inspired as ever, forever untouchable.

      More power to you. Go get those negligent little buggers who did you wrong. And we’d still be here, eagerly awaithing your posts. And loving your stories.

    25. “awaiting,” not “awaithing.” Sorry, no spellcheck on these comment thingies.

      Please get well soon. May the Force be with you. (I can’t send you prayers, just my best intentions, because I am an atheist. As in all-dressed-up-and-nowhere-to-go-when-I-die atheist.)

      Cheers!

    27. Baby, first let me say that I am so glad that I am not the only one to kill a main character off. Nice to have the company buddy. As for this last story I would use one word to describe it, MAGNIFICENT!! It truly is a masterpiece that has no other light to compare. I am very proud of my grl.

    28. Wow!! I was stunned by the ending…absolutely stunned. Didn’t see that coming at all. This story has been great from the start, showing such fierce loyalty, so much unconditional love. Thank you for the incredible amount of time and talent you have given us. I hope to see your name on this site very soon.

    29. OMG… PLS tel me that’s it’s just a nightmare! you said that bette’s NOT gonna die in your story… o did dhe died anyway? i thought that she’s reovering well w/ whit…. btw, is this the finale?
      p/s: just wanted you to know that YOU ROCK! (your stories has managed to put me through an emotional roller coaster ride)

    30. First of all, good luck to you and i wish you well…you are an amazing writer..you’re story always reveals the beauty of human spirit..despite it’s sadness and joy..you always believe in love and forever..as sad as it is..the way it ends..it ws done beautifully..all the best

    32. I agree with honda90, I loved your story but WISH, and HOPE that you would resend Bette’s death. I appreciate you having to deal with your health, but hoped that you would have left it openended so that you could revisit the story after you are WELL or maybe get a writing partner. It is that Bette had been put to so much physical drama not to be able to enjoy and experience her children growth and a long life with Tina. PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE, PLEEEEEEEEASE. I was orginally pissed off when I first read this chapter, but now I am reduced to begging and pleading.

    35. I’m sorry to hear about your health issues & hope that with time – you will again be up and moving around. Please, let us know how you are doing from time to time, you will be truly missed. Finally, I’m sorry you had to end your story the way you did – it breaks my heart that you had to have Bette die and leave the love of her life & soul mate behind. PLEASE GET BETTER & REALIZE THAT YOU ARE IN MY THOUGHTS OFTEN & MY HEART GOES OUT TO YA.

    36. My friend who is paralized and has very limited use of his hands said that their is a software called dragon that types out what he wants to say on his computer I hope it helps

    38. First and foremost OCD my prayers go out to you regarding your health. That’s how I found the fan fic section. I was recovering from a surgery and await a 2nd surgery in two weeks. So believe that I understand your being tired of hospitals. Now to the story. I can’t really say when the tears started but early into the first paragraph I sensed Bette was gone. When I reached the end of the story I was uncontrollably crying and my wife walked into the room thinking something was wrong with me. She had me log off and we went to dinner. Three Grey Goose Martini’s later I return home and reread this story. Same outcome. Bette’s gone. DAMN! And did I add the fact that today was my Birthday. Yeap you darkened my spirits with this story.

    39. Your story and ending keep popping into my mind throughout my day and I shed a tear…This is going to take me a few days to get by this….Can you recant and chge the ending???? PLEASE….

      I will pray for your health, sue the bastards!!! Your gift of this story will be treasured and remembered at fan fic award time for sure!!! I hope we will be lucky enough to see another one in the future!!! THANK YOU

    41. What an ending. I was thrilled when I saw that you had posted again but the end was a shocker:( Totally unexpected – I can’t believe it. Extremely well written, all of the story, what a ride. Thanks. I’ll look forward to you maybe with a new story. Pity Bette can’t rise from the dead!
      PS I hope that your health problems disappear. Horrible incident for all of you folks.

    43. TK – that was so beautiful and amazing. I have simply loved your story from the beginning. I´m sorry to see it go, but I do understand the reason. I hope you are feeling better and that you are comming back with a nother story in the future, because we will miss you on the site. Bless you TK and happy outcomming of the future for you.

    44. Oh god! That was so sad. I think my heart stop when I read: I love you Bette, Forever I Promise.” Tina said as she spread Bette’s ashes into the ocean and watched as the love of her life was swept away. I keep reading it over and over again. I can’t stop crying. But I don’t understand, why did Bette die? Wasn’t she doing better?

    45. TK,
      THank you for sharing with us all your wonderful talent and creation especially as this has been a rough time for you physically and emotionally.
      I hope to see your name appear on this site some time soon.
      Wishing you the best for the future and send prayer and kind thoughts.
      A Loyal fan.

    46. Thank you so much for this story. The ending was very sad, but beautifully written. Again, I thank you for your wonderful story and sharing your great talent. Truly wishing you a fast and healthy recovery. To the future…my best.

    50. Thank you for wrapping up the story… even if it was such a sad ending. I’m sorry you aren’t feeling well… come back when you are better!!!

    52. Hi TK I have enjoyed your story very much.. I´m sad it´s ending but I understand your reasons… Please take care of yourself and I hope to see you on this site again when your are ok… Don´t give up…

    53. TK. I don’t comment often, but I was blown away by this one! I read it a couple days ago and was so shocked I could not comment then. It made me cry. I know it’s only fiction, but it seemed so real. Why did you let Bette die? It was a really great story though. I enjoyed it! I trust that your health will improve soon. My Best wishes to you.

    54. First let me say that i hope you get better really soon and that recovery can be a difficult and painful process you can do it!!!!!!!!!!! that can’t be the end you have to FIX IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    55. TK – What can I say? I was shocked by the ending and brought to tears. This has been an absolute amazing storyline. Each arc complete and with purpose. I never expected Bette not to survive but in light of your comments in the beginning, even this departure was written from grace. Thank you for sharing your love of writing and these characters with us. It has been our priviledge. With respect to your health, I wish only the best for you. Be well and regain your strength and please…don’t be a stranger. We do care about you too!! Be Good :p

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