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    From Afar

    Story written on December 11, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 139 – Elegant Simplicity

     

    They both lay in each other’s arms
    their closeness now as important to both of them as the heights they had
    climbed mere moments ago.  Feeling fully
    committed to each other they both marvel at the blessing of finding each other
    and knowing this was forever.

     

    Bette was lightly tracing Tina’s lips
    with her fingertips.  Stopping abruptly
    Bette looks to Tina.  “Tina I would love
    to wear your ring but I would like it to be our rings.  I don’t need them to be more fancy or
    glittery.  The rings we have are us.  They are the you and me we have grown
    into.  Our rings have an elegant
    simplicity to them that is their beauty that is the perfect symbolism of our
    love.  Can we use our old ring to
    represent our new commitment?”

     

    Tina once again felt the lump in her
    throat and her eyes get bright.  How
    could this woman continue to surprise her so? 
    “Really Babe.  That would be good
    for you.  It would be so wonderful for
    me.  I love our rings.” Tina is full of
    amazement and wonder.

     

    “Would you allow me to put your ring on
    you?” Bette asks hoping that Tina would agree.

     

    Excited Tina jumps up to retrieve her
    ring from her jewelry box.  Lifting up
    the lid Tina turns “Bette where’s your ring?”

     

    Bette get up herself and reaches for
    her top draw.  Pulling the drawer open
    Bette reaches to the back and pulls out a small beautifully painted lacquer
    box.  She hands the box to Tina.  Tina opens the box, looking in to see deep
    blue velvet lining with Bette’s ring sitting in the middle.  Tina looks at Bette with a silent question in
    her expression.  Bette smiles her
    brilliant smile of consent.  Tina pulls
    Bette ring out and sets the box down. 
    Never breaking her eye contact, Tina puts her hand out for Bette’s. 

     

    With a smile on her face and the joy of
    their love in her heart, Bette presents her left hand to Tina.  Tina slowly slides the ring to its rightful
    place on Bette’s ring finger.  Just
    before its slide completely in place, Tina says “Babe this is my heart
    forever.  I commit my love and my life to
    you.” Finishing her words Tina completes putting the ring in its place. 

     

    Bette smiles happy to have such a
    commitment from Tina.  Bette takes Tina
    hand and turns it over looking up from Tina’s hand to her eyes silently
    requesting Tina to open her hand.  With
    the calmest of voice, which belies the butterflies churning in Bette’s
    stomach  “May I?”

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    Comments

    1. Lovely, romantic, wonderful. You are a marvelous story teller and write with such a light touch – I can hear the dialogue. Bette will be going balistic very soon.

    2. I don’t deserve it but gladly accept that you would post another chapter. It is so simple and so gentle, perfect way for their recommitment. Though I have to admit, I wish this was would just be “their” chapter without any thoughts of the evil one, but it does fit in. Thanks, this was way better than the football games on today.

    8. with how serious alot of this story is youve just proved how mushy you can get!!!lol ok only teaseing it was very romantic and yeah i like the idea of useing the old rings….so on with the drama girl!!!

    11. fergz honey, drinks after last night? oh god. im still reeling but ill get you anything you want.j – thanks. the love and depth you let us see of them is breathtaking. makes ya want that same love and committment. thanks again.

    16. What an effect you are having on your readers. Tears, drinks and a call for more horizontal positioning, what a diverse group you appeal to…and how wrapped up into this story readers remain.

    21. Wow, I’m amazed that you always manage to leave us with a cliff-hanger. But, I have to say, I always keeps me wanting more. The detail you gave about the rings was very touching.I still look forward to how you will reveal the fact that Bette was in the delivery room.mb

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