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Forever yours. Chapter 9.
Carmen reads the first item, a letter.
Dear Carmen,
You’ll notice that in the bag is a dress. It was one of the pieces that I showed to Lauren, I made it for you. I’ve missed you Carmen, please get ready, I’ll be waiting.
Waiting patiently,
Shane.
Carmen smiled at the letter, the days sadness disappearing as she rushes to get ready, she needed to see her lover.
As Carmen walked around her bedroom, in her undergarments, she looked over at the bag on the bed. She walked over to it and unzipped it. Inside was a beautiful green dress, the color of Shane’s eyes. She smiled as she put on the dress, when looking in the mirror, Carmen couldn’t help but laugh at the face the dress showed a good amount of cleavage, and definitely accentuated her ass. Carmen went down stair after putting the high heels that Shane had also given her, same color as the dress. When Carmen exited the door she saw a limo waiting outside for her…
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Shane was waiting anxiously for Carmen to get there. She was currently waiting impatiently in the rooftop of the highest building in L.A., she had chosen this place because she wanted Carmen to see the beauty of the city from the highest point. This was the closest Shane could give the woman of her dreams to heaven.
When the elevator door opened, Shane turned around with a smile on her face, looking into Carmen’s eye, seeing the love there, with the shock etched on her beautiful face…
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Carmen couldn’t believe it, Shane had surprised her so much already, but seeing the table in the middle of the roof, with a beautiful view of the city and sky from above, rose pedals scattered across the floor as she made her way to Shane.
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Shane quickly grabbed Carmen’s chair and pulled it out, scooting it in once the sexy Latina sat. Shane ran over to her own seat, mind still dazed from the beauty of Carmen, how she looked so beautiful in that green dress.
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Shane and Carmen spent the dinner simply eating, drinking wine, and talking. Carmen ended up talking about work, ironically. But it wasn’t what was said that mattered no, it was how Shane would bite her thumb’s nail quietly, which always indicated Shane was listening in deep thought. The way Shane would endearingly brush hair out of Carmen’s face, or lovingly caress her cheek.
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(32 votes, average: 3.56 out of 5)
I agree with you on the Carmen part. I only want to see her with Shane. As for Shane and others?!?…. It’s cool, as long as she ends up with Carmen in the end. “SHARMEN” baby… ALL THE WAY!!!! Loved the update! pps!
this makes me miss Carmen and Shane together. Paige was alright but nothing compares to Sharmen…Shane should either get with Carmen or be a player forever. Good fan fic!