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    From Afar

    Story written on May 17, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 46 – The Brass Ring

    Do what you want but I just dont think you will be as able to settle for less as time moves on. Girl you need to stop hesitating and grab that brass ring. Shane says all this with a shrug and was done with the subject, having said her peace. Shane signals this as she reaches for Anna to take her turn at playing with her.

    As Bette hands Anna over, she is deep in thought having heard Shanes meaning and know her friend meant only the best. The rest of Shanes visit was calm and friendly but neither said anything personal again, knowing they had reached the limit for one visit.

    Only after Bette had gotten Annas bath, rocked her to sleep and finally had her laying in her crib did her thoughts go once again to her friend Shane and their conversation. Bette was so happy this morning with Tina they had connected on the real feelings that flowed between the two of them. Despite the amazing connection with Tina this morning after they had parted all of Bettes fears returned. Bette had to admit to herself that she was afraid. This fear was a nagging voice in the back of Bettes mind that kept whispering it her You WILL ***** this up again. When you do you WILL loose it all.

    Bette had spent months trying to recover from the most devastating loss of her life. There was no amount of begging that Bette could do that would have brought Tina back to her once she had moved on with Helena. As Bette had rehashed this time and time again she came to some real conclusions. The fact that Tina and herself had relied on each other so much that the thought that the other would not be there never entered Bette mind. She doubts that it entered Tinas either and maybe that was the beginning of their downfall. The fact that they each had so totally taken the other for granted. The fact is this was the one factor that Bette believes started it all. Thinking that Tina would always be at her side no matter how Bette behaved entitled Bette to do so much and none of it was good. Her bad behavior when she came home in an awful mood, her ability to make Tina feel like a mental midget, her choices between family and work these are just a few of the examples of the kind of behavior that come to Bettes mind as she thinks about the positions and values that where her then. What evil had descended upon her that led her to believe that this behavior was acceptable? This complacency is the precursor, which set the stage for the events to follow. Like setting the mood, shading the scene this complacency set the tone in the harshest of lights. This complacency made the events to follow, the loss of their baby, their lack of communication, their falling out and finally Bettes infidelity almost seem predetermined as it all spiral to their final demise. This total and dismal failure that was their relationship was all brought about by the lynch pin of complacency. To this day Bette still believes in her heart that if they had not gotten complacent that they would still be together.

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    4. Jwet,
      Yep, another fine chapter posted. Many thanks as always. Another awesome and amazing piece of writing. I adored the fact that Tina is the one making all the forward moves while Bette is standing still. At least she is not keeping her distance and running away.
      Question time today:
      Where does Shane keep her light sabre? What colour is it> (Pink?? Or black with a little blonde butt??). What aphrodisiac had Bette included in her plate for Tina? And when did Bette get so domesticated. Did she use Tupperware containers or the plastic one you always keep from doggy bags? Where did Tina get the big Ka-wo-nas to kiss Bette? Who isn’t desperate for the next post. Dare you to say.
      Well, can’t wait until tomorrow but at least will have a goofy grin on my face fot he rest of the day. Cheers.
      Your Loyal Fan.

    6. Oh la la, Tina is being very forward very nice.
      Bette is being very attentive to Tina i love this new Bette.
      And Shane god she is Yoda…
      Thanks for the update Jwet.

    11. WOO-hoo!! You go TINA!! Bette, accept it and join in on the kiss!!

      “OK I have to admit I’m one of those lesbo types who have a tool belt and know how to use it. The hammer I have found is a great presuader. I have won many of differences of opinion on this project or that when I use it as a pointing aid in the course of the conversation that or putting my hands on my hips and sticking out the chest somehow that wins the day also”

      Wow, what a visual…::winkwink::=P

    12. Great imsight to what they are feeling but Shane is right Bette can’t be too afraid to feel. Don’t let her run she is so close to what they both want. Post soon Love your writing

    13. You’re up earlier than usual.

      Bette surprised…I hope it was a happy surprise.

      Good story telling – Bette needs to face her fears (gosh, is Star Wars starting already).

      Thanks for keeping up the story!

    15. a perfect description of the reasons for the breakdown of their relationship — entitlement and complacency — allowing for hurtful words and actions — but they are wiser and the fear and wariness will actually help this from reocurring — come on, they can do it — the spontaneous kiss with perfect — Bette’s softness and Tina’s strengths were beautifully depicted — thanks

    16. Not simplistic, not overly sweet but textured, thoughtful, heartwarming and real. These two have a real relationship with you. I don’t often comment but I read and admire every post.

    18. you go girl!!!noone is to much tired for Bette..lol..i hope they finaly work things out for ever..they need each other and i´m glad Bette share those fears with Shane but also she has to do the same thing to Tina..great update post soon

    19. I look forward to this story every day. I think it is time for Bette and Tina to get back together, don’t you? Bette has changed so much, she is a better person and definitely relationship material. Thanks and post soon.

    22. well, if you’ve finish writing till 50++ episodes, why don’t you just post more than once in a day?.. i’m sure everyone else wouldn’t mind! =P

    24. Jwet…..I just came on board with your story. I’ve read it in it’s entirity over the past couple of days. I’m not sure why I missed it up till now. Excellent! Can’t wait for your next post!

    25. Finally Tina makes the first move and gives Bette a kiss. These two are so cute together…Bette needs to take a chance and Tina needs to let her guard down more.

    26. Hey Jwet Whoa! Okay I’m still waiting LOL it’s getting better now that Tina kiss Bette Whoa! that’s a good seine thank you jwet I’m really happy to read more of you’re Beautiful Awesome Story I’m love it Please post soon.

    27. Woo-hoo!!! Feel *that*, Bette!!! That was soooooo…umph!!! G-o-o-o-o-o-o-d-d!!!! I hope Bette can let go of those doubts and that both of them will continue in comunicating openly w/each other. That was soooo g-o-o-o-o-d!!! Thanks!

    29. “Slowly she turned, step by step…inch by inch…kiss by kiss…she rounded the couch and headed toward the back bedroom with Tina in her arms…
      What? Oh, sorry…I was dreaming.

    30. Sweet savoring kiss. Hot dang… OK so I slept in this morning after a rough night with the ole broken arm. I knew I’d feel better once I read you story. I am such an addict for this. I swear, if only you were a writer for the show. Whew..

    31. It’s a good thing that this is not a book… because I prolly wouldnt eat or sleep and, truth be told, just might not have sex until I was finished reading the whole thing…. hehe
      Love the story, more please!

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