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    From Afar

    Story written on December 11, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 139 – Elegant Simplicity

     

    Tina slowly opens uncurls her hand to
    reveal her ring in the palm.  Smiling as
    Bette picks up the ring, takes Tina’s left hand she slides the ring in
    place.  With releasing Tina’s hand “Tina
    I love you so.  Thanks you for wearing my
    ring once more.  I will never disappoint
    you again.  You have my promise, my heart
    and my life.” Bette barely gets life out before she is choking up with tears at
    the enormous faith that Tina is putting in her again.

     

    The poignancy of the moment is not lost
    on either of them.  Today that started as
    a normal day like many others was now ending with a life-altering commitment
    being made by both.  This was a
    commitment that had been waiting in the wings for days and months.  The fact that the predictable happen today
    was fate and unavoidable a perfect day to make this happen.  Sealing their promises with a kiss Bette
    pulls back and needs to laugh.  “Wow what
    a difference.”

     

    Tina not getting what Bette means
    “Difference?”

     

    “Yeah remember the last time it took me
    a week to get all my plans perfect before I could ask you and even then I almost
    pre-asked you before I asked.  I was so
    nervous about you rejecting me.” Bette is still laughing but laughing at
    herself.

     

    “Yeah you were pretty nervous.  I loved your plan though it was so romantic.”
    Tina defends Bette.

     

    Bette laughs to yourself at the memory
    and Tina defense of it.  But her mind
    quickly turns on something Tina said.  “Baby
    am I romantic enough for you these days? 
    It just seems like we never have the space or time alone and when we do
    we connect so deeply.  I just want you to
    be happy.” Bette asks suddenly concerned.

     

    “It would be nice to have a get away
    with you.  We can fulfill all my romantic
    needs then.  Let’s try to do something
    like that when things settle down a little. 
    Would that work for you?” Tina says with a smile at the thought.

     

    “Yeah it would.” Bette commits her mind
    already turning.

     

    ***

    Shane is pulling away from Helena‘s house.  She had Vince go out and get his camera so
    they could photograph the entire place. 
    Taking the memory stick, Shane was going to down load the photos so she
    could show Tina and Bette immediately. 
    This was something they had to know now.

     

    Dialing Bette’s cell Shane rolls to
    voicemail, “Bette, Shane I need to see you immediately.  Call me!” 

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    Comments

    1. Lovely, romantic, wonderful. You are a marvelous story teller and write with such a light touch – I can hear the dialogue. Bette will be going balistic very soon.

    2. I don’t deserve it but gladly accept that you would post another chapter. It is so simple and so gentle, perfect way for their recommitment. Though I have to admit, I wish this was would just be “their” chapter without any thoughts of the evil one, but it does fit in. Thanks, this was way better than the football games on today.

    8. with how serious alot of this story is youve just proved how mushy you can get!!!lol ok only teaseing it was very romantic and yeah i like the idea of useing the old rings….so on with the drama girl!!!

    11. fergz honey, drinks after last night? oh god. im still reeling but ill get you anything you want.j – thanks. the love and depth you let us see of them is breathtaking. makes ya want that same love and committment. thanks again.

    16. What an effect you are having on your readers. Tears, drinks and a call for more horizontal positioning, what a diverse group you appeal to…and how wrapped up into this story readers remain.

    21. Wow, I’m amazed that you always manage to leave us with a cliff-hanger. But, I have to say, I always keeps me wanting more. The detail you gave about the rings was very touching.I still look forward to how you will reveal the fact that Bette was in the delivery room.mb

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