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From Afar
“Oh
your feet when you get something in your mind do you? Yes I would love to be there with you.”
Samantha says with a smile.
“Great I will have Charles here pick
you up.”
says as they pull up in front of Samantha’s apartment house.
***
Shane arrived at the house. She had a little difficulty finding the
address having made a few wrong turns, which added to her frustration. By the time she pulled up to the curb it had
been nearly an hour and a half since Vince’s call. Getting out of her truck she stood in front
of the house on the sidewalk looking around for any sign of life. The house seemed normal enough from the
outside. The street was an everyday
‘Leave it to Beaver’ kind of quiet neighborhood. It was a house of contemporary design
probably built in the sixties, painted in a washed out grey. From the outside Shane could see the house
had large windows opening in to the living room but the windows were covered
and dark. The front door was located on
a short opened porch with an angular roofline.
As Shane stood looking for Vince
wondering where he might be as she started to walk up the walk to the front
door. Just before she gets to the front
step which leads to the short porch Shane hears a whistle. Looking to her left the direction of the
whistle Shane sees Vince standing there near the corner of the house. Vince waves Shane to join him.
Quickly rounding the hedges Shane runs
over to Vince. “Hey man. Sorry it took me so long I just couldn’t get
her any faster.”
“It’s OK Shane our Chicky Pooh is
currently trying to pick Samantha up from work so we’re all clear.” Vince says
waving Shane to follow him around to the back.
“Thanks for coming so quick. I
don’t know how to describe this so I wanted you to see it yourself.”
“Hey I should be thanking you. At least I got a few hours of sleep. Have you gotten any sleep at all?” Shane asks
thinking she left him in
in the wee hours just this morning.
“Nah I’m off to shag sleep after we
finish up here. I’ve got the back door
open, just don’t touch anything. If you
do let me know so I can wipe it down.” Vince warns Shane before they walk in.
With that Vince leads the way as they
enter the house. The back door opened to
the kitchen. This room looked normal
enough with nothing out of place, clean and looking unused. The floor plan was open and from the kitchen
Shane could see into the living room.
The living room was shrouded in shadows from the curtains covering the
front window. Despite the coverings
enough light was coming through to illuminate the living room.
Vince walks straight through the
kitchen to the living room. The room is
devoid of furniture except for, one straight back chair in the middle of the
living room. Surrounding the chair are
multiple easels with portraits and candid photographs resting on them. Photographs and portraits also cover the
walls from ceiling to floor. Hundreds of
photographs are all that can be seen.
Shane is speechless as she looks
finally all that comes to her mind is “Oh My God!”
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what’s on the walls??!!! you are such a tease… ;) but we luv it! hehehe….. please post soon…..
Great ending tease… we are all trying to guess what’s on the wall (lol). I’m thinking photo’s of Bette or Anna…
I can’t win with you J. I catch up only to be left hanging. Not fair sweetie. So not fair…
j—killing me here. It’s freezing in this lovely state of ours and then you leave me out here to freeze. really though…thanks for the chapter ; ) and I am now ready for the next. I am glad I found you…. albeez..catch up ..slow poke!
The cliff hanger queen.Can’t believe that you did that. My two cents are on Bette being in the pictures. Thanks for posting
OH thats just creepy!!! ive got my own thoughts on who the photoes are of…but ill wait for your next great chapter and then pat myself on the back… sad arnt i???lol
Oh my, it’s Helena’s house and the walls are full of Picture of Tina… right? Great chapter, please post again soob
Oh sh*t!! What is it?!?!? Damn! That’s a great cliffhanger! OK, lemme guess… pictures of Bette, right? Helena is a deranged psycho and is obsessively, sickeningly ‘inlove’ with Bette, huh? (Hell, who can blame her?) ROTFLMAO!!! I can’t wait for the follow-up!
You’ve come up with a great hanger don’t leave us teetering to long.
Fabulous chapter, as always, looking forward to what happens in the next installment.
Jwet, I can’t believe you left us hanging there. I’m not sure about the pictures. My first thought was Bette, then maybe Tina, but with Helena anything is possible. Poor Samantha doesn’t realize that once Helena sets her sights on someone she is like a dog in heat, relentless. Can’t wait to see what happens next, but knowing you it will be great.
Wow!!! I guess you are going to make us wait to see these pictures… Great story.. But something tells me these pictures are of Bette not Tina or even the baby!!!! Please post soon. EXCELLENT as always….
j you are such a tease! What was that! I am going to pout until you post again.
Great chapter, but I really hope you post soon. Anxiously waiting for the next one.
my shot… pictures of pregnant women? please post soon
Even though you’re a terrible tease it was still a great chapter. I can’t wait for the next chapter which shouldn’t have such a big cliffhanger.
i think is pics of Bette..she is crazy enough to this..post soon thanks
I forgot to ask, what does HSM stand for? Helena sh*t moment?
I should have spoken my guess….I did guess pictures; I was thinking Tina and Anna; but like some of your other cmmmentors; may be pictures of Bette, but I won’t be surprise if it’s of Peggy and herself; when she was younger? Can’t wait. Do we get another one tomorrow? And the weekend? Something to keep us warm for the winter? Pretty please? Again, thanks for writing and sharing your vision of Bette and Tina.
j – fergz – so not speaking to either one of you. meetingn with out me. hmmph. it sounded so much fun. next time?j – you know i worship the ground you walk on so as always this was great. thanks.
Whose face is in the photographs? Its all builing up nicely Jwet. Thank you.
awesome chapter, that’s what i think about the pictures: 1. they are of Tina; 2. they are of bette; 3. they are of all pregnant women that helena decieved; 4. they are of helena as a porn star LOL
Hell fire, I hate cliff hangers! But I gotta feelin that this is real bad! SHSL id just sooo adorabel the way she looks out for James – without even realising it, she kind of mothering him – just sweet. Thank you so much for your kind words mate – I will definately be continuing – working on Part 2 to post early next week. I was totally blown away with the comments made.
you hook me every single chapter – I’m saying Tina and Anna???
DAMN you and your cliff hangers *whines* Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon? keep writing. I’ll be reading.
What the hell is Helena have on her wall, is picture of Bette right or Tina and Anna, Helena is sick and scary too. Ok post soon please, thanks!