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Tina was about to make a response when
Bette cuts her off.
“Jack let’s get out of here and go
someplace where we can talk privately.” Bette suggests looking at Tina trying
to calm her with her presence.
“Exactly Bette lets go.” Jack says
gathering his papers and turning to leave.
Bette and Tina follow walking side by side. As the three of them make their way out they
pass by Helena and her counsel with Bette being closest to
seeing them coming leaned over to have a word with Tina.
Bette interrupted
Tina.
“Tina darling how’s Anna? Is she well?
Did she have a happy birthday darling?”
Both Bette and Tina ignore
by.
their backs. “When you’re ready for real
love you know where to find me Tina darling.
We’ll be a proper family.”
Bette stops in her tracks as
her. Tina knowing Bette so well knew
Bette’s buttons. Tina turned to see
Bette, sees the rigid posture and the clenched fists, this was her worse
fear. Jack also paused, beginning to
sweat they didn’t need a confrontation now.
Slowly Bette turned around to face
Chapter 130 – Fireworks
they are turning over the negatives,
was practically grabbing Jason’s lapel.
“That can’t happen”
was emphatically insisting. She had no
sooner gotten these words out of her mouth and she spots Jack, Tina and Bette
making their way towards her.
out as she just wished she had a video camera to capture the look on
have recognized Bette’s maneuver to shield Tina from
face. The look quickly changed to her
mask of plastic warmth.
almost through Bette.
thought that Bette and Tina would successfully maneuver by
For
the whole thing happened as if it was slow motion. Bette slowly turnes to face
with her mask firmly in place just smiled at Bette.
see the look of horror that crossed Tina’s face as she realizes that Bette
wasn’t going to just walk by
without a word. Jack even looks
uncomfortable as he whips around to catch up to Bette.
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I luv your writing Jwet! I can’t wait to see how it all turns out. :) Hope things aren’t too hectic for you.
OH YES i can think of sooo much that Bette could have said to Helena….. but none of it fit for this site!!lol it would never be about the birth as Bette is and has been taking the higher moral stand and that info is for Tina ears first??? lol or at least when the time is perfect anyway who cares what she said as long as it got the reaction it did, great chapter thanks
i hope she chokes on her tongue *wink* you are too good and too good to us. thanks honey.
I agree with Sea this is too good to be so short.Will you tell us what Bette said?Please.
Really curious what Bette said to Helena to have her “spewing filth”…LOL!!! Love this: “This was the kind of story that myths were made of. Her telling of the story was nothing short of magic as the legend of Bette Porter just took on a whole new dimension.” Great chapter, as always and looking forward to more.
I wonder if Bette told her she was in the room…OMG..you are killing me. Please post soon. I need your story to help keep me warm in this lovely state we live in.
I am so glad that Bette just verbally attacked Helena. Hope we will find out what she said in the chapter–PLEASE! Sometimes what you say to someone can hurt worse then any physical attack. I can’t wait to see Helena get what is comming to her.
I just finished reading the last five chapters and always excellent as usual. I have one request and that is can you reveal what Bette said to the “British Bitch”…lol. When is Bette going to tell Jack that she was there suring the pregnancy or will Dr.Wilson slip and reveal that final secret??? Please post soon and happy thanksgiving!!!
Good chapter. What the hell is Bette told Helena and now let see what Shane have for Alice. Post soon please, thanks!
you are a genius – a tease but still a genius storyteller.
Such a great story, Bette told Helena that she was present at the delivery, I hope. The net is finally closing in on Helena, I wonder what her mother will say, about what is going on. Please post the next chapter soon, dying to find out what happens next.
Go Bette, Go Bette, Go Bette – kick her ass!
no course Bette didnt told that she was at the delivery..that is her higher card..Bette is smart she knows want she wants and that is Tina and Anna she would never let Helena knows something like that…now lets see Shane and Alice together in action..great as always thanks :o)
This story is like a good ole meaty British pie. A pinch of this a dash of that and a whole lot of meat, yummy.
Dammit J, this is too good to be only two pages!!!! I need more!! Do you not understand how great this story is? I have no problem with begging if it will get me another chapter…or four pages instead of two…no problem begging at all!! Thanks J!!
“I don’t know but what ever it was I have got to find out. I mean it was priceless.” I count on you Alice. At least I hope Bette will tell Tina this thing;) Thanks for another great chapter.
what did bette say? i want to know too, i can’t wait, i need to find out NOW…thanks, amazing story
I hope we find out what Bette said. I hope Helen-a doesn’t pysically(sp?) harm them.
Research pays off….I think Bette reminded Helena that Tina called out “Bette” during the delivery of Anna. Am I closer? You weave a very good tale. Can you tell I read this more than once? Thanks, Jwet.
wow! great chapter!! OOH I can’t wait to see more chapters! keep writing. I’ll keep reading.
I dought that Bette told Helena that she was present at Anna’s birth. This is something that Bette would want to tell Tina first and hold it as a trump card to Helena’s plan. Maybe she told Helena that Tina said that she was faking her orgasims with her. I love how TEAM B&T is working on all of the angles. Way to go Shane and Alice. I just love this story Jwet, please PLEASE continue.
ooooh,oooh….I think I know what Bette said to Helena “you weren’t there when Tina delivered Anna”. Am I close? Needless to say, but I still want to say it “Thanks!”. And since it’s Thanksgiving…another “thing” I can be thankful for – yours and the other writers wonderful story.Thank you.
Hey Jwet,Wonderful as always.Am on vaction in Vegas & San Fran until mid Dec so will be recharged and ready.Tattie bye and catch you nearer Christmas.Who knows this fabulous fan fiction may be finished.Your Loyal Fan.
hey-i’ve been out of town for 2 wks but just spent the last 2 1/2 hrs reading – just wow wow you leave me wordless again–i love your style of writing–i always feel the emotions you mean to give–alice article was fantastic she deseves a special reward from the girls–yoda is just yoda-hope Sam does all that’s expected and finds a good job with the foundation and has the support of all the gang-even jackie and grace–come on girl don’t keep us waiting– oh Happy Thanksgiving to you and other readers-its great to be home