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    From Afar

    Story written on May 19, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 48 – Written All Over

    Oh yes quite surprised and very pleased. Bette quickly reassures Franklin.

    Then I think you need to think it over and give your response in a few days.. OK? Franklin now looks at Bette and sees that they are on the same page.

    Bette now gets up and Franklin does the same. Thank you Bette says as she takes Franklins hand and shakes it Thanks for all the kind words and warm compliments. And thank you for the wonderful offer. I will get back to you very soon.

    With that Bette exits Franklins office with an indistinctly astonished look on her face that once out in the hall James has no clue how to read but assumes the worst.

    Oh My God, he fired you! James says as soon as he sees Bette.

    ***

    Kit was sitting at a table near the windows at the Planet it was late in the afternoon and the lunch crowd was pretty much gone for the day. Kit was taking this time to go through the inventory of supplies for the kitchen and put together her restocking order before she got caught up with the dinner crowd. Things at the Planet were working out nicely for her now that she got this system down and she stuck to it. It was when she let a few days go by that things began to take on that huge mountain of a task feel. Kit was just finishing up her paperwork and thinking about a break when Bette walked in through the front door.

    Hey baby sis what brings you by? Kit says happy to see her.

    Bette walks up and gives Kit a hug hello as Kit starts to get up from her chair. Hey Kit, no sit I was just coming to see how you are doing. Bette said as she slides into the chair across from Kit. Smiling at Kit she looks around the Planet You know I dont know if I tell you enough just how impressed I am with what you are doing here. This place is so much lighter and airy you know festive then before. It really is you. Bette says all this as she sees the joy in Kits face at the recognition.

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    1. Wow this was a great chapter. Your character development, plot development and pace are perfectly tymed. Love this story (starting to love it more than S2). I’m so glad Bette went to see Kit before talking to Tina. Their conversation was great and so much needed. This should give Bette the clarity she needs and the confidence to welcome Tina’s opinion and presence in her life. Just wonderful — (Thanks for offering to e-chat with me, I’ll email soon).

    3. yeah I bet everyone in the planet know when one of them walks in. Anyways, I’m glad she is telling tina first instead of kit. Lets see what tina thinks of franklins nice play.

    6. The comments are excellent but nothing surpasses the creative tale you are telling. It is such a complete work, rich storylines, realistic dialogue and emotion that just hangs in your throat. Fine job with this chapter and the story at-large.

    7. I really like this new Bette. She is so open. Talking to Tina first about the new position, the old Bette would have accepted the job then told Tina about. This new Bette is GREAT!!!

    11. Excellent chapter as always. Looking forward to the conversation with Tina and Bette. You are a wonderful story teller! Thanks for this!

    12. Busted! You mean Bette really blushes? I’m shocked!

      I was hoping Bette talk to Tina about the new position. They are sharing/growing together.

      I will need to find another word for “great” story!

      Thanks!

      Now, off to sleep land for me!

    14. Bette listen to your big sis..she has to forget the pass and move on..Tina loves her and vice versa..that is no place to fear..i love it..go on soon

    15. Absouletly loving the continuation of the story, let us get them truly back together soon, as both know that is what they want. Looking forward to your next chapter post it soon please.

    18. Still wonderful Story jwet I’m still waiting the loving jwet for B&T I know you tell about page 53 I think LOL funny oh I’m just happy really happy about you’re Awesome writing I don’t need to Complain about this I’m just so excited to read Beautiful as ALWAYS Jwet thank you keep it going Please post soon I know you did THANK YOU SO MUCH I’m love it.

    19. JWet,
      Yea, girl, look like there are fun times ahead for Bette and Tina. Love the way you have Kit showing Bette the wood from the trees.
      It is about time that Bette picks up on the vibes that have been emanating from Tina for a while now. First Shane and now Kit have told her to trust in her emotions and Tina’s however once bitten and twice shy is how Bette feels. I can totally relate to the nervousness Bette feels. Hopefully being told the same message from her sister and trusted friend will knock the sense up inside her head. Can’t wait to get Tina’s view of events.
      This is such a magnificent and captivating tale. It involves the audience and has taken them on an adventure which you nurtured and developed brilliant.
      Mucho Kudos to you.
      Riddles for today:
      Will Bette’s Alpha mode traits come back given this new exciting opportunity? Is Franklin trying to do a ‘Tiger Woods’ on the golf course? (As if). When did Kit study under Yoda? Does Shane know? Did Bette tell James about her conversation with Franklin or is the poor boy still hanging on? Why does the water always go down the plug hole in the one direction?
      Roll on tomorrow coz I want to know what Tina will say and do once she hears Bette’s news. Will this be a mutual decision???
      You Loyal Fan
      PS – will email you one of these fine days. Promise.

    20. Morning Jwet. I read your reply and I should have known better than to take a sip of coffee. Took me a while to get it off that laptop from laughing so hard. No we didn’t have any snow here in North Carolina. So I bounced off the roof when the ladder went bye-bye and landed on a wooded deck on top of said ladder. It was rather embarrassing b/c I’m retired from police, fire and rescue. So as the mophine kicked in that’s what I told them. Looking for Santa. Being left handed it sucked. While drippling soup down my chest trying to figure out how the hell right handed ppl eat like this. Brushing my face missing my mouth was fun too. So after telling you my fun story. Now you know why I love your chapters so much. It’s all I have until I recover. Sit and read and dream of finding that same kid of love again. You give me hope. :)

    21. Will Franklin be getting the time to work on his golf game or even golf swing….Bette listen to your big sister, sometimes they are right and who wouldn’t be glowing or blushing if they were enterting into a relationship with one Ms T Kennard…
      Thanks for the update Jwet.

    22. Yes, a visual…::winkwink::…lol…I’m glad I could make you laugh! Awesome chapter Jwet, as always! Hopefully Kit got through to Bette and what she told Bette sunk into her brain. More, we need more…pretty please, with sugar on top!!

    23. Both Bette and Tina are offered high powered highly responsible positions. What’s going to happen with little Anna? Who’s minding the baby? Franklin wants to step away for more time with his family. Maybe Bette should heed his comments and do likewise.
      I read this as a transition chapter to the next phase in their relationship. I’m liking where this is going and only a little worried that the ‘foundation/Jackie’ shoe will fall and Tina will discover Bette’s role in her new career. I hope not, they are doing so well.
      Looking forward to the next chapter and really, they are getting along so famously, the sex can wait until they are really solid. You are entertaining us very well with their gradual courtship.
      Thank you!

    24. Good chapter. Bette and Kit have a little sisters talk is very good. Now it’s time for Bette and Tina have a little talk and see how thing go. Post soon, thanks!

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