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Bette ever so calmly walks up to
in her ear. Strain as she might
Bette is saying. But if the look of
absolute hate that crosses
indication, Bette said something that was very effective in pushing
venom in her heart spewing forth to come out of her mouth. The once beautiful face takes on a distortion
that makes it look as hideous as her words.
Jason has to grab
by the shoulders, shaking her in an attempt to silence the evil coming
forth. This whole time Richard Cramit
looks frozen in his spot, not knowing what is going to happen next, trying his
best to disappear into the woodwork.
Bette just straightens up giving
to rejoin Tina and Jack on their way out.
Tina looks up to Bette silently asking, Bette only wrapped her arm
around Tina’s waist in a comforting way resuming their walk, leading the way
out.
couldn’t believe what she was seeing.
Torn between hanging back to see what Helena would do next and tracking
down Bette to find out what she had said, Alice finally decided that hanging
back was the proper course of action.
Flabbergasted,
just couldn’t stop watching the car wreck that was Helena Peabody. She needed to see what she would do next.
Jason feeling he had
under control for the moment, turned to Richard and instructed him to pick up
all the notes and put them in his briefcase.
Richard seemed startled into motion, doing as he was asked he gathered
all of Jason’s belongings and shut the briefcase. Jason apparently afraid to let go of
pursue Bette and Tina out of the courthouse, kept a grip around her waist.
When Richard had everything together, Jason instructed him
to carry the briefcase and follow them out.
Never letting
go, Jason began propelling her forward out of the courthouse.
The whole time
is bitching at Jason “Let me go! Get
your ***** hands off me! Let me
go!”
Jason just quietly reminds
here.” Looking both ways in the hall,
determining which direction that the other party had turned Jason deliberately
went in the opposite direction. Not
wanting any other fireworks today.
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I luv your writing Jwet! I can’t wait to see how it all turns out. :) Hope things aren’t too hectic for you.
OH YES i can think of sooo much that Bette could have said to Helena….. but none of it fit for this site!!lol it would never be about the birth as Bette is and has been taking the higher moral stand and that info is for Tina ears first??? lol or at least when the time is perfect anyway who cares what she said as long as it got the reaction it did, great chapter thanks
i hope she chokes on her tongue *wink* you are too good and too good to us. thanks honey.
I agree with Sea this is too good to be so short.Will you tell us what Bette said?Please.
Really curious what Bette said to Helena to have her “spewing filth”…LOL!!! Love this: “This was the kind of story that myths were made of. Her telling of the story was nothing short of magic as the legend of Bette Porter just took on a whole new dimension.” Great chapter, as always and looking forward to more.
I wonder if Bette told her she was in the room…OMG..you are killing me. Please post soon. I need your story to help keep me warm in this lovely state we live in.
I am so glad that Bette just verbally attacked Helena. Hope we will find out what she said in the chapter–PLEASE! Sometimes what you say to someone can hurt worse then any physical attack. I can’t wait to see Helena get what is comming to her.
I just finished reading the last five chapters and always excellent as usual. I have one request and that is can you reveal what Bette said to the “British Bitch”…lol. When is Bette going to tell Jack that she was there suring the pregnancy or will Dr.Wilson slip and reveal that final secret??? Please post soon and happy thanksgiving!!!
Good chapter. What the hell is Bette told Helena and now let see what Shane have for Alice. Post soon please, thanks!
you are a genius – a tease but still a genius storyteller.
Such a great story, Bette told Helena that she was present at the delivery, I hope. The net is finally closing in on Helena, I wonder what her mother will say, about what is going on. Please post the next chapter soon, dying to find out what happens next.
Go Bette, Go Bette, Go Bette – kick her ass!
no course Bette didnt told that she was at the delivery..that is her higher card..Bette is smart she knows want she wants and that is Tina and Anna she would never let Helena knows something like that…now lets see Shane and Alice together in action..great as always thanks :o)
This story is like a good ole meaty British pie. A pinch of this a dash of that and a whole lot of meat, yummy.
Dammit J, this is too good to be only two pages!!!! I need more!! Do you not understand how great this story is? I have no problem with begging if it will get me another chapter…or four pages instead of two…no problem begging at all!! Thanks J!!
“I don’t know but what ever it was I have got to find out. I mean it was priceless.” I count on you Alice. At least I hope Bette will tell Tina this thing;) Thanks for another great chapter.
what did bette say? i want to know too, i can’t wait, i need to find out NOW…thanks, amazing story
I hope we find out what Bette said. I hope Helen-a doesn’t pysically(sp?) harm them.
Research pays off….I think Bette reminded Helena that Tina called out “Bette” during the delivery of Anna. Am I closer? You weave a very good tale. Can you tell I read this more than once? Thanks, Jwet.
wow! great chapter!! OOH I can’t wait to see more chapters! keep writing. I’ll keep reading.
I dought that Bette told Helena that she was present at Anna’s birth. This is something that Bette would want to tell Tina first and hold it as a trump card to Helena’s plan. Maybe she told Helena that Tina said that she was faking her orgasims with her. I love how TEAM B&T is working on all of the angles. Way to go Shane and Alice. I just love this story Jwet, please PLEASE continue.
ooooh,oooh….I think I know what Bette said to Helena “you weren’t there when Tina delivered Anna”. Am I close? Needless to say, but I still want to say it “Thanks!”. And since it’s Thanksgiving…another “thing” I can be thankful for – yours and the other writers wonderful story.Thank you.
Hey Jwet,Wonderful as always.Am on vaction in Vegas & San Fran until mid Dec so will be recharged and ready.Tattie bye and catch you nearer Christmas.Who knows this fabulous fan fiction may be finished.Your Loyal Fan.
hey-i’ve been out of town for 2 wks but just spent the last 2 1/2 hrs reading – just wow wow you leave me wordless again–i love your style of writing–i always feel the emotions you mean to give–alice article was fantastic she deseves a special reward from the girls–yoda is just yoda-hope Sam does all that’s expected and finds a good job with the foundation and has the support of all the gang-even jackie and grace–come on girl don’t keep us waiting– oh Happy Thanksgiving to you and other readers-its great to be home