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From Afar
Bette well see how much youre laughing at the end of the day. Helena says with all the venom she could muster in one sentence.
Bette just shook her head and thought Is that all she can come with? Bette herself had been through all the books the pervious day and came to the same conclusion that had always been there before. Some of Bette wondered what Helena was up too. Knowing that there is nothing wrong with the numbers what can she be after? Well I guess there is no other way of finding out. With that they all sat down waiting for Franklin to make his entrance. Once Franklin walked in the room is was as if the hounds had been let out for a fox hunt. The clamor in the room started and the different accountants began handing out spreadsheets and reviewing data. While the teams were busy, Bette and Franklin conversed on one side of the table and Helena sat preoccupied with herself on the other.
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God Dana this is awful my editor wants more. He liked what I had so far but felt that it was incomplete. Alice is whining into her phone as she talks to Dana. Sitting at her desk at the magazine her editor said he would nail her to the seat until she finished her article. She was on a deadline.
But Alice we are supposed to be going to that luncheon fundraiser for my mother. We cant miss it. Dana is emphatic with Alice now.
God Dana I know and its you whos supposed to be there not me. Im sure your mother wont miss me in the least. You know from the beginning this article about the MYV Foundation has been nothing but a pain in my *****. I mean I have more questions than answers and its beginning to really frustrate me. Alice is in full force whining now.
Well there you go include your questions and make the thing longer that way. Come on Alice youve got to get done and go to this thing with me I just hate being on display. You said you would help me. Dana says not accepting no for an answer from Alice.
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(66 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
Geez…what’s up Helena’s ass??!…Such hatred for Bette…I wonder what crap she’s gonna pull out of her arse to make Bette look bad during this audit…Tina…now there’s a smart gal…I can feel the wheels in her brain start turning…I think she suspects something…but by the looks of things, she’s happy with her revelations…wicked chapter Jwet=D…Please keep them coming!
Great job as always I just wish she would know about Bette’s involvment in the projest before she gets in too far and gets upset with Bette for not telling her..I know I worry alot…Posr soon you know I love this story.
Great installment. That *itch, Helena is up to something I can feel it. Tina better say yes, that way she gets some down tyme until she starts the new position and Bette will be put on administrative leave until the CAC sort the budget out. See I’ve got, both women free to frollick with Anna and each other. (A girl can dream, can’t she)! Jwet your stories make me smile when I read them, Thanks.
Have I told you that I appreciate how you have developed Tina as a career woman with a life of her own separate from Bette? I think it’s important to show that she has her own identity.
Thanks. It holds my interest.
10 chapters before the hot monkey sex????
Girl, you better make this career and audit s… compelling !!!!!
Thanks!
guess there was a flux finally got the story, loved the way you are going through it.
Nice to actually see the story. Thanks for this.
Good chapter. Keep coming I can’t wait to see what’s happen next. Post soon. Thank you!
this is possibly my fave fic ever. its just so well written and the plot’s intruiging without being tiring. I’m just hoping you’ve got a sequel planned ;-)
Oooops! the server has crashed and it has wipeout all the stories.
A small clich in the system hopefully!
Jwet, i’m sure it was superb as always will comment when the chapter is back online…
Thanks M.
what happened There was no story
I’m all for writers not spelling everything out and leaving a bit to the imagination, but I think perhaps I should add some limits to that thought. (There was board weirdness earlier; I hope Jwet checks in on her story.)
I believe that there must be a problem with the site as the discussion board isnt working
OMG I almost started to cry when I found the system had crashed. I can’t have my cawfee without this story. Now I’m going to go read it.
Thanks for the thoughts. On another note, there’s no story. From reading the comments I gather somethings wrong with the site. I hope you can repost it. I really do crave it…it’s part of my daily morning fix!
OK! It’s back up…Phew!
Oh God Jwet…I have a terrible feeling about this audit. Please…please prove me wrong!!!
I’m with Seahurst, I think Helena is planning something. This is a most excellent story, must continue!
WOW! Jwet Thank you I just worried about a minute ago the system is crashed Whoa OMG thank God is back well I’m just see what was gonna happen to TINA and Jackie thoughts a few more thing Question whoa jwet it’s getting me worried OMG LOL Thank you it’s really Beautiful Awesome writer are you Jwet.
I think Tina should reward Bette for being more open and honest. Perhaps a trip to the spa for a body wrap and an airbrush would be a nice gift.
If Bette is confident that the books are okay then the Auditors will have wasted their time but there is a but its Helena we are dealing with.. Alice is like a bloodhound dog she just doesn’t give up..mmm this article she is writing it will be very interesting to read.
Looking forward to next chapter.
Have a nice weekend.
Why thank you fair maiden,
I am chortling to myself thinking about you laughing at my comments.
So back to this chapter:
Brilliant, yet again a wonderfully plotted and convinced installment; artistic use of imagery and word play makes the events just jump off the page for the reader. Bravo *Claps wildly*.
Tina is making the right decision. Bette is doing all the right things for the right reasons. Alice is being Alice as usual (Thank the heavens). Dana is lunching with her mother (for real!!!). Anna is a babe.
As for today’s questions:
Has everyone at the CAC read Jenny’s carnival story? Does Franklin have a secret passion for clown shoes? When will Helena bring out her red nose and start to juggle Richard Prince big jars? Will Alice and Dana change into their Cagney and Lacey disguises? Does Oscar have his own range of hotdogs?
All these and more to be answered next time on “From Afarâ€.
Tune it at a screen near you.
Have a fabulous, fantastic, frolic and fun-filled weekend.
Your loyal Fan.
PS – am wetting my pants at knowing there is another chapter before you go.
Yay, she’s going to take the job…….yippeeee. What is that sceming Helena up to????
you kindding rigth? 5 chapters for first kiss??..anyway i hope tina not be confused about Bette as a lover and Bette just a friend cuzz shes seems more confortable with Bette as a friend and this is not the rigth way
Just waiting for the other shoe to drop. Alice is going to figure something out, I just know it!
GREAT CHAPTER & AS USUAL YOU WRITING IS EXCELLENT..PLEASE POST SOON
well the woman hunt has just started lets see what bette has to do to excape may be climb a tree or swim down a river????