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From Afar
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Vince was waiting for Shane in the same seat he was in the
first time they met a few weeks ago. He
wanted to bring Shane up to speed on what he had seen with this
she sat down. Vince immediately waved
for the waitress to bring Shane some coffee.
He let her fix it up and take a sip before he began to talk.
“This chick is a piece of work Shane. We went back to some of the foundations and
agencies you asked us to visit. It’s
amazing what we were able to get out of them when they think we are working for
the Federal Government.” Vince says easily laughing at the how naive some
people were.
Shane shared in Vince’s laugh knowing that it wasn’t just
him saying he was from the government.
It also had a lot to do with his look.
“Actually Shane I’m just joking. This woman really isn’t liked that’s why
people talked. Many of the people we
talked to were only too eager to tell their stories. This woman is the stuff bad urban legends are
made of. You know the kind that make you
look over your shoulder so you won’t loose a kidney in a bathtub somewhere.”
Vince says.
“So people wanted to talk to you?” Shane asks surprised.
“Well it’s not like I’m going to drag them into court to
testify. Most of them want this woman to
pay they just don’t want to be the one that personally pulls the trigger on
her. I’ve got it all written down here.”
Vince says holding up a file that he then hands to Shane. “There should be enough here for your pretty
little reporter friend to get herself an award or something. Especially have her look into that woman,
Susan Clark. That is one pissed off
woman and it’s her husband that
screwed. I think she will talk to your
friend.”
Shane laughs at the thought of
poetic justice-icing on the cake.
“This is great. Is
this it or are you working on anything more?” Shane asks looking through the
file.
“Well I’m not sure if this means anything. We noticed that this woman goes to this old
building a lot. It’s a neatly kept place
off of
peak. You know be the gas company
looking for a leak or something. Once we
look around if it’s something I’ll give you a call. Other than that I have two people watching
Samantha. With the dinner tonight we’ll
have it all covered.” Vince shares the plan with Shane.
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Let’s see what Vince has dug up on Helena…and what will be revealed in Alice’s upcoming article. I like that “poetic justice-icing on the cake”! And I love see the “family” in action. Hope Bette’s appointment with the social worker goes well…that Mrs. Davis is a sneaky one….trying to trip Bette and all. Bette is so lucky to have James as her assistant…what about giving him the job to replace you, Bette? Hope your computer will behave and you will be able to post tomorrow. Thanks, J.
as much as this means coming to and end of this fantastic story. i cant wait for hellno to be taken down and just f***ing bitch slapped by our girls. argh. and cant take her. love the support of james and the tender love between b/t. thanks honey.
Ecellent as always….. But I am worried about one thing..Bette not be honest with Tina about being in the delivery room. It is going to come out and I think it would be better is it comes from Bette. This social worker sounds like she is on Helena’s payroll.(I hope not) But you are good with the twist.. Hope the puter is ok..and post as soon as you can..You know I love your writing..Thanks
thanks!
Good chapter. Damn this is so good and hope this Mrs. Davis not on Helena’s side. Good luck to Bette. Ok post soon please, thanks!
It seems like you’ve got Helena cooking on a spit roast, nothing like a slow roasting. Sounds like Mrs.Davis should be on there with her!! Lovin’ it. Hope the dogs disturb you, so we get an early chapter!!! love it
Helena is a bad, bad person; coals in her stocking for christmas. Evil thy name is Helena…and who is this Mrs. Davis? Another one of the evil one’s toadies? I promise, I’ve been a very good girl…another one today? ***making a shy smile…blinking my lashes*** Thanks, Jwet, for sharing this story.
I wonder what Helena is up to in the old building that Vince told Shane about. I wouldn’t be surprised if Mrs. Davis is on Helena’s payroll. I can’t wait to see how all this turns out.
Everything seems to be coming along nicely, hopefully the report with the social worker, especially when the news spills out about Helena, her mother is definitely not going to be pleased, with all the back handed things she has done, can’t wait to see what happens tommorrow, hope your computer isn’t playing up. Thanks for the great work. Keep it up.
good update
ummm..i hope everything went well and the social worker see a family in B&Ts house..can wait for more and Helena fucked…thanks :o)
Love it, loving it allllll. Can I just put my request in now before others have their go at it? Please ruin Helena and I mean the works; no money, stripped of the Peabody name and if she has to do jail time with Bertha has her cell mate. I’m all for it. I know you probably have this already worked out and all but man this would be awesome and believe me I’m not to proud to beg right now. So please pretty please with sugar on top. :-)
oh god..I can’t wait for Helena to get what is coming to her. J-hope you had a great turkey day and sorry that the snow hit you. Here we get crap..wet slush. give us more….soon
and the plot thinkens…..can it get much thicker??? keep writing. I’ll be reading.
Oor Shane is going to be the hero & get the dirty on the bitch. I hope also that Bette’s busy schedule does not go against her in the adoption
Wow Jwet…got caught up on one of my favorite stories and found intrigue, drama, hms, comedy and mystery all in one series. Now, if you can just do something about that pest Helena…I’ve got $5 on a hit woman who will smack her on her head everytime she does or says something mean spirited, could give her quite a headache.