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From Afar
Oh, thats OK. It just gave me a chance to review my notes from all the research I have been doing on Jackie Heartwell and the MYV Foundation. How was your workout? Alice says as she leans over and gives Dana a quick kiss on the cheek. Alice pauses as she inhales Dana, she loves this just worked out freshly showered smell that was uniquely Dana. MMmmmmm, you smell so good, I could eat you.
Al, were in public. Cool it. Dana says quickly and then Really? as the blush begins to move up her neck and onto her face.
Yeah really so what do you say we eat quickly? Alice now is getting excited.
OK, I know what Im getting. Youve been sitting here awhile have you picked something yet? Dana now says as she is in a hurry to get the meal ordered and delivered.
Wait.I wasnt looking at the menu. I was working. Alice responds in protest.
Well pick. What is it you were working on, I didnt think you were really going to write anything about that foundation. Werent you just trying to find out if Bette was shacking up that woman anyway? Dana asks as she watches Alice pour over the menu.
As soon as Alice realizes that Dana is right on the money she indignantly looks up to protest, Hey I will have you know that the interview was legitimate. I am just trying to figure out what to do with it. I mean my editor wants a certain kind of information
Yeah right Dana says cutting Alice off. Look at the menu not me, Im desert later.
Right Alice says looking back down at the menu.
Really Alice, do you think you will do an article on the foundation? I mean you have spent so much time on this you might as well get something out of it for work. I mean I know you have other projects to do but this isnt even on you list is it? Dana now asks as she is thinking back to their other conversation about Alices work.
You know yeah I should after all the work I have put into this. But there are so many questions. Like who put up the original money? I still dont know how Jackie and Bette really met or even if they really knew each other at Yale. Maybe I will do an article. Youre right I have spent so much time I really should get something out of it. Maybe I will. Alice says as she spots something on the menu that captures her eye.
Well are you ready to order so we can get out of here? Dana asks as she slides her leg up Alices under the table and looks at her with her eyebrow moving up and down as if it is attached to some string.
At this Alice just smiles that ***** smile of hers and suggests that they order take out.
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Tina made her way home quickly after her and Grace had concluded their mission for tonight. Tina was still running through in her head all the little techniques and tactics that Grace had shared with her tonight. What a wonderful woman was the thought that immediately came to mind. It suddenly hits her that Bette didnt call once. Well she must have been able to handle Anna. Tina thinks and then she mentally slaps her own wrists for even doubting Bettes abilities to handle a not so well Anna. As Tina pulls into the driveway she sees a low light in the living room with the rest of the house dark. Bette must have been able to get Anna down for the night then.
Walking into the house, Tina notices how quiet it is. As she walks in, looking for Bette she finds her on the living room couch. What she sees makes her heart melt. There lying on the couch with stray strands of hair pulled out as if they had a mind of their own and didnt want to be restrained by the hair tie anymore, was Bette. She was lying on her back on the couch with Anna on her chest. The two of them were fast asleep, with angelic expressions on both of their faces. Annas little hand was made into a fist as it wrapped around a few of the stray strands of Bettes hair. As Tina stood there with tears in her eyes at the vision in front of her, she just wished she had a camera to capture this picture forever.
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(72 votes, average: 4.35 out of 5)
I enjoyed the whole chapter.
I especially enjoyed the last paragraph, and Tina knows in her heart that memory will always be there to be called up at anytime.
I will catch the next chapter when you are able to bring it to us.
Have an enjoyable weekend yourself.
Excellent Job.
Omg…that last paragraph was just so f**king cute…Bette&Anna are just so sweet…::tears::…once again you have managed to reduce me to a heap of emotional mush with your story. So adorable, I LOVED IT!! I’m glad I could make you laugh…I agree with you, let’s just focus on Tina and her journey. It doesn’t matter how long it takes for you to get them together, just as long as you do get them together=P…then I could do my lil’ happy dance. Thanks again Jwet, you and your stories are truly amazing…please update soon=)
Ahh how adorable… get the camera total kodak moment. Great chapter as always.
I want to say I have enjoyed every story of yours. They just keep getting better and better. Thank you!
is it me, or are my comments not coming through? anyway, that was great!!
Tina doesn’t need a camera to capture the picture. She can have that picture forever by having Bette there with her and Anna forever. Jwet, I love this story. Thank you for writing it.
I love them all :) Bette is being so supportive and wonderful it’s great.
Jwet have i told you lately how much i LOVE this story of yours:)…..Well i do. Thanks for a sweet, heartwarming chapter. I agree with the rest total kodak moment…..
Sorry haven’t been able to get a comment out, time has been a factor. Love this direction you are taking us in. Wonderfully written.
Hey South Paw, I agree with you 100 percent.
I love Bette and Anna sleep on the couch, that is so cute. Post soon.
SO CUTE ! please keep writing. Love it
I would have gone to the next 7-11 store and got a disposable camera. Very nice…
Get the camera, get the camera. Don’t all new parents have cameras at the ready for those “kodak” moments?
I love how you end this chapter.
Get the camera! You’re going to have to wake them both when you put them to bed, anyway. (Psst….give Anna the crib and Bette the “big people” bed…the latter is better for sharing.)
Jwet!!! So So SO Cute!!! So sweeeet i love the ending. Are u gonna have more endings like this?!?! I hope so…!!! Love it.
Oh and i will try to post tomorrow. I have a bit of an accident with my finger(s) last week thus the delay… but they’re getting better now… so i’m typing a chapter for tomorrow…i mean maybe tomorrow.
I’m soo loving this ending!!! Have i told u that???
So sweet, good one.
Hey in the world of fiction Tina would have a camera in her purse. More soon!
What a great way to start my day. Hmm, Tina rush over to Shanes and get a camera :)
JWet,
Much gratitude for the personal feedback. It is great to know that you take the time to see what we all have to say.
I am split in two as I love your style; allowing the story to unfold before me at a natural pace yet am in dire need of finding out what the next chapter has in store.
Am glad that B & T are slowly rebuilding their individual self esteem and confidence such that the payoff will be the realisation that they are meant for each other. Only then will their relationship be renewed.
Thank you for taking me along on this ride.
that was really cute. i loved it.
awwww jwet, you certainly know how to end your chapters with major cuteness
Beautiful, your story has made my heart melt too!
Just wondering ,how many Moms have gone to sleep with a sick child on her, stomach. That is so tender.
my heart melted along with tina’s. jwet you seem to capture the true essence of the characters in your writing. very much enjoying this and can’t wait till sunday!
The last paragraph, wow, i would call this a “perfect picture moment” where you wish time could standstill.
Thank you and have a nice weekend.
Great update – loving it. Can’t wait for the next.
That was just precious…so sweet! Damn! where’s “Mark” when you really need him?! This chapter is just another notch in the awesome Jwet belt! Loved it…Thank you.
i’m going with the concesus get the camera. loved it!
SUCH A BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER…PLEASE POST SOON