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“That lady? That
doesn’t sound good.” Tina says to Irene.
“I don’t know she seemed nice enough. I thought I would give Bette a break though
and start dinner myself. Go out and join
her, this should take me another half hour or so.” Irene offers.
That was all Tina needed, she heads out to the patio. Sitting on the swing in the shade is Bette,
holding Anna out on her knees. It looks
to Tina as if Anna is fired up ready to go, bouncing up and down, bending her
knees as she is talking to Bette.
“There are my two favorite girls” Tina says approaching
Bette and Anna. “Hey Babe” Tina bends over and places a soft kiss on Bette’s
upturned cheek and then moves to Anna giving her gurgling kisses that buzz her
cheek making her giggle.
“Hey T, here we are.
Anna wants to go for a walk. We
were just talking about how she should sit here with me for a moment but I
don’t really think she’s too interested.” Bette says tilting her head to
indicate that Tina should sit down beside her.
Tina sitting down immediately Anna reaching for her as she
was trying to figure a way down from Bette’s grasp. “My she is fired up. She must have had a good nap to have this
much energy.” Tina says.
“No I think it was all the sugar she got while Mrs. Davis
was here.” Bette says making an observation.
“Oh so maybe we need to burn off a little energy huh?” Tina
asks just as Anna goes to throw herself down on Tina’s lap. Anna as if sensing that this may be a way to
her freedom, starts to wail, starting a little tantrum that Anna hopes will get
her wish.
“Wow I’m just glad she saved this for now. No telling what that
pulled this while she was here.” Bette says in a little louder voice to be
heard over Anna. To Anna “Keep going all
you want it still isn’t going to get you what you want.”
Tina tried not to laugh at the battle of wills going on
between Anna and Bette. In so many ways
they really were alike. “So how did it
go with the social worker?” Tina asks wanting to hear all about the visit.
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You write so damn well. Your stories are complex and detailed (and grown up). A pleasure to read. If you aren’t a writer by profession then your job must require quite a bit of writing. Keep it going, thx.
Great job, as always I hope you post a new chapter soon.
Wonderful as always. I look forward to each and every chapter. Can’t wait for the next one. Thanks!
In case I haven’t told you lately, your stories continue to be wonderful and satisfying. I appreciate the depth of characters who change and grow yet remain true to their essence. I trust you to handle nuanced details with drama, humor, sensuality and compassion and will follow you anywhere.
Get that bitch stitched up for good and let our loving couple find some tranquility in their life, coz it ain’t gonna happen while the Helamster is roaming the streets!! Great chapter mate!
oh why haven’t the rest of thought of james -glad you did–well i see someone else has thought like me–you are by far our best writer my question is how old are you? keep writing i want to see how it ends but i don’t want you to stop writing i look each day to see if you’ve posted an update makes my days brighter
J- keep it coming. I really don’t want the story to end but I know it must be getting close. you continue to keep me hooked…albeez..come along please
I know I have said this before, but yiur chapter just keeps getting better & better
hehe, today I saw the pics of LH and RS from the UK convention and RS seems really nice so I’m not in anti-dragon mood at this mo. but it’s only temporary, so please post soon.thanks!
*sigh* yu write so well. Can’t wait for the next chapters!!!! C’mon Peggy kicking her daughters arse(?)!! Hope the social worker is nice to Bette??!! Luv ya!! :D
I believe that Helene just stepped into a trap,between Grace,Shane.Vince and sam she will be in a big bear trap soon. Love how Tina is still the samart one. Bette sometimes cant see her hand in front of her face/. thanks
Why are you a writing machine? Do you ever sleep? Well, if not, don’t start now. (tee hee) Wow…Helena is ‘self-aggrandizing’ alright. What a fun word. The way you weave this web of a story continues to intrigue and delight me. Not that I require intrigue or delight or anything…I’m just sayin’.
It’s about flipping time Bette realised her replacement has been sat outside her office all this time! Give James the flipping promotion, he’s always been there to help Bette out, although who’s gonna be her assistant now? Let’s hope the social worker lady writes up a favourable report. I’m glad you’re being such a prolific writer and hope the dreaded writer’s block stays away and you keep updating reularly, always nice to have a new chapter. Thanking you!
great writing and awesome chappy. I can’t wait for this whole thing to unravel. I hope that Bette let’s James take her place. he is the one for the job. keep writing. I’ll be reading.
There’s no reason to get a swelled head, as I was just telling the truth about your writing talent. I loved how you had Tina bring Bette around to the conclusion of James as her replacement. Also glad that Bette is listening to her heart and not her head for a change. If after this story you don’t take a well deserved break, I’m sure everyone that reads you stories will be very happy to be able to read another one from you.
loved all your angles in this chapter, you are an amazing writer. Thanks for keeping this story so incredibly fun and interesting .
Helena seems to have just walked right into the trap set for her. So far so good! J, you’ve once again demonstrated how B & T complement each other by having Tina point James out to Bette. Bette certainly has her priorities right and hope all will go well with her adoption of Anna. Thanks for another great chapter.
fergz baby, you know what kind of day i had and i hurried when i saw it was jwet that had posted.j, you know you continue to captivate me with this story. i love the thought and emotions and dialogue you give us. thanks . can i just say again i hate hellno.
Wow this is gonna be so much fun to see Helena getting down. Love Bette and Tina, can’t wait to see we got for Helena. Ok post soon please, thanks!
i’m back and can comment now, love this story, i’m glad tina thought of james as replacement, he deserves it and i hope helena is totally hooked and ready to be eaten…i hope that davis lady will write a good review on bette…thanks
Hey, it’s not my fault that I’m paranoid! You’re the one making Helena so wacked that I’m not sure who I should trust, so I take the line from Xfiles….”trust no one”…..well, except for Bette and Tina and the framily. Like all the other commentors; I do appreciate your writing, it has an easy reading style. As for coffee, I do like my kona coffee….but I’ve been known to frequent Star Bucks often. How’s your plans for Hawaii coming along? Are you going to Island Hop? Thanks, Jwet. Your story is such a wonderful treat.
I don’t like the sound of the social worker I hope she isn’t being paid off by Helen-a. I’m looking forward to see how the plan goes.
WEll, obviously my ESP to the mutts didnt work!!! glad you enjoyed your sleep though, however will still be hoping for the early occassional wake up call from the mutts!!! looking forward to the next chapter